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Reviewed By: Dragonnan On: August 02, 2004 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I back up the author completely regarding breastfeeding and ovulation. My sister happens to be one of those "oops" when she became pregnant with her second child. So far, Everything I've read has been completely accurate.
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Reviewed By: spdsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 10:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I read your summary, I was expecting the run of the mill fan fic. But within the first few chapters I was totally surprised! I can't get over the detail or your vast knowlede of many topics. You had my emotions all over the place and I would recommend your story to one and all! THANK YOU for writing such a great story, I look forward to reading another chapter in continuation of Kagome and Inuyasha lives!!
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Reviewed By: Tanya (Dragonnan) On: August 02, 2004 01:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is above and beyond ANYTHING I've ever read!!!! I am overwhelmed by how amazinglt good, nay, GRAND this is!!!!! Your characters are portrayed so perfectly it's scary!!!!! Anyone who gripes about this is either painfully ignorant or just a stupid fool (not sure what's worse). I just love, love, love this story!!! What an amazing work!!! This is a true example of written art!! This is so well explored too!! The intimate knowledge of babies and their habits, the incorporation of the inu-hanyou language, the delicate way the relationship and "intimate moments" between Inuyasha and Kagome is handled; all this combines to make this a masterful work!!! I am so excited to read this, I hate to stop at this point... but I've been reading for four hours straight!!!! It's 3:35 am and I need sleep!! LOL I can't wait to read more! Also, as an artist, I can easily see why others want to draw illustrations based on this work- I want to do the same!!! I would also love if I could post a pg-13 version of this at my site (I've got no problem with sexual scenes, but my site is restricted because my nieces and nephews can visit it). If this is ok, I'd be so honored to host it!!! Anyhow, I want to thank the author for writing this, it's just phenomonal!!!!!! -Tanya http://www.geocities.com/naninuyasha/index.html e-mail: detectivemonk@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Ehlee On: July 30, 2004 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeels* I love this fanfic, very very very GOOD JOB! I hope you keep writing cool stories like this one, and update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: kj On: July 29, 2004 22:57 PDT
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i love this story soo much i was in tears with inu meeting all the souls of his loved ones, your writting technique is so deep and creative it makes the story seem so real, this is by far the best story i have ever read and i cant wait to read the rest when it comes out and hopefully some other works by you. ja ne
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Reviewed By: GunnerYunaGirl On: July 29, 2004 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Yeah, I know. So far this whole `life' thing's kinda sucked hasn't it? First you get pushed out of your warm home, then all these strange people poke and prod you and leave you all by yourself. Then more strange people come and they pick you up and move you this way and that, and cart you all over and you have no idea where you are or where Mom and Dad are. And they feed you from a bottle and stick plastic on your butt. Then to top it all off, you find out your dad is a dog. It's enough to make anyone want to crawl back into the womb and never come out, huh?" XD Oh god! After reading Eri's sum up of the babe's life, I sprayed water all over my computer screen! That was funny. Too funny, lol. Otherwise... good chapter =)
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Reviewed By: chuuuuu! ^^ On: July 29, 2004 03:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, i cant wait to see what they name him, the little sweetie pie! i really, really, really hope we get to see him grow like yukio did-there's so much left to this story...i know you wont disapoint us! anyhoo, i feel bad for tetsu, he was left out! mah poor baby...hehe. i was really surprised that miroku (the first) and sango's souls didn't visit. i truly hope that this story won't end without a last word from them...that would suck. ~~~ now, overall, i feel very very lucky to have found this story. mediaminer isn't the most popular place to find good stories, but that's my opinion. i can thank Kristin's Studio- she recomended it. actually, i have her to thank for my inuyasha fandom in the first place...and that spread to an anime fandom. lol! but what my point was, i think you submit this in more places, so that everyone can read it! i mean, it will get people away from the mindless smut and to the good and meaningful fanfictions, like this one. wow. this was a long review. tootles!
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Reviewed By: sealife On: July 28, 2004 11:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all the most enjoyable & creative fanfic I have read! Auther has captured the complete character gambit without sacrificing the tone of the original anime. Definately a story you don't want to end. Would love to see future chapters focus on INU/KAG children. GREAT JOB!!! Really looking forward to all future submissions...
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Title: Scoob_Dog_03
Reviewed By: Scoob_Dog_03 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 00:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this chapter is one of the best yet. I can't wait until the next one. WOW, GREAT, BLEW MY MIND are the only things that even come colse to describing what i have thought of this entire fanfic so far.
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Title: Fabulouss!
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Terri... this was wonderful. You made me cry... again. Bless you. I can see things coming to an end, and although it makes me sad, I'm so happy things are working out. God Bless. Keep writing. I always have a place on my webby for your stories. New ones will be anxiously awaited. Kanzen ne Tsuki
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Austin(Inu-Yasha_15) On: July 27, 2004 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was a great chapter keep up the good work. cant wait to see what they name him.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 10:47 PDT
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Wowo that was long... but so amazingly excelant! I love it and can't wait to see what they name it!
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Reviewed By: Laura(gitelbug) On: July 27, 2004 10:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I justlove this story. I even rered some of the earlyer chapters just because. keep it up, you are an inspiration to me. can't wait to read more.
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Title: YAYYY
Reviewed By: caliko not signed in On: July 27, 2004 10:21 PDT
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**HAppy now!*** anyway, wow.. 554 reviews (or something like that!) CONGRATS! Of course, this story deserves it.. it's just as good now as the first chapter.. (tempted to go back and start reading all over again...) ^_^ ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 27, 2004 07:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, yes *jumps up and down* Kagome woke up!!!! I cried when all the souls were talking to Inuyasha, especially when Sai came to him. That was so sad! I know that Yukio is very sensitive (wish guys like that really existed) but maybe he should try to move on? Maybe give that nurse a chance. The pup sounds sooooo cute!!!! I get all warm and fuzzy just thinking about him!!!! Your really good at giving your original characters names and I can't wait to see what name you give the pup. I think the next chapter is going to be really funny with all of them getting drunk. It already gave me a good laugh when I heard about what happened the last time Tetsu got drunk!! *squeal!* I can't wait for the next update!!!!!
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