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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: April 06, 2005 20:47 PDT
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I haven't finished your story and am only on the beginning of chapter 17, but of my freakin' GOD!! I have to vent because Inu's such a freakin bastard! He still has doubts after Kagome said she loved him?! And he never said that he loved her back!? HOLY FREAKIN COW!! What a baka! Somebody needs to sock some knowlage into that bozo of a hanyou. BLEH! /// Okay, I'm done now. ^^ Now to keep reading! I'll review again when I finish the story.
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long time since I've reviewed (sorry). I'm almowst reading this story. It's one of the best this site has to offer. These kind of stories inspire me to keep writing no matter what. Thanks for wirting such a masterpiece.
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Reviewed By: linz On: April 03, 2005 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! i love the ending it is sooooo kawaii!!!!!! you are a talented author. i love the story, and i'm making all my friends read it!
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Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: serenathegoddess On: April 02, 2005 18:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the most heart wrenching Inu-yasha fanfic I have ever read. And I have read many. But believe me, this was the best. It took me three whole days to finish it, but it was very worth the time. And the detail you put into Inu-yasha was amazing. As I read the author notes, I noticed that you always explained what people constantly asked. But it was great, and I'm glad I took the time to read it and not just skim through. You are a great story writer, keep it up.
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Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: cute but psycho girl On: April 02, 2005 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was by far the best story i've ever read. you tell the storie of youkio and then when hes older tou tell about ALL of their adopted hanyous. you give their backgrounds how you found them and what they liked or did. you just did it in so much detail and it was just sooooo perfect. :) :) :) :)
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Title: OKAY
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*SOB* OH my god I just finished reading the entire thing and I swear you just take my emotion on a roller coaster, during the last 4 chapters I CRIED, LAUGHED, SOBBED and smiled ^_^ and you gave the warm fuzzy feeling too. You do a great job at portaying all the characters and you do keep INU in character. I swear as I read this I could see it all in my head. GREAT JOB I bow to you oh great one. Please keep writing.
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Title: OKAY
Reviewed By: Hoshiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 21:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I'm at chapter 35 and I'm in tears. I think this is one of the best stories I have EVER read, every thing is refreshingly unique. Your story makes me smile and cry all at once. You're a really talented author and no I'm not just blowing smoke up your ass in hopes that you keep writing (although it would be great if you did). Okay, now I'm going to go on and read the rest of it but I just wanted to let you know how I felt after the summarization of the last chapter. WOW. GREAT JOB. You really should get paid of this, or at least consider writing a book.
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Reviewed By: Kikio Himura On: March 30, 2005 12:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love your story. i cried so many times during it it was soooooo wonderful. Thank you for the pleasure of reading this wonderful peice. I greatly enjoyed it. Great job.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 09:16 PST
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This is one of th greastest inuyasha fan fics i've ever read. It made me cry and laugh, its a beutiful thing to see something this good.
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Title: eww
Reviewed By: OscarBerry On: March 17, 2005 13:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ewww this story is gross
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 03:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the funniest, sweetest, most enjoyable fics that I have ever read. I look forward to when you start writing stories about some of the characters from this fic. Yukio, Miroku and Tetsu are just some of the ones I would like to read more about. Hopefully I can get back into my fics and be able to get into details as much as you have. By reading yours I have seen some areas where I can improve my own.
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Reviewed By: lazzykane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 13:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have made me laugh and cry in the same chapters you are a gifted and talented person i can't get enough i read and reread this story and i still laugh and cry i think this is a perfect ending into a new begining for series i couldn't of think of a better one if i tried so please continue writing as i wait on bended knee and beg you.......see you soon i hope
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Reviewed By: sveta89 On: March 09, 2005 05:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it
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Title: YAY Asome
Reviewed By: Magic Max On: March 06, 2005 22:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is thebest fanfic ive ever read! You are amazing.
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Reviewed By: Kachiqua On: March 01, 2005 19:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most beautiful story i have ever read on M.M.! It was so touchig!!! Please let there be a sequal!!!!!!!! I stayed up so long each night, driving my mom up a wall. My family thought i was obsessed. Great story!!!!!!!!
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