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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 12:10 PST
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I kinda get confused on these japanese names and such, but i really like this story. I'm on the...20th chapter right now, and i'll review again soon.
| Title: continuation of below
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:19 PST
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(please read prior review) that's three times you made me cry...three. i dont' know where to begin with the talent of your character depositions, motivations or depictions. AMAZING. its the rawest talent i've ever seen in being able to adapt one's other story to make it your own. this is your story. these are your characters. I LOVE Yukio...he DESERVES his own show. i'm so serious. if i had the contracts....wow. his character is my favorite. i mean, he's freakin amazing. how you incorperated InuYasha and Kagome and his own personality into this bundle of absolute joy is beyong me. he's amazing. simply amazing. i am in awe of the pure talent. honest. and Eri...i love her as well. the Prada wearing spitfire...awsome additions to the story with your own touch. there was not a single hole in this story at all. not one. (though i had half the beief that the SOB doctor jr. that nearly killed Kagome was Naraku's reincarnation, i was wrong). it is a hard task to write so much and not miss a beat or miss a thread of the plot. not one hole did i catch. i can't get over this fic (and i still have four chapters to go but i'm way to tired to enjoy them at this moment.) your amazing...your writting is amazing...simply put; astonishing. congrats on what could be the best thing to come out of the InuYasha series.
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow...i so don't even know where to begin with this. i guess some background. i learned of this fic, not by mediaminer or even the web, but by word of mouth. that says something right there about the talent you posess in your writting skills. i'm a writter and a soon to be published author (if i can get my head out of fan fic long enough to finish my latest peice) and i am humbeled by your talent. i read in your intro that you are a fan of Suric...i love her work and its great on its own...but this...this story is a completly different teir. i LOVE this fic. it is the most awing peice of work i've read in a long time. i've spent over twelve hours reading it and am still not done. i brought it with me everywhere...when i knew i wouldn't have internet access, i saved files to read on teh bus. let me tell you...having a melt down cause your heart is breaking for poor Inu and Kag during their run in with Kikyou before she changed while having two people STARING at you sitting within a foot of your personal space is not easy. nor is laughing histerically when your suposed to be working. and LET ME TELL YOU....all i could do is chant, 'oh no...oh shit...oh no...' when Sesshoumaru stormed into the hospital. OH MY GOD. and i cried...and i NEVER cry when i read stories, NEVER. i cried when Yash ran into the souls of his children...i got misty eyed when i read of the two children he had to cut down...and i cried when he told Kagome of what he saw.
| Title: Oh my lord...
Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 02:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this is the best inuyasha fanfiction I have ever read. I give you my strongest promise that I am not lying. I loved...well everything...it was just awesome and perfect and I got so caught up in it I was oblivious to the world around me. I loved Inuyasha's sarcastic shirts too, I even went out of my way to look up how to say "If you can read this, you're over educated" in latin for you, it's : "Si vos can lego is vos es super erudio" I thought you might want to know that if you didn't already. Well, this is getting long, and I can't really think of much else to say, other than that this is truly a great storie, and it was a great deal of pleasure to read! Thanks for writing it!
| Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well through out this fan fic i have resided that i am a big baby i cried when i heard of the pups dieing (and before that) Ive cried when inuyasha saw his family in the camatose and also when miroku and sango and them came to bless the pups on more than one occasion i have gotten dirty looks for laughing my head off i love your fic and hope you write a sequel i LOVELOVELOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I give this fan fic 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 00000000000000000000/10 if its possible to do more than that i would but this is getting aq little long and its getting late keep writing please!?!
| Reviewed By: NordicaVB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 07:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished this story at 4am, after reading nonstop for over 12 hours. I would have to say this is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. The only complaint would be to remove the note addressing the OOC of Inuyasha...I don't think it is necessary and it disrupts the flow of the chapters. I understand that some people may believe he was OOC, but then that's their problem and they obviously never saw the American version of the Shiori episodes. I loved this story because it portrayed the characters so well...and I admit that I had cried at least four times while reading the story, but they were usually out of happiness for the characters (it really was such a sweet story). The best part about this story was the fact that it was realistic, which is why it touched my heart many times. I also love the fact that the angst was not overdone like it is in so many stories. You kept it light and real. I'm happy for once that Inu/Kag could decide to just be happy with the time they had together and not dwell on things they could not control (freeing them from the torment so many authors seem to love). I'll probably print this story out, just so I can read it again, whenever I want (if that is okay). I wanted to also admit that there is one scene that I will probably never be able to forget. The first night before Kag/Inu joined, when she offered him that...I was shocked but maybe it was because it was so moving. With all that said; I absolutly love this story.
| Reviewed By: kyyra On: December 11, 2004 21:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love Your story, it has tooken me four days to read it all, i have cried so many times and laughed just as much, I would like to thankj you , for blessing the world with a love story of such amazing writing, One day I hope to write like this, My mind is just so numb at how great this story is, If the real" Inu Yasha" doesnt end like this ... well sorta like this, i will cry, this is the perfect ending, You'r charactures are so realistic, and show real emotion and feeling. Love a adoring fan Kyyra Hutzcal
| Title: # 1 BEST SELLER
Reviewed By: Lady New moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 16:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what grat story it one of best I ever read . YOU GO GIRL !!!!!
| Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 01:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go great story!
| Title: Beautiful and incredible
Reviewed By: ChibiStarTk On: December 08, 2004 21:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read many Inuyasha fanfics. I found this one because of Transformations. I read Transformations thinking that was something that could not be topped. But this fanfic proved me wrong. I started reading it two days ago and could not stop reading it. I lost sleep, I cried, I laughed my head off, chewed off my nails as Kagome and Inuyasah were comatose, and overall stayed awestruck the whole time. You wrote beautifully, and made me on several occasions stop and think 'Wow that couldve happened! That makes so much sense!' I hope to one day see some sort of a special chapter that goes on with their lives up until their death. Im curious as to if they eventually have more children or if after all their pups are gone they retire to a never ending sleep like they agreed. I thank you for writing this amazing fanfiction It really warmed my heart :)
| Reviewed By: blahblahbahhumbug [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very interesting fic, a different take on things than what I've read before. :) Good job! I was wondering if you've ever read the fics Chronicles or Purity by Sueric, because they are in my top three fics with yours ;) ... you have the same level of talent as those fics. Once again this was a truly enjoyable fic. :)
| Reviewed By: lazzykane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 10:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you kept me up reading this because i couldn't stop until the end thank you
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: November 27, 2004 08:24 PST
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I'm liking the plot and your handling of the characters a lot. I do have one suggestion though: you should really raise your rating from 'R' to 'NC-17' because your sex scenes are very explicit. Wouldn't hurt to also add 'Hentai' to your Genre(s) - You can have up to three. ---- Well, on to the next chapter.
| Title: WOWIECAPOODLES!
Reviewed By: DJ Inuyasha logged out On: November 15, 2004 17:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely amazing. The best fanfic I've ever read by FAR, honestly. I thought it was 100% perfect and I loved every moment of it. I do look forward to reading more of your fics, this one just blew me away completely, I couldn't ask for a better fic about Inu/Kag. Hehe I'm such a dirty hentai lover... *Snickers* *Claps* If I had three thumbs I'd give you three thumbs up.... but I guess I'll have to do with two for now........ *sigh* How about two thumbs and two big toes?
| Title: Arigatou!
Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 01:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was by far the best, most beautiful Inuyasha fanfiction I have ever read. I laughed, I cried, I hoped, and most of all, I loved. I looked forward to reading any one shots that you write, and I greatly hope that Yukio finds a mate to love and sire children with. You have a great talent at writing and weaving a story that holds the reader spellbound, at times unwilling to rise from the computer and go to bed. Arigatou!
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