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Reviewed By: Binah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 01:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure you get this a lot but I'll say it anyway, I don't want this story to end. I love it! I think you should make a spin off with Yukio or Miroku or something. I mean, Yukio is so cute! I love him and I don't want to see him go. Well anyways, enough of that tangent. The chapter was great as always!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(I have got to login one of these days) On: August 14, 2004 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay that chapter was funny!!!! I really liked the part where Inuyasha goes "I make it a point not to name a pup something I can't yell easily." And Miroku is so shameless flirting with Ayumi! But maybe that's exactly what he needs, a nice girl to help him over come issues with his mother. But I think she was a wrong when she said he was cuter than Inuyasha hehe ^_^ Well I know there's only one chapter left and I'm sad, but I know you'll give this a happy ending!!!!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 14, 2004 21:54 PDT
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Great update I was glad to see another chapter so close to the last update. It made my day I really look forward to the updates on this story. I am glad Kagome's friend was there and stayed for the naming which sounded like alot of fun to me. Then Miroku trying to get the 'dirt' on Yukio was cute and their 'flirting' was sweet. I think they would be cute together of course it would still be a bit strange Kagome's high school friend dating her son *LOL* The end was funny "Still a hot-tempered, violent jerk," Ayumi joked with an embarrassed smile. That cracked me up it sounds like she will be able to hold her own with all of them once she gets over being a bit shy with them. I also liked that she was allowed to see what everyone looked like and didn't freak out that is nice. Update again soon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 21:48 PDT
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aww. cute. the whole chap had me smiling the entire time. i had a middle school friend who's little bro was names Ian. she was always yelling at him for something. i think the Miroku/Ayumi thing is cute once you get past the idea that she pretty much grew up with Kagome. time travel is so confusing. if it becomes serious she'd have to get used to the idea of living for a really long time, though i think she could probably handle it. can't wait for more. it's going to be so sad when this ends. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
always outdoing urself. It makes me proud to read and to know that there are such talented people like u writting and i only wish that at some point i can be a fraction as good as u. Oh and good one Miroku needs some one but dont we all.
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Reviewed By: Sara Nicole On: August 14, 2004 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to leave a few words to let you know howmuch i have enjoyed this story... its amazing. it made me laugh, it made me cry...
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Title: so cute
Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... this chapter was so cute!! I loved every minute of it, especially when Miroku was hitting On Ayumi, that's just too cute! I can't believe there is only 1 chapter and an epilogue left..*sniff*. This has been the best part of my summer. Sitting down and the computer munching on junk food and reading The Lucky Ones by you! This story is AWESOME!! You so deserve hight than a 10, so I give you a 10 BILLION!! I can't get enuff of it! I hope you continue writing when this is finished. I look foward to anything you have to offer. Signed, corinthia
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 14, 2004 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, though I would like to educate you to the fact there were two Vietnam Wars, one 1947-1973, which we won. Then the 4 month war in 1975 which we did not fight in. So technically we won the war. It is the only consolation I have from that war which saw many of my friends die and I live... Who educates you guys...? Semper Fidelis Brigadier General Thomas B. Golladay jr USMC (Ret)
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:49 PDT
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Cute chapter update. I'm glad to see everything simmering down into a contented close. I look forward to the upcoming epilogue. Great work.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:41 PDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: Dragonlady
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once more, you've absolutely captivated me with your writing! I am so completely in love with this story! I was almost it tears reading it because the heart and emotions were so present! Thank you so much for this masterful work!!! -Tanya
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Reviewed By: Anandrea On: August 14, 2004 14:52 PDT
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That's so sweet! They're flirting! That would be great if Ayumi became part of the family. I love that! WHoot! This is awesome, it really shows the love in this family.
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Title: Loved the naming ceremony!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 14:09 PDT
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...and Miroku and Ayumi's flirtation! Once again, you did a wonderful job of conveying what a close-knit family Inuyasha and Kagome have--the teasing rang so true. And my favorite line: "I make it a point never to name a pup something I can't scream easily," Inuyasha answered. Wonderful, as always!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi( not logged in) On: August 14, 2004 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great hope to see the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: August 14, 2004 12:07 PDT
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LOL! what a cute chapter! so funny, family moments ^_^ Ian...so sweet that inuyasha named him after his freind
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