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Reviewed By: Wolf Girl (Azure) On: June 15, 2004 08:47 PDT
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God, this is a great fanfic. Have I mentioned that lately? I really, really, hope Kagome isn't about to die from this pregnancy. Can we see a little more Rin and Sesshomaru? their kids havn't made an appearance yet, and maybe Fluffy's full Youkai heir could have a chat with Mirouku about birth parents, heh?
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Reviewed By: Sara-sama On: June 14, 2004 20:02 PDT
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Nice chapter! I'm glad to see that Kagome's pregnancy is doing better, but I think this baby will be born early. Sess and Inuyasha are still funny as can be, with their egos! I don't know what it is, but I don't like the way that the other kids are acting about Inuyasha and Kagome's pregnancy - sure, this will be the first child Kagome has actually bore, but she loves all the kids the same, even if they weren't hers and Inuyasha's! Can't wait to read more!! Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 14:04 PDT
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i liked that chapter. i'm glad that you're still writing but it saddens me to know that each time an egerly awated chapter is posted it brings us closer and closer to the end of this story and that makes me sad. this story is so good. i almost wish it never ends, but i suppose that's imposible. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story its very long.....lol. took me 2 months to finish it.... o boy this is gonna take awhile, but good story
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Title: Compliment
Reviewed By: Dean T. On: June 14, 2004 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoy stories like yours. They're rare, long, and hard to stop reading. Hope to read other fics like this from you. No pressure.
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 On: June 14, 2004 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy love this story! I have never read anything like it before. And I hope you hurry up and update this story.
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Reviewed By: Diamond Black On: June 14, 2004 08:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an absolutely amazing story-teller!!!!! This is without doubt one of the best Inuyasha fanfics I've ever read (and thats saying quite a lot)!! I've fallen in love with each of your characters (you portrayed Inuyasha exactly the way I do in my mind. he truly is a fluffy puppy inside, he just gotz rough edges), especially Yukio. I adore him!! It just makes me wanna zap myself in Inuyasha-fanfic-world and steal him and his lovable inu-hanyouness for myself ^__^...I'm excited to see what he'll do to the 'good doctor', and knowing him it'll be a helluva lot of fun to read. bwahahahaha. You go, Yukio!!! I congratulate you on this awesome fanfiction, and I hope for an update soon! *raises goblet in terri's honor*
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Title: dragoninu
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 01:49 PDT
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Also Dragoninu2, I just wanted to let you know, once more how much I enjoy this story! ! ! Oooh! I love every minute of it. *Sigh* As long as you'll write. . .I'll be reading. Thanks so much for your story ! ! !
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Reviewed By: PJ On: June 14, 2004 00:37 PDT
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This is such a great story!! I love the whole thing and can't really pick out anything I like best because I like it all. Everytime you update I usually go back a read parts of it again. I wonder if Inuyasha's son Miroku know that him wanting his biological mother to aknowledge him really hurts Kagome. Is not his human mother good enough? I bet that is what Kagome thinks sometimes. I also know she loves all of her children but some of what she said kind of surprised me I am glad Inuyasha set her straight. He will not treat it any differently I hope Kagome doesn't either. I know she is pregnant and stuff so sometimes 'thinking totally straight' doesn't happen due to hormones, etc but she better realize that treating this baby any different would be a no no. Of course it might be raise a bit different since it is modern times and not the fuedal era but still. Anyway great story keep updating!!!! Will Kagome see her friends soon?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 00:10 PDT
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this is a great fanfi please update soon
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Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: June 13, 2004 22:47 PDT
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Yet another WONDERFUL chapter. I can't even say how thrilled I am that this story is wrapping in such a fulfilling way, every possible loose end neatly tied!! The one thing I must say about the latest chapter is my utter fasination that although the story is wrapping it has not lost (even in the smallest measurement) any of its power, interest, or ability to captivate.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 13, 2004 21:52 PDT
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Getting home late. Tired. Time for bed. Check email. Oooh, a new chapter of The Lucky Ones. Suddenly not tired anymore. Happy, happy reading time. Heh. Thanks for writing this great story. Just like Inuyasha, I'm excited about the pregnancy but miss the smut. Still nervous about the dragon hanyou's vision. Keeping fingers crossed for a good outcome.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 13, 2004 20:29 PDT
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You can do no wrong with this story!!! I love this whole conflict we're having with the doctor. She should know better than to mess with the most powerful family in Japan! I can't wait to see what Yukio does about it. I feel so sorry for their son Miroku. His mother is a horrible person, and Sesshoumaru should have chose someone else to have full blooded demon children by. By the way, how did Rin handle that??? I'm a jealous person and I don't see how she can live with knowing that this witch has been with her mate in that way. But they should really talk to Miroku about how he's feeling. He should know they would never dis-own him or anything, they did name him after one of their dearest friends. That was also sad to hear about Kagome and Inuyasha planning to kill themselves. It's so sad, even if they don't have children they would still have each other. But they have lived full long lives. I love the way Inuyasha talks about how no one comes sniffing around his girls! So cute!!! I wonder if the baby will be born with doggie ears!!! And Kagome will have to get it a big dog shirt!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, is it coming soon!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 20:26 PDT
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well I highly agree about the paris hilton coment lol. How many more chapters are left???
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: June 13, 2004 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still good. Kick that doctor's ass Urrah Semper Fidelis
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