| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is one of my favorite fanfics ever. You are an awesome writer. I looked forward to reading the updates as they came in. I will def miss this fic. Write something new soon!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Little Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 08:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::wipes tears away from her eyes:: Omg... i soooo love your story. It is one of the best stories i've ever read in my entire life. i can only think of one that could rival this story. It is put together so well and the characters are in character. i love it... it almost made me cry in a few places. i hope you write more stories soon. you can be sure that i'll read them. Zephyr
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_darkwindwarrior On: September 04, 2004 20:06 PDT
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I love this story it warms my heart... it's so beautifuly romantic, kinky and unbearbly... what's the word? sweet. I love this story i love you! lol jp great story!
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_darkwindwarrior On: September 04, 2004 07:57 PDT
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Beautiful make InuYasha worry!
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_darkwindwarrior On: September 04, 2004 06:23 PDT
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Wow that was beautiful I almost started crying!
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Title: Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: TheSeeingTruth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 12:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Threw this story, we as on lookers are able to see how much of a change a child can bring out in a person. The kind of love that Terri has expressed threw Kagome and InuYasha is near impossible to find, and when you read this story and take a step back and look at the world, you realize how bad it has gotten, and long of their kind of love. The trails and obsticals that Kagome and InuYasha must over come are very realistic of what would happen in the manga or tv show. Over all, it is a magnificently done.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: August 28, 2004 06:21 PDT
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Great chapters! I've been on the road for the last few weeks. The story was a great thing to come back to. I'll be so sad when it's all over. Sniff. Thank you so much for writing this!!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: tina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 02:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like this story why dont u make more of this story make it longer i know u can come up with more if u come up with this story i wish u all the luck with ur wrighting send me a message are a e-mail and we can talk more and if u have yahoo messager send mr a message i think u could wright alot more good storys keep up the good work later
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Reviewed By: BrookeTheShrimp On: August 27, 2004 23:59 PDT
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oh wow. very very good story. oh man. i loved it from the get-go. You were very good at taking something and keeping it moving and then when the plot changed it still remained great. i can't wait for the ending! I laughed at everything i found funny and was worried and all that good stuff. but the biggest thing i'll remember about this story is: It doesn't matter how many people you've "lost" in life, you'll seen them in the end. they aren't even lost really. they're just waiting for you. And sadly enough, i cried. Over the last two years of my life i lost two very dear people to me, my best friend and my mom, and reading this story made something in my mind click. THANK YOU! it really makes my heart happier. *hugs* i sound really pathetic don't i? crying because of something i got from a story. thank you thank you thank you! i really loved that and your creativness...if that is even a word. it is amazing how you created so many characters and had a solid plot. i really loved the naming part. it made me laugh. hurry up with the ending please?!?!
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Title: *Snifff* *Sniff*
Reviewed By: Kates On: August 25, 2004 14:31 PDT
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What a beautiful story. I cried those last two chapters, it was so touching!!! I love this story I was up a whole night reading once, I just couldn't stop!!! That is so far the best story I have read!!! You did such a wonderful job and a humble at your brilliance!!!! Just Wonderful!!!
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Title: Your Humble Worshipper
Reviewed By: Cat Yuy On: August 25, 2004 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has made me cry on at least two chapters and I'm not prone to crying. This story is beautiful and original. I love this story. I only discovered it last week and I've already read it twice and plan to read it many more times. You should be proud of your imagination, originality, writing skills and above all yourself for writing this brillant piece of craftsmanship and masterpiece of artful writing. Thank you for writing this and bringing this wonderful story into my life.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 22:21 PDT
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Oh, gosh, that was just beautiful. Sango and Miroku's visit actually made me cry. This is my first time reviewing "The Lucky Ones," so I want to say that I *loved* the fact that you made Inuyasha and Kagome such "attachment-parenting" (or, as my dear husband would say, "hippie") parents. Woohoo for extended breastfeeding! I kept expecting Kagome to pull out a copy of Mothering magazine! Anyway, kudos to you for accomplishing the monumental feat of completing this fic. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, wonderful, even better then I can express with my limited vocabulary. I'm glad I didn't read this until it was almost done, I got to read it like novel. Thanks for the amaszing story.
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Title: Over
Reviewed By: Austin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't belive its over. THis is by far my fav. fan fic of all time. It was truly a perfect story. I really cant say how perfect it was and im so sad that its over. will you put an authors note saying if your writing any other stories? n e ways your story was truly the best thing i have ever read i love your writing and hope you do lots more. i am going to cry :(.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: August 23, 2004 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried!!!! The wedding was so nice!!! But I feel sorry for Kagome wearing that huge dress. I'm sick so I won't make you sit through another long review. Just know that the last two chapters have been nothing short of amazing as always!!!
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