| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in thought I was a minute ago* On: August 11, 2004 17:59 PDT
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Great chapter. I love the story. Keep up the great work.
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Title: Tenshi no Hinote
Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. Best story I've read on this site! GREAT job! I love it! Are you going to stop here or continue on? Well, anyway, WONDERFUL story. I cried a lot. But so so good. Definitly a story that I'll go back to when it's done. Thanks!
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Title: hurray!
Reviewed By: Moomoo (moo-moo-chan) On: August 10, 2004 19:14 PDT
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You go girl XD! Tell all those stupid ignorant reviewers wose boss ^^ That was the most well written, what I will forever call, a character personality description XD wow.... aww I'm a sucker for arguements where people back up with they believe :3 I just love it XD;;; And geez I can actually see "persuasive strategies" >.> That our stupid teacher taught us in 8th grade..psh >.> Like I needed them. Well very well done :3 XD even though it wasn't a chapter XD;;;;;
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Reviewed By: SaVaY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 10:54 PDT
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lol. you used names from other animes.
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Reviewed By: SaVaY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 11:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really great writing. i really loved this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moomoo (moo-moo-chan) On: August 07, 2004 10:45 PDT
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XD I'm almost tempted to do a fanart pic for this story.... :3 Maybe even a CG XD
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Reviewed By: Moomoo On: August 07, 2004 10:40 PDT
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I always cry during this chapter ;_; no matter how many times I read it.
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Title: AMAZING!!
Reviewed By: =^n_n^= [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 23:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! It has taken me three weeks of off again/on again reading to finish what you've written so far. But, it was time worth spent! I really enjoyed your fic, you have a very creative mind, and don't seem to mind sorting out all the minor details. From beginning to end I've been loving this fic, and I can't wait to see what happens next...because so far I haven't been able to guess it! You keep surprising me, and I love that!! I also love all the emotion flying about, I keep wanting to smile, laugh, and cry with the characters throughout. The souls of Inuyasha's past coming to greet him Between was a very sweet touch, and I can't wait for your next update. =^-.~^=
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 22:44 PDT
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I'm so impatient! Will you be updating soon? I hope so.
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Reviewed By: Marlowe On: August 06, 2004 04:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say i was profoundly moved by your work. I have recently begun reading fanfics and have devoured at least a few dozen, but this story touched me with a depth and breath I had not anticipated. I pulled into the story by the romance and continuation of the anime, but the turns kept me enthralled. I was adopted myself when my parents were said to be barren. At the age of 11 I got siblngs when my parents proved the doctors wrong. Barring a few out of character moments in the beginning, I became so completely entangled in the story itself that the fact that it is a fanfic holds no candle to the quality and caliber of the work in and of itself. I must say, I began reading this at five o'clock in the evening, it is now four in the morning, and I will probably be calling in sick to work from lack of sleep. I do not know if you intend to write anything as an additional ending, the story is fine right here, but I will check back eagerly for any addition chapters of prologues you may add. Additionally, you may be assured that I will be happily searching out your other works. I was trully moved to tears on occasion, and held my breath in anticipation from one chapter to the next. Please accept my gushing as this readers full permission to beam with pride in yourself and your abilities and an author. I think I may only end there as my words cannot fully express the emotions you were so able to poinqiantly grasp.
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Reviewed By: Rogallia On: August 05, 2004 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
definatly *the* best fic i've read in a loooooooong time. Very well written, the characters actually stayed *in character*, very well done :)
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Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: August 05, 2004 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am officially putting you on the "best sellers" list. this story is awsome from start to finish, which by the way, i hope you didnt end it there, cuz im dying to know whats gonna happen! ...what the baby's name is, how he grows up, and im still wondering how inuyasha and kagome are gonna die. i dont want them to, but its just something people need to know. and just so ya know, i keep a list of the best of the best fanfics. and urs has tied for first place.^^ congrats! you have tied with a story called "Dead Famous". in my opinion though, i think you broke the tie ^.~ keep up the great work, and always keep writing! chow*tootles
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Reviewed By: Krystal-chan On: August 04, 2004 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was grate i can't wait for you to wright more
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Title: Tomoka:Yamia!!!Go Deep!!!!
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Conversations between two Mediaminer authors reading the same fic: Yamia:even though i've only read half of the second to last chapter and the last chapter,i have to say that this story was excellent!!!!! Tomoka-chan: Oro? Just kidding. I have read the entire length of this fic and I have to say that is sucks. Royaly. That is something that I would say if I were extremely stupid. However, I have been graced with an intelligence higher than that of sliced bread. Lucky One's is a great fan fiction. One of the best that I ever read. I look foward to the remaining chapters and more works by you Terri Botta. Sincerely, The one with more common sense than Yamia-chan. Yamia:my friend is lying since she only has an IQ higher than sliced bread..... Tomoka: This Tomoka-chan is outraged by your failure to respect her. Don't you sass me! I am the bondage queen! *Sakaboto (reversed-blade sword) in hand* Yamia:shut up you Sesshomaru wanna be!!!!this Yamia-chan will not allow it!!!!*Tokijin appears in hand* Tomoka: *Notices she has an audience* ..... Yamia:look at what you've done!!!now we to stop before someone calls for the Interpol Bondage Queen!!!! Tomoka & Yamia: Gomen Na Sai! Update soon!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru15 On: August 03, 2004 05:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to know that this is a great fic if I'm reading it.. I competely despise Kag/Inu fics, but your fic is by all the best I have ever read and I hope that you update soon. Keep up the great work and stay well. Best reguards, Kikyo (sesshoumaruslover_4ever@hotmail.com)
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