| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad Inu didn't rip that stupid little pup to pieces. Although he would have deserved it... you address a very interesting issue here... the feelings of adoted children when it comes to their parents 'biological' children. My oldest sister is adopted, and when we were little there was a great deal of unrest and rivalry in our house. She was angry when my other sister and I were bory for the very same reason's your inu-hanyou was... the fear of being replaced with something that meant more to the parents than a 'foundling child'. Brilliant. Bravo Terri. Kanzen ne Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 08:11 PDT
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i'm guessing that tetsu knows something and isn't tellin anyone. I can't wait to see what happens. This is like two stories in one :). I'll be waiting for the next chap.
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: June 30, 2004 07:20 PDT
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Oh my god... Poor Miroku.. I couldn't help but cry when he and Tomo were discussing their parents, and I was moved when Inuyasha held him. But, uh-oh, who is the baboon??? I'm a little bit nervous to find out.. But now I get why Tetsu is so stressed. Anyway, another excellent chapter, definetly worth the wait. But please, update soon! I can't stand suspense! hehe
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Reviewed By: GunnerYunaGirl On: June 30, 2004 06:51 PDT
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I loved these past few chapters - very entertaining and probably my favourite so far. Keep it up! Although, I have to comment on one technical error. When referring to Inuyasha and Miroku as "two inus", I have to point out a mistake. In japanese, you don't add plurals like in english, so it would be "two inu", not "two inus".
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Reviewed By: wiket On: June 30, 2004 01:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. Goodness. That was good. Extremely so. Update, please update. Please?!? With a fresh, big, red, juicy bing cherry on top??? (Nooo...not the stinkin' preserved ones! ) Love your style, and how you balance all the story elements...makes for really engaging reading. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 29, 2004 21:15 PDT
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I hope you don't mind, but I nominated your fic to be a featured fanfiction.
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Title: OUTSTANDING
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 15:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear terri... this is by far the best fiction i have read in weeks. It has taken me four days to read the entire thing, but it was so worth it. Now I am anxiously awaiting your next update... it can only get better. Thank you so much for allowing me to archive a link to this GREAT fiction on my website. It derserves to get noticed by as many people as possible. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. God Bless. Kanzen ne Tsuki
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Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: Haunt On: June 28, 2004 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! This fic is absolutely AWESOME. I love this idea and I adore your style. This should be the end of the series. Keep it up, and do not change a thing about it! It's just beautiful!
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Title: Somebody bring me my tissues!!
Reviewed By: tiranth@yahoo.com On: June 28, 2004 12:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I am so in love with this fic. You're making me laugh, cry, get angry...all those things I love about a fic. Everytime you mention Sai and (oh for the love of pete...) the little fox that died protecting Kag, I just get shivers and tears come to my eyes. I love Tetsu. I bow down to your writing skills. I tell you I am recommending this to ALL of my friends and I thank DelKaidin so much for pointing me to your story. I can't wait to see how this ends and I hope Miroku comes to his senses! Thank you soo much for writing this and sharing it with us. Tir (tiranth@yahoo.com)
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Title: the rebuttal chapter
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:46 PDT
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I am just getting up to here with my reading... btw... this is one of the very best IY stories on the net. Flamers be damned. Write your fiction anyway you want to, terri. It is YOUR concept... YOUR story... and its YOUR brain child. I have been watching the newer episodes of the Anime and it is showing a more amiable Inuyasha and a more affectionate relationship between him and Kagome. I don't find that he is out of character at all. I think you have taken his character and simply fleshed it out and made him more REAL. More Human and less demon. I like it. Keep up the great work. The story is FABULOUS. Kanzen ne Tsuki
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Reviewed By: una On: June 26, 2004 00:42 PDT
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The more I read this fic the more I like it! Miroku has deffinately flipped ne? I look forward to reading more!
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Title: This is at least my third read-through
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 13:32 PDT
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I realized I never mentioned how much I loved the mental image that Inuyasha's statement conjured up: "...I even designed a couple of animal habitats for zoos. Did one for Australia Zoo last year. That Crocodile Hunter guy is as crazy in person as he is on TV."
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Reviewed By: darkempereror not signed in On: June 22, 2004 20:12 PDT
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Huh... you've done it again! I expected something with Miroku, but whoa not so much or so fast! Or atleast so fast concerning the story time. You're story is amazing! You can actually make us feel for the characters, which doesn't happen in the show or the manga. But yours actually makes us like, and hate and luv the characters seperately! You are an amzing writer. Nothing but pure perfection as far as the fic goes so far. Don't make the story a sad ending. And don't tell me you didn't have depressing plans. Tetsu's Sight told us the baby was born alive, but you described it like he held back Information, and that it wasn't good. *glares* NO depression, means complete and wonderul joy for the fic.
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! I've been going ona reading spree. your story makes me wanna laugh and cry. its so like an emotional roller coaster. its great. i luv how you put the story together and how it all falls into place. jsut one question though....you live in canada? or are you just talking bout canada for canada's sake? update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Erika On: June 22, 2004 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read!!! I really like your style of writing. I also enjoyed the story very much, I think that if they ever need to do another line of comics with what happens to inuyasha and kagome after everything that happened they would have to use your story. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read what happens next!!!!!
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