| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
| Pages (74): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] |
Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: FarVistas On: May 24, 2005 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the Inuyasha fics I've read, this stands as my favorite. It's addictive and complete, and I don't mean just that it has an ending. (A rarity in itself. Sigh - "Turnabout is Fair Play", on so many fave-lists, permanently cliff-hung.) What do Inuyasha and Kagome choose to do when their lives are complicated by an orphaned hanyou infant? Up the ante - things get even harder when they purify the jewel and they can't get back through the well. Here, the lives of old and new characters and their purposes, motivations and actions evolve and make sense. (I'm jealous. I want to be these people.) I'd call this one a Best Case Scenario - which is not the same as Easiest, mind - where's the fun in that? They've seen too much pain and they choose to make a difference, not because it's "the right thing to do" but because they...just have to, that's just how it is - as it should be. To anyone who wishes to level charges of OOC, well, there's a bit of a difference in world views from your teens to 40 and I'd expect a big one between modern teens and Kagome-and-Inuyasha teens. You'd expect their struggles to rearrange their priorities. Good lord, the trials they've shared should change and grow people. (C'mon now, really. When's the last time you had to wave armaments at virtually everyone on the continent for your right to survive? Parents not letting you pierce your nipple just doesn't stack up.) Read this. (If you've got the TIME!) It Is Worthy.
|
Reviewed By: me On: May 17, 2005 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is story is just the most bestest story that i have ever read. oh my god it had like all the elements (adventure, drama, love, etc.)and i just want to thank you for writing this sooo wonderfull story
|
Reviewed By: lonelychicanogirl On: May 12, 2005 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason that I rated this fic is because it is one of the greatist story's that I ever in my life read. perfect !!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: tinky On: May 10, 2005 12:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
i loved your story i just finished it. the last chap. i crying my eyes out. i thinky its the best story i've ever read. thanks^_^u rock!
|
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow - amazing.
|
Reviewed By: AmberHaze On: May 02, 2005 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best fic ever! Finally finished! You are awesome!
|
Reviewed By: AmberHaze On: April 29, 2005 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is SO the best fanfic I have ever read. I am only to chapter 33 and I know I have quite a few left, but damn. I have never liked a story as much as yours. It just seems so fitting. I love how you didn't make Kikyou evil, because even though I don't like her much for stealing Inuyasha's attentions, she isn't evil. Wow, I am stunned. I am going to look for more stories by you, and I hope there are.
|
Title: The best
Reviewed By: lilmab207 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 08:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it so much. You should write some more that was the best now Im going to read some more stories and I think yours will still the best. I loved this story .
|
Title: The best
Reviewed By: lilmab207 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 08:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was one of the best story I've ever read. I loved the ending to. I'm just so happy that was the best story ever. nothing was wrong with the story I loved it. Keep Writing!! By far the best story in the world!!!
|
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: April 27, 2005 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did one hell of a job writing this bad boy! It was off the hook and all I have to say is thanx for sucha good and moving story, I was a little teary with some parts. AWWWW! this story is so good and sometimes I hoped it wouldnt end but, than again, I just needed to know what happened to our favorite couple and all their pups. Good job and I hope u come up with another story as GREAT as this one. Bye-Bye! YOU ROCK!!!!!
|
Title: **speechless for 20 minutes...then...**
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 13:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**stunned and trying to find something, but remains speechless for a good 20 min** Oh...My... THAT WA BRILLIANT! OMGOMGOMG! It took me 5 days straight to read... This is by far the Longest Inuyasha fanfiction I've read... but NOT ONCE did it get Boring... And being the mom of a 2 year old and 34 weeks pregnant.. True I'm not a Lemon reader and I usually skip over them, but how you wrote them was...comfortable and it also reflected more on love then "hot wreckless passionate" sex like 98% of IY fanfic lemon are... OMG this fic made me laugh, cry, cringe,.... OMG I have epilepsy so the part about the eclempsia was like "eep"... but thank God I have good blood pressure... I must also commend you on your research! I love researched fanfics... it's more convincing= draws you in more. I hate it when people write about something and 90% is guesswork like one Inuyasha band fic I read they called the "fretboard" of a guitar "The place the fingers push onto the strings". As a musician... it kind of... icked me out....\ But this fic was a masterpeice and so...wow! You should post it on fanfiction.net... I'm still not over it. Oh I must admitt,at first it ws corny to me, but the more I thought about it the more touchimg/warm/sweet that part was when he "fed" him saying she would habe in the past if she could have... I think that was the most memerable part... the 5th time I read it over I broke into tears :P I might draw that scene and put it on deviantart.I'll tell you if I do!
|
Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my lord, i laughed, i cried, i was late for class, twice, and that was perhaps the best story i have yet read. It was perfect!
|
Reviewed By: Enchanted Faery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I don't know who has been saying that Inuyasha was outta character, I thought he was in character, I don't have any of the InuYasha Manga's but I do have ALL of the episodes that came out in Japanese, and I have to agree with you, he is totally in Character! Anyway, LOVED this story, it took me 3 days to read, but man it was awesome! I did a lot of laughing and crying! GREAT JOB!!!
|
Reviewed By: thalia anime Guru On: April 07, 2005 15:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated you're fanfic 10 out of 10 because i enjoyed reading it a lot.I shed tears, laughed,and awwed at how sweet inuyasha and kagome treat each other with such love and also how cool it was when they adopted all those hanyous and treated them as their own. But what really made me shed so much tears was when they see miroku, sango, kohaku and their children at the wedding also when they have Ian. Also because you used so much inuyasha reference,used reference for the wedding ceremony, and used a lot of creativity i give you that rating. EXELLENT JOB!!!!!!!!! WOW BRAVO!!
|
Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in again) On: April 06, 2005 20:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
*just read a little more* HE DOESN'T DESERVE TO BE FORGIVEN~ *shakes fist* /// You are an awesome writer and make me very emotional ^^
|
| Pages (74): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] |
