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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 03:58 PST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-InuKag-Romance- Fic-2nd.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: QueenNerdFace [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 17:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story so much! you write so well and make inuyasha and kagome seem so real!
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Reviewed By: QueenNerdFace [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 17:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story so much! you write so well and make inuyasha and kagome seem so real!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Serina rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story, if it was a book i would not be about to put it down!!!!! :-)
| Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 14:40 PST
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sry, but I JUST HAD TO REVIEW AGAIN!!! >.<
to add to my last review, i had to say...the growth of yukio was quite fast and amazing. i mean, the first time i read about him, he was all crying, gurgling and baby-ish! now he's all grown up and mature. just love these "time thingys" well, it took me almost bout a week to finish it. when i look back now, yea...it was a loong way... GREAT JOB!!! (again) Kimiko =D
| Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 14:36 PST
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...W.O.W. this story is just SO AWESOME! In the last 10 chapters, where the Inu family are all in the future, i was like...whoa, alot of time has past. and in the last chapter, i realised alot of things happened from the earliest in the feudal era, to the thoughts of kag's in the future. great job!!! this story is just soo...the best!!! ^^ Kimiko =D
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 00:02 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 22:11 PDT
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How frickin adorable. And yet so true. I can see Inuyasha telling Inuyasha that story of his past. And hwo they first came together actually happen. I love it. I think Inuyasha was so IC. Incredible. =D
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffsniff* it was a good fanfic, i really enjoyed reading it. bye-the-bye, how long did it take you to complete this story? i know of a sess/kag story that is going to be this long or longer and its taken the author around a year or so to write it. just curious. Later, FL
| Title: Keh, I hate being proved wrong...
Reviewed By: inuzrule [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 21:22 PDT
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Hello again. Guess I jumped to assumptions after all. Should've waited a few more chapters, I guess... Anyways, I take back my accusation that Kouga was OOC, but you have to admit that it looked like you were writing him off as an arrogant jerk. :( So, my formalest apologies for the long-winded and one-sided argument, and I continue to look forward to finishing this tale. Sayonara until then!
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 12:13 PDT
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squeeee!!!! my fav character is about to enter!! too bad for me, tho. i have to take a shower now. *pouts* Later, FL p.s. I WILL BE BAK!! lol
| Title: If any character is OOC...
Reviewed By: inuzrule [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 22:33 PDT
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Hiyas. I know I'm only halfway through your intriging story, but I have a comment regarding your rant on OOC in your story. I agree: InuYasha seems very in-character, if not a little more open about his feelings. You are absolutely right about his maturing over gradual time, and how his and Kagome's relationship has indeed grown in the anime and manga. Having said that, I must say that the only character I found OOC was Kouga. Not that your take on Kouga isn't a possibility...Kouga could easily try an attempt on Yukio or InuYasha's life. However, I believe that Kouga has also matured over time. He has gone from an arrogant, conceited, spoilt wolf-youkai with only power on his mind to a more responsible, more caring person, who has stopped slaying humans, shown far less impulsiveness on several occasions, and who even respects Kagome's wishes to a certain extent. He is a powerful ally, as you have made mention to in your story, and he is very strong and trustworthy. Even InuYasha, his fiercest rival, has recognized this. He and InuYasha mock-fight each other almost every time they meet, but Kouga has stopped being in any real danger or a posing threat to our beloved hanyou. In fact, Kouga had been trusted by InuYasha to guard Kagome when our protagonist could not in at least one volume of the manga. Kouga is even trusted with the knowledge of InuYasha's human night, something that InuYasha would not let slip willingly to any true enemy. Furthermore, I believe that while Kouga is still somewhat enamored of Kagome, he mostly displays his affection to her to get a rise out of InuYasha, much like Shippo's taunts and insults. He may find Kagome very endearing and strong, but after constant rejection I'm quite sure he's mostly given up, and simply keeps up the ruse to hide his disappointment. No man can be that clueless (although I have my doubts about the brightness of Houjo and Akitoki). And it is clear that Kouga is as bright as InuYasha or Miroku. While your Kouga makes for a good story, I simply feel that he would not act in such a manner. This is only my opinion, and I just wanted it expressed. I look forward to reading more!
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, i guess its about time to rate/review the story. ive read the last chapters in a matter of hours and i am quite pleased. xD lol rating: 10, i absolutely love this one. and if u didnt have the next chap already posted i would get u thru the computer. xD j/k. Later, FL
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 16:30 PDT
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ps: i suggest u publish on ffnet if u haven't already. that is a large site and i know u would get many reviews, fanarts, and possibly some amvs. heck, u might even beat out Tales From The House of the Moon which is like the most popular story on the site. later, FL
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 16:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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apparently (sp?) ur work was stolen. i am sorry for that. i know the pride of being an author and all the work one puts into a story. i loved ur story and will continue reviewing ur story on here. at this point tho, the only place i can access fanfics is at school so i can only read them on inuyasha-fiction.com. for now....i really enjoy ur story. cant wait to finish it. ;D *hugs terri* i hope that person is punished for their deeds. (again, sp? lol)
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