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Reviewed By: uhh.... On: February 05, 2005 15:29 PST
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this story is cute and all...but chapter 14 is a little...odd. the whole kagome willing to nurse inuyasha thing kinda creeped me out. good story line though. :)
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 16:01 PST
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Wow...there's so much that I need to say about this story, but truly, not enough room. So I'll try to keep it condensed. First off, I think that you've got an amazing talent and you definately deserved to end up in the featured fanfic forum. The characters were perfectly on the button and the plot was both sweet, moving, and funny in parts. I do have a few small snits, but I really don't want to bother you with them too much. I'd rather encourage you to keep writing as well as you do.
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Reviewed By: EI On: January 31, 2005 15:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very amazing story. Even though it was 50 chapters long, it never seemed too long or dragged out. Everything flowed nicely together. Very very good job! EI
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Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 11:35 PST
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My friend read me the best parts of this story. She gave me a complete summary (this took more than a few hours). But, not only was I completely attentive the entire time, but I decided to read the story for myself, even though I know what happens. Believe me, this is a major compliment. I'll review again when I finnish reading.
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Reviewed By: Lady_of_Eternal_Twilight On: January 25, 2005 16:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Possibly one of the most wonderful stories I have ever seen. You manage to portray the story so well, yet still keep the characters true to their original selves. The story really feels like your there, not just reading it! I especially like your version of their future, it seems well,... real! A truly awe-inspiring fanfic.
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Reviewed By: lalalaaaaaa On: January 23, 2005 16:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh. *big sigh of contentment*
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Reviewed By: An Avid Reader On: January 22, 2005 09:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i thought that since this is my third time reading this fanfic i should review. I absolutely love this story. It's one of my top three favorites. I doubt you're still even reading reviews now but i just wanted to tell you (even though i'm pretty sure you already know) That you're a talented author and you can count on me to read any writing project you do even if it's not in the Lucky One's universe, but if it is it will be appreciated. ^_^ -Darkness Falls
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Reviewed By: Angie McClelland On: January 17, 2005 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fascinating. Absolutely fascinating. I'll be honest, when I read the summary I thought this wasn't going to be the greatest story (concept wise at least), but you proved me wrong a hundred fold. All the characters were totally in, well, character. I have seen InuYasha in both Japanese and English so I know what changes have been made in the translations and such. Even with its incredibly long length, I couldn't help but keep reading to the end. I really wonder just how long this story is in printed form. Different things I loved about the story: -The way InuYasha draped his haori around Kagome's shoulders whenever she nursed and how it lead to InuYasha's confession and their bonding. To be honest, I was a little dissappointed when he didn't continue the tradition to Ian. - The inu language and pack behavior. It was refreshingly new and surprising that no one else (that I've read) included it/ came up with something similar. - The 'Naming Ceremony' and InuYasha's T-shirts. That fit him amazingly well and I laughed each time one was mentioned. - The significance Ayumi. I really liked how you brought her into the story and how she was the one who understood (as much as she could) and knew of all of them. - How Kagome and InuYasha were linked and lived all that time. While the idea has been done, you made the circumstances very unique. All-in-all, an extremely good read. You are an exceptionally gifted writer. I look forward and hope for more.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: KireiKitsune13 On: January 16, 2005 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope 10 means it was an awesome story i read your story originally on fanfic and i loved it but then it was taken off but i managed to find it on this site. Your story is the greatest one I have ever read it made me laugh and cry(literally) and it is by far my all time favorite.
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Reviewed By: chezagirl05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. If there was one word for it, it would be WOW!!! This story made me cry about 11 times I couldnt believe how good this was. Im extremely jelous of how well you write and how creative you are. Congradulations on making #1 on my list of best stories.
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Reviewed By: 23413 On: January 10, 2005 22:53 PST
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shippo's 6 said so in a official inuyasha magazine just tellin ya this story has made my day and ive only read up to chap. 13
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Title: OMG GREAT STORY!
Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is truley such a great story. it actually brought me to tears. Keep up the good work and hope to see something like LO in the future!
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Title: very nice
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 11:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the entire thing over all. It is a wonderful story that is a step above the rest. The way you made it so Hanyous couldn't have babies was a very nice touch and alowed the rest of the story to play out well. Very nice job... ^_~
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Title: THE BEST STORY EVER
Reviewed By: kasumi1205 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 20:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't what to say. This is the best storie I've read. This even tops the first storie I read on here that hooked me too the site. I absolutely loved this storie. You are a great writer. No, your an AMAZING writer. I wouldn't surprized if you entered this into a movie contest thing, and won. This would make a great movie. You should send it to the people of Inuyasha and ask them to make this a movie. I bet billions of people would watch it. I know I would!! Again, this is a very, very, very amazing storie..I've got 971 characters left. now its 938. What ever I being retarded again. LOL. This is the longest review I've ever written to someone about a story, you are so talented. PLz write some more fanfics, I'll keep checking to see, cuz I sure as hell will read them! (^_~)
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Title: WOW...again
Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 15:41 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! This truly is an amazing story! This is actually my 3rd time reading it!! I followed you while you were still updating!! I must say that I have never read a book or piece of fiction that envoked as many emotions as you have in this one. I laughed, I cried, I was anxious, angry and sometimes all in the same chapter! You truly are a talented writer and I hope that you will not let them go to waste (I'm not sure if you are in college or not). All of the hard work and research I can tell you put into this fic really paid off!! This is a wonderful story with true to life characters and I can see you going far in life if you continue writing in the future!! I just found that you have yet ANOTHER fic and it's in the LO universe!! I look forward to reading any work of yours whether in the LO universe or not!! Keep up the awesome work and keep me posted on if you decide to do anything with this fic!! I will glady support you in any way that I can. Once again, you are a seriously talented writer, and I am humbled by your use of every part of the human physical and emotional body!! Keep up the excellent work, and I eagerly await anything your amazing mind has to come up with!!! Ja, Corinthia ^_^
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