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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 01:21 PDT
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Lovely chapter. Yasha's visit with the souls made me tear up; it was touching. The chapter was written wonderfully and I can't wait to learn what they name their newest pup. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 00:27 PDT
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such a good chapter. the part with the souls was so touching. i feel kinda bad for Tetsu, he was kind of excluded from the going out and parting group. everyne went to a bar and he was sent home to drink by himself. though i suppose the Sight think would kind of get in the way. will he ever be able to controle it? poor thing. can't wait to see what they name him. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, another chapter beautifully done! This has got to be the most emotional fan fic I have ever read! This is beyond a doubt my favorite story...InuYasha related or not! Keep up the excellent work! I cannot wait to buy it when it comes out with the pictures! -Corinthia
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 26, 2004 22:43 PDT
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Fantastic! The scene where all the souls were visiting Inu had me crying my eyes out. Looking forward to when things get back to normal for I & K. This has been a tense section of the story. As always, thank you very much for writing this amazing story!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 21:21 PDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:37 PDT
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what do they name the pup!?!?!?!?!
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Title: for that drink...
Reviewed By: count me in On: July 26, 2004 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can we add a few more numbers on the above rating scale for you? Great chapter. I laughed, I cried, I could really use a drink now, too. Congratulations on a superb piece of work!!!
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! please update again soon. i for one would love to have a copy of your story. thats such a great idea. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:32 PDT
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i dont think there are enough words in the english language to express how much i love this story. it's so well written and it's got me captivated. thanks so much for sharing it with us readers out here. i was reading it on the guilty pleasures website but now i'm glad that i see it's on here because i can finally tell you how wonderful this story is. keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 (not logged in) On: July 26, 2004 17:29 PDT
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Tessaiga! Tessaiga! Tessaiga! *LOL* I couldn't resist. *LOL* Great update I am glad they are ok. I can't wait until Inuyasha hears about that doctor I know Kagome will probably tr to keep him from hurting him too badly... then again that doctor is a youkai and put both her pup & mate (through herself) in danger so she might be first in line to hurt him. Plus she is a doctor and what he did is totally wrong. Kagome would most likely disregard Sessy's claim about 'prey' and beat even him to that doctor. *LOL* That would be something to see. That book you mentioned sounds great now if I can scrape together some money I might get it. I still thing Miroku and Kagome's friend (the one that knows the whole story) would make a cute couple. But Of course I feel in love with 'chibi Yukio' and now thing he is a hottie the way I imagine him anyway it is too bad he is not interested. It is most likely a good thing they didn't tell Inu that they thought about seperating them... if they would have done it and Kagome died Inu would have probably followed her soon after even with the new pup being around. Anyway great update to this awesome story and update agian soon.
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Title: the lucky ones
Reviewed By: fluffytuffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me there is at least one more chapter to wrap things up. This chapter has benn a joy to read. I look forword to other stories you put out. I do hope that you write another Inuyasha story. I would greatly like to read that. As always a wonderful job.
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Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: fluffytuffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me there is at least one more chapter to wrap things up. Please???????? This too almost brought me to tears and I hope this will not be your last Inuyasha fic. I have enjoyed reading your work and look forword to more.
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Reviewed By: inu.ob On: July 26, 2004 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't reviewed in a while but yes, I still am here, reading... I have loved this story from the beginning and I plan on reading it 'til the end. Although I never want it to end, and hopefully it won't be a while. I don't know where your ideas come from but this story is awesome! I have never read such a great story. I can see all of these events happening in the real Inuyasha series but unfortunately I don't think they will...I love this story! Please continue a.s.a.p. -inuyasha_obsession (inu.ob)
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: July 26, 2004 16:21 PDT
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omg......i was almsot in tears at this! and relieved! this seems...so real the way it pulls you in by the strings of your heart, i love it!
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: July 26, 2004 16:02 PDT
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*Falls over laughing* Bwahaha, I was expecting that "Keh!" Inuysha ALWAYS Kehs when he doesn't get his way...hasn't changed much, has he? Ahhh, I am so happeeeeee...everything turned out okay. Keep it up and tell us what happens to that bastard Hattori!!!
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