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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] | Title: great fanfic!!!
Reviewed By: Harik/problemchild(animespiral.com) On: March 01, 2005 11:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This fanfic was sooo good!!! I'm glad that you didn't do the predictable stuff (like haveing koga kidnapp kagome or Inu Yasha chooseing Kikyo). I find this fanfic quite refreshing actually.Well keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. ~Problemchild
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 11:48 PST
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I've read this story twice now and i still think its awsome and im picky so be glad. great story. Zirra
| Title: cloud
Reviewed By: cloud_youkai_of_wind (dont want to log in) On: February 26, 2005 15:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE A TRULY GIFTED WRITER i have never, read a story this good. And to make things better, its on the best anime show in the world (my opinion ^_^;;). Please continue to make more continuaitions of LO. I have already read 'Game Face' and as soon as im finished with this review, i will start on 'Coyote Child'. I've nearly flunked because of this story because i won't do me reports/projects for schoo, but its still the best. I just cant believe youre forced to post this on the internet, and not get any money for it. You really should start selling some of these. And now, one last thing for you to remember:
| Title: the lucky ones
Reviewed By: cuffers On: February 26, 2005 02:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I;ve been reading inu fanfics for a long time.......Many have been long and entertaining this is by far the best fanfic of anything about any storyline i have ever read.........short of a few spelling and grammatical errors your penchant to detail is extrodinary, you kept with all the themes lending your own insight to the unanswered questions of the manga and creating your own path for the charactors to pursue with detailed and poiniant conclusions, what you did to resolve the kikyo issue was nothing short of miraculous....this made me laugh , cry , dream for them and myself what more could anyone wish or expect from a story........you should truely send a copy of this to rumiko herself to allow her to enjoy another take on her precious fuedal fairy tale. you should consider your own plot and start your own manga........i thank you for your creativity and please don't stop bringing us your delightful tales......it was truely memorable and i will not forget your take on it as the rest of rumikos plot unfurls in manga.....excellent, excellent, excellent........... ^..^
| Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 00:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember if I reviewed this when I read it for the first time last month, but it can't hurt to do it again! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! Easily the best IY fanfic out there. I love everything about it. The characters are all so well-defined and grow and change as the story progresses. I love that you made it difficult for hanyous to conceive - it makes perfect sense (biologically) and adds let another layer of complexity to the characters and the story. I love that IY and Kagome open their hearts to all of these wonderful children...exactly what I would expect of them. I love the angst. I love the resolution of the angst. ;) I love Yukio. I looooooove Yukio. I want Yukio. *ahem* Sorry. The only thing I find sad is having to leave Miroku and Sango behind as the story moves into the modern era. Yeah, I understand that they had to live out the normal mortal lives, but I still felt their absence. :( What else can I say? I just love this story so much and I am loving its sequel, "The Coyote Child". Update soon, huh? Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent and work with us!
| Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: Kiramara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 07:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very good. If it had been a book i would say i had trouble putting it down as it was i did not stop reading until the end. the only thing that i would change is the spelling of InuYasha's sword. I am not sure how it is spelled but the begining is Tet_______.
| Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: mgy On: February 19, 2005 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful story! I can't believe the hours I have spend reading your wonderful story or should I say book :). Thank you for sharing this awesome story with all of us.
| Title: PS:
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 18:36 PST
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Neglected to mention how I'd enjoyed your including a lesser-known area of lactation. I could easily see Kagome embracing this unwitting function once she overcame her mortification. Why,why,why must we females be apologetic for our bodies' manifestations?! Keh!! This offered so much on so many levels. I'd just finished the few chapters posted so far on your sequel, "Coyote"--beautiful,am glad to return to this universe! You're right, though-readers should complete this Saga prior to embarking on the continuation's journey (which is amazing in itself, the recognition of different magicks,etc.)
| Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 17, 2005 08:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Terri Botta: This masterpiece sunk its tenterhooks into my skin, penetrating quickly to the heart, not relinquishing its hold as this beautiful, plausible possibility of life for our beloved Inu&Kagome unfurled, evoking a full range of emotions. And when I'd believed this amazing story was navigating toward conclusion, I'd disappointedly check the chapter drop-down menu, pleased yet surprised to see the number of extensions. The pacing from commencement to epilogue was fantastic, the settings lush, the characters fairly vibrating off the pages. Jokes traded between inu sibs & their effervescent neko sister were *hilarious*, as were those caustic shirts that yeah, I could easily see Inu sporting. :) Thanks for such a poignant ride--you'd left *nothing* uncovered as far as the mains' tales is concerned; I'd read on in stunned silence at the broachment of Inu&Kagome's 'pact' as the centuries wore on; yet in fairness, and attempting to grasp the hurtling, increasing velocity of technological evolution of Earth's denizens...this Washuu could almost, almost comprehend *why*. And I too concur re: their certainty of re-discovering themselves. :(( This ship has docked, and I regret disembarking, but plan many, many return trips. Thanks much for writing this (and *GOMEN* for neglecting to include this veritable tapestry's title upon R&R post-chapter 20; FFnet wouldn't permit me to e-you a second time,despite clicking ahead to chapters. Darn those chocolate ramen-ch | Reviewed By: jadedgirl On: February 16, 2005 10:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awsome writer. I loved the story so much. Thank You
| Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 16, 2005 05:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Terri:I've just completed Ch.20,have been sucked into your universe as surely as if Miroku brandished an unwrapped palm toward my cerebellum.;) I'd also read, and raged at your needing to defend your work to the point of citing numerous examples as vindication. However, if it's any consolation, you'd made *my* research into Inu's character--and moments w/Kagome that much easier to track down,and for that I'm quite grateful. I've seen him much as you do, and find him that much more profound a character in surmounting such torturous, embittering obstacles from day one (what captivated me from the beginning from Inu--how well-defined these chatacters are,and their setting). Kagome's fierce protectiveness equally matches his, her weakness for her beloved, promised-elsewhere Hanyou paradoxically strengthening her exponentially. While fairly new to the Inu series, I'm no stranger to active fandom,and appreciate your continued efforts despite negative feedback,and hope to see more. Actually, while merely preparing to load Chapter 21, the thought's occured that this story *should* be optioned into an OAV. Arigatou gozemaisu!!!
| Title: Neko_Chaos
Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 22:43 PST
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oopps...spelling error, how embarassing...it should be Happy not haooy (locks self in closet in shame)
| Title: Neko_Chaos
Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaaaaah! i love your story! I read it on AFF, or FF, I can't remember. But I'm so haooy to run across it here. Yay!!!! This story makes me happy inside, and to honor you i'm going to read it again.
| Title: The Lucky Ones ch.21
Reviewed By: Deanna/Angel On: February 15, 2005 19:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, 1st off i'd like ta say, love the fic it is so awesome and i love Yukio he sounds so cute but mainly i REALLY HAVE TO KNOW how did u get/see/read the all of the Inu Dvd's and Manga i have 1-12 manga (Viz) and i watch the Cartoon Network/Adultswim Inu Anime b/c i .....don't know why ..but i do .And if ya can ,Can u tell me where?/how?/when? did u get/see/read the complete Anime & Manga Inuyasha set? Please & thank u.^_^ ~%~ Deanime*Angel ~%~ email: Deanime1104@yahoo.com
| Title: Magnificent!
Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 14:18 PST
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I have never read anything like it before. I stayed up several long nights trying to read it all. Bleary and red-eyed later from stairing at the screen for hours at a time. Great job with the story!
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