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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Warriorpan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 21:30 PDT
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i know this story has been done forever, but when i was reading this chapter..actually a few before it when miroku blew up...i was like where is his mate...and then i thought of Ayumi because she knows and then this chapter came along and i was like he he he lol
| Reviewed By: Mysteriously Moi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me nearly three weeks to finish reading this! It was absolutley wonderful! You have a flare for writing. You made it all the way to 49 chapters and I thought that was odd, because you had one more to go for it to be 50. :) But it was one of the best Inuyasha fanfictions i've ever read. You kept the characters- including the ones you made- in character! Magnificant! Thank you! I have few complaints. The creativity of the characters was positively awesome- I just wish I could remember which hanyou was named what! You have a great style of writing, excellent grammer, and originality and creativity. I thouroughly enjoyed reading your work. Thank you again!
| Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly amazing! You made all of your own characters so believeable and loveable(well, those who we were supposed to love anyway, and you kept all the original characters true to character. I love how you made InuYasha mature in an extreamely believable way. He's such a good father. The chapter early on when Mama takes Kagome to the OB/GYN really made my skin crawl. You did an excelent job with that situation in particular. I could really imagion how Kagome must have felt. I loved how you threw so much information into the story and wove it in so flawlessly without it being overbearing in the least. Not only is this the best adoption, InuKag w/ children, dramatic, heart-warming fic I've ever read, but also the best portrayal of them living in the future without it being an AU fic. You really did a wonderful job on everything. Kudos, Bravo, Congradulations, and however else I know how to commend your story but can't think of right now. This story was truely a fantastic achievement.
| Reviewed By: Sango 45 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 03:46 PDT
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I LOVE this fanfic! I've read it so many times ^.^ Keep up da good work!
| Title: Great work
Reviewed By: EasternCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 03:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's always good to find good fanfictions especailly because a reader has to sort through mountains of garbage to find one. I don't really know what to say, I don't want to sound like an immature fanboy. It was great, and I loved this fic. It was also good to see that there are people out there who know how to end a king sized fic, not turning it into a never ending story. You had all the charaters right, and the entire plotline was great. Thank you for this outstanding work.
| Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 02:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was perfect in every way. i laughed. i cried. your an awesome writer. i'm considering writing my own fanfiction. i can only hope that when i do, it will be half as good as yours.
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 04:36 PDT
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i really loved this story... very good story... well done!
| Title: i can't BELIEVE i haven't commented on this, yet!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 12:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you...are...an...AMAZING...author! this was just so...so...so...beautiful! my cousin, who is not an anime fan AT ALL, actually asks me to read this (and break it down, between the series and ur story, for understanding), in her free time! the dynamics of mother and daughter with the whole issue of Yukio, the breastfeeding, and the assumed acts of Inu and Kag were REALLY realistic and, though i'm VERY used to the sweet, doting, understanding Mrs. Higurashi, this is so real and on point! i mean, COME ON! the well, the hanyou, the jewel...okay, Moms is a patient one, but, the whole adopting a baby (who looks all to much like Inu) and nurturing it...oh, but it's not Kagome's child (...riiiight)--it's a HUGE pill to swallow. i HATED that gynecologist! she shoulda been sued for breaking patient/doctor confidentiality by visiting Kagome at her school! it was like stalking to me! she made her cry! *sniff* Inu leaning DEEP into her mom's stuff was deep--i felt it coming, but WHOOO! And he was so comforting, throughout the whole ordeal. the breastfeeding Inu...wow..I nearly cried. The sex wasn't a general act, to them; it was so deep and special (even when rushed, after kagome ravished the poor boy, when he came back from the Western lands). LOL! poor love-starved Inu turned hentai! lol! nah, he just loved her and wanted to be a CLOSE to her as he could be, i'd imagine (since conversation wasn't his major talent, he showed it in acts--this being a MAJOR way, by making him vulnerable and also showing his want to comfort, love, and pleasure her). Now, hoo boy, kikyou and Inu...IN-TENSE! i was SO very scared! wow, as abrupt and off the chain as Inu is, he REALLY does have a sense of honor! i'm so glad it turned out the way it did with Kikyou letting him go and the merge (Midorikyou). RIN is so sweet! Sess has a lot on his plate...no wonder he lost it! gotta feel for him! shows a LOT that he trusted Rin with Kags and Inu, huh? Yukio is my BABY! i LOURVE him! loved seeing him grow up...loved the adoption of all the hanyous (and the one cat youkai); loved the reunion; loved the personalities of all the adult kids and the cuteness of the younger uncle in Souta, and the 'grandkits' (cuz Shippou still takes Kagome as a mom! yay!) the wedding was sweet, but funny, too! Miroku, Kohaku, and Sango showing up FLOORED me! so wonderful! I REALLY felt for Miroku (the hanyou)--that was DIRTY how his mom did him! just wanted to hug him! so sad about Yukio's mate leaving him! and Kagome as a hanyou medical specialist, Inu as and architect, Yukio aa a civil engineer? DUDE! NEVA saw that coming! the firht with Yukio, Miroku and Inu was intense and the scene with inu and miroku talking and hugging each other had my eyes all teary. the thret of expulsion from the pack...gotta admit, i was nervous, for a bit. Inu does not PLAY about Kags! but, i had a feeling she wouldn't have let that happen, even if Inu DID kick him out. and the ACTUALLY birth! OMG! that was INTENSE! i HATED that cocky doctor! OMG...the drama...u had me tense, reading about INU and KAGS! yay for Sess coming to the rescue! and the whole scene with the final goodbyes and meetings, greetings, and confessions of his long lost family members...OMG! so sweet! when they gave him strength and he gave it ALL to Kagome! wow! he REALLY loves her! yay! they made it! YOKATTA! i love the way Yukio took over, even all the pressure and uncertainty! he really shined! i'm so glad Miroku found someone! i LOURVE Ian! i love everything about this fic and have reread it NUMEROUS times! this is one of my all-time fav Fics....JU RAWKS, terri!
| Reviewed By: gothic princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 18:48 PDT
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lllllllloooooooooovvveeeeeeedddddd itttt! so cool you rock !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 08:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally found this fic randomly and I am very glad I did. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for writing such an awesome story. :3
| Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is an absolute masterpiece to behold. It kept me on the edge of my seat, wanting more right up until the very end. Your grasp of the characters and of storyline was marvelous. I am really at a loss for words on describing this piece other than masterful. Keep up the phenominal work.
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: kagome_piany [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. THE BEST FANFIC EVER I COULDNT STOP I ENDED UP PROCRASTINATING. THATS HOW GOOD IT IS IT MADE ME CRY, LAUGH AND ENJOY TO THE MAX IT WAS LIKE AN ORGASIM...BUT FOR MY HEAD...XD THE BEST EVER....MUST MAKE MORE PLEASE I BEG YOU BEST FANFIC EVER. ITS SO GOOD RUMIKO SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO AN ACTUALL MOVIE. YOU ROCK MY SOCKS. AND IM NOT WEARING ANY. THATS HOW GOOD IT IS. WOW. THE BEST FANFIC EVER
| Title: chpt 9 & 10
Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
her mom and that doc are complete bitches!!!!
| Title: That was b e a u t iful!!!!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 15:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so beautiful! It made cry!!! I've never read a more beautifuller fic! It made want to cry and laugh at the same time! You are a great writer and I hope you keep writing for it is great! It was so cute and sad and happy and and oh I can't think of any more word and the ones I can I can't spell! Your fic was so heart warming! It was the best! I could think of no other fic that could out best this one! I hope you will keep up the great writing with other fic's! because I'll tell you I'll probley read them! Oh, I gave you a 10 on everything because I'm nice like that and they needed a 10! My favorite part in the fic was Kagome and Inuyasha getting to see there old friends and got one question. I think you said that Kagome and Inuyasha named one of there children Sango but I didn't read anything in the fic that let everyone know she was there. So if you could, did you say that Inuyasha and Kagome named one of there children Sango? Great fic! ^-^
| Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:24 PST
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Wow...I'm just speechless....this had got to be one of the best stories that I have ever read!!!!! This story had made me laugh, happy, and cry!!!!! This is my first time reading this since I only had internet for a couple of months now and I discovered this story all on my own and I'm really glad that I did!!!!!!!! It took me about a week to read the whole thing, and now I'm happy and yet really sad to see it end...but now I can read your other stories!!!!!! This will always be a part of my favorites and somehow, this story had made me more happier than I have ever felt before. Thank you for your wonderful story and who knows when I'll read it again, but it will always be in my heart!!!(Sounds corny but I don't care) Buen Trabajo^_________^
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