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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 00:45 PDT
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This has been a joy to read....I have loved all the variety of such a family and the winding of time paradoxes through this whole thing. Seems everyone has found a place in the IY/Kag family and I have loved it...right down to Ayumi coming to grips with everything thrown at her soooo fast. *BUT, she is the smart one of the bunch, ne??* Anyhoo, can't wait til your epilogue. (Just don't wanna cry...pleeeeease.) I did alot of laughing and the seen with the childrens' souls returning to say their goodbyes to IY did a number on me.
| Reviewed By: Lady Dark Star On: August 18, 2004 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story to bad it has to end But loved it none the less
| Title: continued...
Reviewed By: chibi_koinu On: August 17, 2004 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so... as i was sayin... i meant to mean that thinking about how ur story turned out now... wht is currently happenin in it... it dusn't seem like it's following the plot... and is AU or something... but u've made the regular story plot tie into it... so technically it's not AU... GREAT WORK! Update soon! ::sigh:: school is approaching... hopefully i'll still hab time to read stuffs...
| Title: ian...?
Reviewed By: chibi_koinu On: August 17, 2004 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey... i think i reviewd at ff.net a few times already... but i wanted to check if the next chapter was already here... i can't believe how long u've made it! so great... and... itz so remarkable how u've, in a way, made this AU... u kept the original storyline... but also made something different outta it... like... itz a whole nother story, but it still went by the original draft... GAH! i dunno how to explain this... but hopefully i made some sense... anyhoo... i seriously LOVE your story... keep at it! ::thumbs up:: i think u've made enough chapters to make a book! around 300-400 pages!!! ::sigh:: they're all happy... and ian is a nice name! i'm viet, but i dun like the name Phuc... cuz it sounds like another certain word in english... i think Julian is a nice name though... or... romeo!!! and... about miroku... everytime u mention him in the story, i get this image of the namesake miroku... whn u said playboy car owner... hehe... i dunno how u were able to come up with such great plots and plot twists!!! i mean... did u plan for the 6 kids to die and then talk to inu as a soul? there were over 4 chapters inbetween though rite? officially... i think i've given up on attempting to write fanfiction... but i still love reading it! now only if those publishers would make books on fanfiction then the world would be ::that:: much better. XD ... i think i noe how to explain wht i meant earlier now... i'll post another review to finish talking... eheheh... i'm running outta lette | Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:40 PDT
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wow, how the heck did i end up making two reviews? oh well sorry, lol
| Title: WOW YOUR STORY IS LONG
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh i really love your story, and im soo glad that it was on the featured fanfics list! It was really great! I cant wait for you next chap! Its a pretty funny story! I know you made Miroku do you think he'd get with ayumi or whatever her name is? cant wait! Its really good! Too bad its almost over... but i cant wait to see if you have other stories... its been like a week, yeah i think thats how long it took me to read the story... its really long, i've read seventy something long stories, but i swear it seem like your stories still BIGGER, you chapters are sooo damn long! Although i dont mind at all, except for the face that when my turns over on the computer im only half way done with the chapter, lol! I cant wait to look at you other stories if you have some, although i think im gonna take some time off from reading stories, it really takes something out of ya. Especially if you dont like reading ^_^. reading is my least favorite subject and thing to do..unless its fanfics...they're better than books! Anyway, cant wait for your next chap, later! ^_^
| Title: WOW YOUR STORY IS LONG!
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh i really love your story, and im soo glad that it was on the featured fanfics list! It was really great! I cant wait for you next chap! Its a pretty funny story! I know you made Miroku do you think he'd get with ayumi or whatever her name is? cant wait! Its really good! Too bad its almost over... but i cant wait to see if you have other stories... its been like a week, yeah i think thats how long it took me to read the story... its really long, i've read seventy something long stories, but i swear it seem like your stories still BIGGER, you chapters are sooo damn long! Although i dont mind at all, except for the face that when my turns over on the computer im only half way done with the chapter, lol! I cant wait to look at you other stories if you have some, although i think im gonna take some time off from reading stories, it really takes something out of ya. Especially if you dont like reading ^_^. reading is my least favorite subject and thing to do..unless its fanfics...they're better than books! Anyway, cant wait for your next chap, later! ^_^
| Title: WOW YOUR STORY IS LONG!
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh i really love your story, and im soo glad that it was on the featured fanfics list! It was really great! I cant wait for you next chap! Its a pretty funny story! I know you made Miroku do you think he'd get with ayumi or whatever her name is? cant wait! Its really good! Too bad its almost over... but i cant wait to see if you have other stories... its been like a week, yeah i think thats how long it took me to read the story... its really long, i've read seventy something long stories, but i swear it seem like your stories still BIGGER, you chapters are sooo damn long! Although i dont mind at all, except for the face that when my turns over on the computer im only half way done with the chapter, lol! I cant wait to look at you other stories if you have some, although i think im gonna take some time off from reading stories, it really takes something out of ya. Especially if you dont like reading ^_^. reading is my least favorite subject and thing to do..unless its fanfics...they're better than books! Anyway, cant wait for your next chap, later! ^_^
| Reviewed By: inu.ob On: August 16, 2004 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! Only one more chapter! One more chapter? ONE MORE CHAPTER!!!! I don't know how I'll survive without reading updated chapters of 'The Lucky Ones'! I know you said you would put up an epilogue and that your story is being published (or something around there, I can't exactly remember)but is there any way, any way at all, that you can continue on with your story? I want to know what happens between Ayumi and Miroku, it sounds like somethings going on... maybe a side story about their life? And maybe some more detail about Inuyasha and Kagome's lives after all their children have passed. If only that could happen. If there is anything more... ANYTHING you can add to lengthen this story or I would be so happy! I love it! You are an awesome writer! Don't ever stop writing!
| Reviewed By: Moomoo (moo-moo-chan) On: August 16, 2004 18:46 PDT
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XD awwwwwwww! That chapter was extremely cute and funny :3! I absolutely adored it ^_^ Your writing is magnificant.
| Reviewed By: animelovera On: August 16, 2004 11:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story it takes Inuyasha onto to whole new level of reading.
| Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love your story. i am so sad that it is coming to an end! great chapter. the little thing between ayumi and miroku was very cute. cant wait to hear the ending!
| Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (nlo) On: August 15, 2004 18:44 PDT
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AHHHH I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Miroku and Ayame!!!! yay!!!! im gonna be so sad to see this one finish. BUT I WANT TO READ MORE! sigh, im divided. update soon! ^_^
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 17:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a terrific update! I love the name! I like how you kept that tradition going. I hope to read the last chapter soon!
| Title: I like Ian...
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 08:10 PDT
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hey, would have reviewed last night, but the darn storm knocked out my cable... Anywho - good job! Was sweet, funny, and we got to see yasha-chan laughed at a bit. hehehehe.. always a good thing. ~Caliko
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