| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Title: OMG - just wonderful
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. You have added to the richness of the characters that we already knew, and then added so many more that are so sweet. We all knew Kagome would be a wonderful mom, and IY be a super Oyaji, and raise such nice kids, and so many of them. I adore Yukio - all stages of the pup, how he loves his family, even if he is a bit of a momma's-boy, he is also the perfect beta. I like all the t-shirts - the silly things that they say, wonderful! Always made me laugh. So sweet that Kagome is a decedent of Miroku and Sango. You tied all of those things together so nicely, with elation and sadness. I see that you have a one-shot - and looks like you've started a continuation. I look forward to reading both. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful perspective on the IY world.
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Reviewed By: I_love_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:21 PDT
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This is by far the best fan fic that I have ever read. You are an incredible writer. I was crying by the end of it. I really hope that you do write one shots to go with this.
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Reviewed By: Mockingbird_fly_away On: October 10, 2004 11:38 PDT
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Ack.... Ignore that last review... Something weird happened when I signed in and I was trying to review a different Inuyasha story and I wasn't logged in, so it transfered me to this story... weirdness...
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Reviewed By: Mockingbird_fly_away On: October 10, 2004 11:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far the story has be interesting, but one thing bugged me in this chapter... Inuyasha is Inu hanyou, and he should have recognized Kagome's scent immidiately, even if it was mixed in with the scents of other mikos....
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 08:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this chapter was really tense. Kagome's Mama really surprised me, and it's nice to see that not everybody writes her as a woman that understand everything in life. Her reaction was more natural for a mother. You truly know how to turn something fictional into something that has consistence, that can be real. Love love love your story
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Title: Chapters 7 & 8
Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Oh my, I loved all the choosing name thing! Really cool how you picked up all those names from other animes. There's something in your story that makes me all fuzzy inside. It gaves me a reall good feeling and I want to hug people just to share my current happyness. ^__^ Thanks again for making my day
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 14:44 PDT
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i've already finished this story a long time ago but this is still my FAVORITE and THE BEST story i've read!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss Siopao [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am awestruck with your devotion to this story. It is obvious that you took your time and energy to research carefully of the events described in this fiction. It is beautifully written, and I'm afriad if I say anything more, my words would become too irrelevant due to the greatness of this. This fic is not common at all and much of the scenes here are not at all sterotypical and are great new ideas, instead of those bland, repeating events that one reads many times in different fictions here. I highly doubt I can ever look at another fic the same again after reading just how wonderful and amazing an author can make their fic. (I'm babbling now... I don't think I'm making sense anymore...) I beleive that it is safe for me to call you an artist (and I do beleive that is the first time I've ever called an author online an 'artist'). This ficiton is truly a work of mastery and art. You are a great author. ~Miss Siopao
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Title: BEST EVER!
Reviewed By: Kazaana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply put, The. Best. Fiction. Ever!
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Title: I love this story!!
Reviewed By: mokona_of_darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but i'm a little upset at what you did to kouga!!! >< he wouldn't act like that he's sooo much nicer and cooler!! ah!! kill his pups no thats not kouga!! well I love the whole story except poor kougas role in it!!1
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Reviewed By: Kiklo On: October 04, 2004 22:51 PDT
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And so...it ends. thank you for 10 months of wonderful story. ^_^
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely Yukio is the luckiest baby hanyou, but I'm sure we are all lucky because you decided to create this story. Really really lovely the way Inuyasha and Kagome made up and the way they're already assuming Yukio as their son. It's a very large step they're doing, I really don't think they have an idea of what that means, and that just shows how great are their hearts. ^^
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 06:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh... liver. I hate liver and I'm sorry for Kagome. XP. I loved the way you made Kagome going to lactation, and I couldn't help a smile when Sango, Miroku and Shippou thought that'd be her big heart or her powers. It was a touching scene and I wanted to hug them all just for being so cute. Inuyasha's reaction, thought, was the most endearing to me. He's just this big baby inside, despite his tough outside, isn't he? I noticed your worry with baby caring and parental instints of youkai with their children. You must have made a lot of research on those subjects and you have my respect! Congratulations!
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw the total number of chapters in this fanfic, and I do not believe you have just 794 reviews for 50 chapters! I just can think that not everybody comes to mediaminer and so they are missing a wonderful story. And that's not AU! Their loss, of course. In this chapter (it's the 4th) I'm starting to think that maybe Inuyasha's going to have a hard time to control his big mouth XD. No curse in front of the baby? Oh my, I wonder what you'll make Yukio speak as his first word... Anyway, this story is wonderful and I regreat that I haven't come sooner. See ya!
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 15:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know that I'm going to mark 10 to everything in this fic, right? At first I thought that Inuyasha assumed his role as father rather quickly, and that could be a little odd. On second thought, though, I realized that he's being just compassionate like Kagome. He wants to save the baby because of what he had to go through his childhood. And since he's taken the baby, his natural youkai instints of protetion kicked. I love the way Inuyasha's so devoted to his new family. You are amazing as a writer. And I bow to you.
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