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Reviewed By: feralfantom On: May 25, 2004 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. Very believable (in the world of Inuyasha) and incredibly enjoyable. I look forward to reading the concluding chapters. Well done! P.S. I put a 9/10 for the Style of Writing only because the timeline of the last chapter was a little hard to follow. But maybe that was just me. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Val-drianth On: May 25, 2004 04:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay wonderful update. I was getting a little depressed that Inu Yasha and Kagome couldn't have their own baby, but you made up for it with all the pretty hanyou babies!! And it looks like they'll be having their own after all. yay! Update soon, but not too soon. I dont wanna miss anything when i leave for vacation.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 02:38 PDT
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wow, that was such a good chapter. so many kids! i had a hard time keeping them all strait. i can't wait to see what happens. the fetility doctor was so funny. can we hear more about Sess and Rin? it doesn't have to be too much, maybe half a chapter or so? can't wait to hear what happens! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Ravenna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 02:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i really really like this story. I am hooked but i have one problem. You just killed two of my story ideas! ^_^ I am working on a story and had planned on Kagome being the descendant of Miroku and Sango. *sigh* Oh well i'll just have to think of something else. ^_^ I am so glad you put this story up and i'm kinda sad it's going to end in a few more chapters. Thank you for writing it. BTW the enjoyment factor should be about 1000 or so 10 does not do it justice.
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Title: A wonderful epic!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've kept me up until nearly 2am on a work night, reading your wonderful tale. Love the complex characterization, the lovely attention to detail, and the faithful depiction of characters. You've told a great story, and I can't wait to see how it all wraps up with Kagome's reunion with her Mama. Fabulous Inuyasha novel *clap*clap*clap*
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It truley is amazing the way in which you write your story. Even after 35 chapters, you still amaze me with youe emence writing talents. I must reafirm my beliefs that you are writing the best piece of fiction I have ever read. I hope some day the right person reads this and decides to partner with you in order to create an Inuyasha spin off based on your story. I must say that I would be just as loyal a fan to any future projects involving you as the writer as I am with Inuyasha and this story.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 18:16 PDT
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this is a great story please update soon
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 24, 2004 16:13 PDT
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Excellent transition from fudal to modern Japan. Of course, I miss the fluffy emotional style of previous chapters but that style would not be appropriate for covering a huge4 swath of time. Interesting turn of events with the sterility problem and the adoption of all the pups. Nice creative idea. I can't wait for the new baby, the reunion, and of course, more fluff. I'm glad the #1 pup (can't remember how to spell his name) is still with them. Thanks for writing such an awsome story!!! I live for each update.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:54 PDT
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I can't wait for more!!!! This is probably the most real world based fanfics I've read and one of the best. You are amazing. MORE! MORE I SAY!!!! Thankyou for writing such a beautiful story.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: May 24, 2004 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...why am i crying??? lol I absolutely LOVED this chapter!! its getting harder to wait for the end! but i'll wait...i've been doing it for so long that I'm used to it. you're such an awesome author, and I mean that! ^_~
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 24, 2004 14:45 PDT
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Great Chapter.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I'm Patricia's husband. Since returning from Iraq I have read this story and loved it. Reminds me of my Post Vietnam days so long ago.
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Reviewed By: Malific [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Not much to say, I'ev been loving the whole story and this chapter is no exception. On a diferetn note though, quit telling us how many chapters are left! Write till it's done and stop filling me with dread about when I can't read any more!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: May 24, 2004 11:34 PDT
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OMG!!! that was beyond AWESOME!!!!!! i love this chapter so much! the detail you put into was AMAZING! i look foward to seeing moree!:)
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Title: AHHH!!!
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama3 On: May 24, 2004 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious! all the historical facts were indeed correct!!! Well, from what i can tell, i knew about the Meiji restoration and from what i can tell, everything else was so believable! WOWSA! Continue with the wonderful work!! I hope to see what else you have in store for us!!!!!
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