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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 09:43 PDT
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I loved this story. I am so happy I found it to read. I did notice your writing style changed from the first part (before the wish) to the second part. Both was good but the fist part felt more ordred. I hope to read more of your works later today.
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 21:37 PDT
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One more thing, I love this family! Theyre so loving.. in their own way of course, but a very special way none the less. I found myself wishing i were part of the 'pack' a few times,lol. Once again amazing job!
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 20:46 PDT
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great story and it got better and better as it continued. you are an amazing writer who knows how to capture a reader with your words. thanks for sharing!
| Reviewed By: marinefreak563 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've come across alot of fanfics in my online escapades, but nothing, i mean NOTHING comes close to the amazingness of this story. It is the best thing I've read EVER, including the REAL books :P, after i finish this review i will have read this story, and yes i counted, 57 times. I've also printed it out to read it when my family needs the computer, it took 507 printer pages, 3 ink cartridges, and a replacement printer to accomplish this, AMAZING JOB!
| Reviewed By: marinefreak563 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've come across alot of fanfics in my online escapades, but nothing, i mean NOTHING comes close to the amazingness of this story. It is the best thing I've read EVER, including the REAL books :P, after i finish this review i will have read this story, and yes i counted, 57 times. I've also printed it out to read it when my family needs the computer, it took 507 printer pages, 3 ink cartridges, and a replacement printer to accomplish this, AMAZING JOB!
| Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 21:01 PDT
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read this long time ago & suddenly and out of no where felt like reading it again. i'm glad i did. words cannot describe how beautiful this story is (well, it can, but i'm damn lazy to type it). thank you for sharing this with us. :)
| Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: buubaby29 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 12:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most wonferful and beautifully written story of all time. This seriously has to be my 1000th time reading it. Every time I'm online, I always go to this story and read and then re-read it at least 5 more times....within a week! You are talented, wonderful, and have a great sense of imagination that most people would love to have. (I know I'm one of them). I don't have a favorite part in particular, I love the entire story, but the part that brings more tears to my eyes is when Kagome let's Inuyasha nurse from her, telling him that she would have fed him. That part is the most beautifully written section of the whole story. And I'm not trying to be perverted either. Just thinking of how Inuyasha was treated as a young pup and then growing up in a world that hates him for he is, I think Kagome did the right thing. She didn't do it because she thought she could get a cheap thrill, she did it because she was seeing the small helpless pup that was left out in the cold, not the man he was. Another part I have to point out that brought tears to my eyes, when Inuyasha met up with his loved ones in the world between. I really had to stop reading for about an hour, I couldn't stop crying. Even now it's hard for me to get through that chapter without shedding at least a few tears. But that's what you get when you read a story as marvelous as this. Another thing, the way you portrayed Yukio...he has to be the most original and the most well thought of OC (own character) of all the Inu/Kags stories I ever read. Even my own characters who I've created in my mind are NOTHING compared to him. In the mid-chapters and later chapters...you should have renamed the story..."The Adventures of Yukio" or "Inuyasha!! Oh No IT'S MINI ME!!" He is sooooo much like Inuyasha, it's scary. But he is also like Kagome. I think you balanced out his character quite well. well so, there is my review on this story. I feel sorry for those who read and then write horrible reviews for it. Like I said above at the beginning...this is a Wonferful and Beautifully written story...and I will continue to love, adore, read, and re-read it for all time. Buubaby29 aka Kelli
| Title: Looove
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallly love this story. I've reread it about 6 times now i think. It's just one of those stories you can read over and over again. I started reading The Coyote Child, but you haven't updated that in a while. I wish you would, lol. I love how you write the charaacters. And Yukio is sooo one of my favorites. I like the relationship between him and Emma, and the way he's so good with children. It's such a great story! Please update soon! :)
| Title: Looove
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallly love this story. I've reread it about 6 times now i think. It's just one of those stories you can read over and over again. I started reading The Coyote Child, but you haven't updated that in a while. I wish you would, lol. I love how you write the charaacters. And Yukio is sooo one of my favorites. I like the relationship between him and Emma, and the way he's so good with children. It's such a great story! Please update soon! :)
| Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this!!!! It was so beautifully and realisticly written. It also has now a permant spot on my favorites list. It was especially heart wrenching for me to read the 'delivery' chapters. I, myself, had the unlucky experience of a pre-epclampic pregnancy and wasn't able to wake up for 24 hours after my emergency caesarean. These chapters hit home for me and you didn't pull any punches for the realism you potrayed in your writing. I felt all your characters emotions through your writing (fear, sadness, heart break, joy, love). I look forward to your future endevors in the fanfic/novel universe! BTW- You write Inu and Kags perfectly! Don't ever change them!
| Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can't stop reading this! I'm already on Chapter 17 after two days (that's almost unheard of for me). I love this story! You do a great job of depicting Kagome and Inuyasha relationship, especially with the baby. Also, paying attention to Inuyasha's inner turmoil. Very original story and beautifully written! Just when you think nothing might happen, something always does! Great job! Can't wait to read the rest!!
| Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 00:27 PDT
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This is my second time reading The Lucky Ones. I have to admit it is really a beautiful fic. Thanks again.
| Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 22:51 PDT
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This is my third time reading this fic and I still can't get enough of it. Your creativity and wording keeps this fic so interesting that I'll probably never stop reading it. No matter how often I read it or how much I've memorized there are still constant parts of the fic that make me smile and laugh or shake my head and just want to cry. It's amazing how you stayed so close to the original characters but still made them do or say things that get such a great reaction out of your readers. I only wish more fanfic writers had the vocabulary and writing skills that are shown in this fanfic. Rumiko Takahashi would be very proud and probably congratulate you for an amazing fic. I guarantee I'm not the only reader that wishes this fic could be made into a book so people could carry it around all the time and add it to our physical book collections. I'll probably start reading 'The Coyote Child' again tomorrow for the third time also ^_^ Best Wishes!
| Title: I'll never get sick of this story
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me 5 days the first time, 3 days this time, but I'l NEVER EVER EVER get sick of this story...EVER...This is the best IC past-future INUfic ever. Inuyasha keeps in character so well. Woman you are amazing!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd be gushing at the ending right now, if It wasn't the first time I have read this!!!!!
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