| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: June 30, 2004 22:24 PDT
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Yet another astounding chapter! Each time I read a chapter I fall in love with the characters all over again, and each time I pray that it's not the last. So far my prayers have been answered... hope they will continue to be for a little while more! Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 21:11 PDT
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wow, that was long. but still, very well written. where you are taking this story is very imaginative. you really put a lot of thought into what's going on and keep up with motifs. i can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 30, 2004 19:44 PDT
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Another wonderful chapter. it's amazing how you can wrap up so many story lines and still leave me on the edge of my seat. The dragon's visions are really worrying me. aaagh! I will, as usual, be waiting breathlessly for the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:43 PDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: June 30, 2004 17:48 PDT
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i loved this chapter! it really showed what a wonderful supporting family they are and what great parents kagome and inuyasha are :)
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Reviewed By: inu.ob On: June 30, 2004 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it... still! Awesome story, I was pulled away from the computer multiple times while reading chapter 40 but that didn't stop me from continuing to read it. Hope to see more chapters up soon! Now i'm off to discover how cameras can be hooked up to computers, it's all SO confusing! :P Write again soon! inuyasha_obsession (inu.ob)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 30, 2004 12:07 PDT
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Nice chapter. Poor Miroku but maybe now he will finally understand that they will love him unconditionally. Great chapter. Love the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Valdrianth Raptor On: June 30, 2004 11:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usually good chapter. But we knew inu yasha wouldn't reject him. I'm glad to see more of Tomo in this chapter. i had been interested in him sense you first introduced him. If you don't mind I would like to draw a picture of him, and it would help if you sent me a detail description of him so I get him right. If that's cool with you. My email is aslan_04@yahoo.com . If you send me a good description I'll contact you when I'm done with the image and post it on my deviantart page. valdriant.deviantart.com I hope to hear from you soon. And I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 11:17 PDT
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Awwwww. im so glad u didnt turn miroku evil and all that. i was dreading u doing that. make sure he doesn't do that again. im glad u updated though. i thought u'd died and we wouldn't get nemore chapters (and id be sad that u died of course) update soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 30, 2004 11:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I should take lessons from you, I really should. That was another amazing chapter, it's like they just roll off of you like magic. I told you that I nominated your fic to be a featured fanfiction and I made a friend in one of forums and she's just starting to read fanfiction and asking me for some links to good stories. Of course your had to be one of them. I'm thinking that doctor is the bad thing Tetsu saw in his vision? And he's a baboon youkai, that could a be a link to Naraku. I don't like that doctor he was arrogant, you can just tell. I'm happy Miroku is getting some help and that he came to his senses. Update soon please!!!!!
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Title: Another wonderful chapter
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you deliver some really wonderful, meaty emotional stuff in this chapter. Miroku's realization and regrets about what happened, his repentance, and his reconciliation with his parents and sibs...all beautifully written and characterized, as always. And once again, I commend you for not taking the easy way out, though I'm a bit bemused trying to picture a therapist who caters to hanyou. ::grin:: But I agree that Miroku's problems aren't something that a simple hug (or fist-in-face, if you're Yukio) can cure. Anyhow, great job as always, and I eagerly await the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Aitu- Not signed in On: June 30, 2004 10:34 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Your story is still utterly amazing since it has been since chapter one. Every chapter captures every character and everyone's emotion so perfectly. I feel bad for not reviewing after every single chapter so feel free to beat me like a rented mule right now! lol Just know that I truely appreciate and enjoy every single word that you write. I cannot wait to read more! So I get the feeling that this doctor is going to be yet another round of trouble that the Inuyasha Family will have to deal with? UT-OH! Keep up the amazing work that you have continually kept up in all preceeding chapters. --Aitu (PS- I agree with AutumnFire, is Yukio going to get a 2nd mate? hehehe PSS- AutumnFire that's my name, with out the fire part of course, =P)
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Reviewed By: AutumnFire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, shiiiiiiiiiiii.... You just HAD to do it, didn't you? You drop the not-so-subtle hints of upcoming events, and have us screaming, "No! Don't trust that one! Something bad is gonna happen!" That, my dear, is when you KNOW you're a WRITER. When you make the reader feel deeply about your story and the characters. Now excuse me while I go away to recover from my embarassment over yelling at the computer while reading the latest chapter. *grumble-Damn baboon hanyou* AutumnFire (Who wants to know if Yukio will ever take a second mate like IY & Sess' dad did.)
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 09:18 PDT
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You have no idea how much I look forward to your updates. The story is amazing and I've loved every moment of reading it. I hope it has a happy ending, though. Unfortunately, you kinda have me scared with the fact that um... Shoot, I forgot his name, the dragon hanyou, I can't help but wonder if he saw something really horrible when he touched Kagome. The baby might be born alive but that dosen't mean Kagome survives the birth. And if Kagome dies, so does Inuyasha. I just kinda hope my instincts are wrong on that one. I'd rather see Kagome and Inuyasha get to be parents to an infant again than die. Dunno, maybe it's just me. Hopefully it's not and you'll write it that way. Write more when you can! I can't wait to read it!!!
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: June 30, 2004 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something has been bugging me for a while.. Are the necklaces Inu Yasha gave to his daughters permament attachments that they cannot remove or no??????????????? Ah, still good. Semper Fidelis Brigadier General Thomas B. Golladay jr USMC(ret) P.S. I've been into anime longer than most of you younsters have been alive.
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