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Title: omg!!!!
Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: July 17, 2004 15:11 PDT
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omg that was such a wonderful chapter!! please dont let them dieeeeee
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 11:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter, really can't wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very thrilling chapter that one. You really know how to scare us don't ye? There was a time when I thought Inuyasha was being INuyasha getting pissy at the younger doctor like that, but after that guy walked in like he was going to the movies with a date and started making very bad calls, even i could tell they were bad calls, thats when Inuyahsa should have started sharpening ihis claws. On him. Jerk-off that the guy was. Whats the line...? "Burn in hell, Dr. Hatori(jr.)."
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 07:06 PDT
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Holy shit, this was intense. I read it this morning before coffee, and I almost lost it. Dr. Hattori Senior may be worrying about a lawsuit, but Taro should be worrying about ending up as little baboon chunks. Interesting use of Tenseiga; instead of using it on Kagome Sess gave it to Inuyasha. Waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter!
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Title: /sniff/
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 06:48 PDT
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ok, ok, i was totally wrong in what I thought was gonna happen... which is a GOOD thing.. i hate predictability. lol.. but OMG! KAGOMEEEEEE!!!!! *^_^ PLEASE DON'T KILL 'EM! Caliko
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 17, 2004 06:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey don't stop at the halfway mark, it was getting good.
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish (not logged on) On: July 17, 2004 06:38 PDT
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ooooo! the suspense is killing meeeeee!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 02:33 PDT
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oh my god. i would have cried if i was not over run with worry. that was the most susspensfull chapter i have ever read. i knew that younger doc was evil. that bleep bleepidy bleep bleep. grr. so many emotions. my my parshally inebrated and tired bdy can bairly contain them. i can't believe how good of a writer you are. if you don't already, i sugest a carrier in writing. i'd sertainly read your books. poor Yukio. having to deal with that. oh please let them be alright. i can't wait to hear what the pup looks like. he must be adorable. please let him have cute little white and black puppy ears. oh those docs are so going to get it. all three of them. i can't believe that the female doc would recommend an ass like that. and if she didn't and ment for the older doc to take the case then that son needs some serious disapline. .... and then he needs to die. or something like that. man, that a jerk. and the midwife even tried to tell him!! grr. i can't wait to hear what happens next. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:05 PDT
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Again...unbeatable. Please let Kagome, Inuyasha, and the baby live!! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 22:57 PDT
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Im kinda wondering is some of this story based in life experience because the reality of it, its amazing. Ive never read a story that can pull you in like that. It makes me angry when the chapters end for i know that im going to have to wait for the rest but its also good cause it helps build my patience. Im glad that there are authors such as yourself who take the time to write stories such as this, thank you so much for sharing and pls continue on your great work. anything u need u can find me at: almadamarys@tld.net
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: July 16, 2004 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is that ending brought tears to my eyes! LOL I don't know why!! I'm such a sucker for these stories! But all I have to say to that is "AAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!" LOL!! YAY THEY HAD A BOY!!! hehehe
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Reviewed By: PJ On: July 16, 2004 22:37 PDT
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Beautiful chapter. So they had the wrong doctor... I wonder if that was an accident or if someone did that on purpose? Please don't let Inu/Kagome die. I hope the priestess can help them but not seperate them if she does even if they both live then they will start to age and Kagome might die sooner then Inu would. Then she may not be able to seperate them. And if she did Inuyasha would be furious. I liked Yukio taking control like that he did good and Eri going to him knowing he needed a 'good cry' Update again soon this is great and please don't let them die. If they do I bet Miroku will be the one to take care of the new pup the most he kind of needs something like that to be the 'big brother'
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Reviewed By: Laura aka Gittelbug On: July 16, 2004 22:04 PDT
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wow that was good, though it's always good! dramaic... *sheds tear* I can't wate for the next chapter. *holds breath* i'm still waiting *faits*
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Title: PLEASE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 21:57 PDT
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it's so close!!!! YOu won't let them die, will you?? You're too nice to do that to all of us!! PLease please please don't let them die!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 16, 2004 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I am really really really upset about that damn doctor. Look! I don't even curse! I know you are the author and it's your story to do with what you want but please. Could you just have Inuyasha do something very very very very cruel to that doctor if he and Kagome ever make it through this??? Please!!! I have a sneaking suspicion that he took those files on Kagome and that he was trying to kill her. I don't Know why he did, but I know he did it. And his father needs to have his M.D. license taken away or something. This chapter was such a tear jerkker!!!! And so well written!!! I was seriously on the edge of the computer chair!!!! How do you do it?!?!?! Please tell me that you're going to be writing more stories after this?!? And I liked the Lord of the Rings part, maybe because it's my favorite movie... But anyway please update soon That has to be the most nail bitting chapter you've written!!!!!
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