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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: beanner On: May 27, 2004 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have loved this story since the beginning and i can't wait to see what happends next... yukio sounds like he greew up a hotty.... i really am going to be sorry to see this story come to an end ... but i love this story and hope you write more simalar, i love your writing style, and i can't wait to see how it ends, plz update soon. ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 14:02 PDT
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I love this story and have been following it since you started it. Now that they have a family reunion going, what are the chances that I can talk you into having Hojou and Ayumi show up? Ayumi already knows that Inuyasha and Yukio are hanyou. She can meet a hanyou of her own at the reunion. She and Hojou could meet some of Kagome and Inuyasha's unmated children (hint, hint). ;) Also, please let us know which of Kagome's powerful children took care of the evil doctor when Jii-chan Higurashi made the phone calls to prevent the doctor from talking to Kagome's school administrators. I'm curious about that. Thanks and please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Anandria(not logged on) On: May 27, 2004 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! YAY! Inu Yasha's sterile(or close to it)! Finally, someone else who gets it! Heh heh! I love this story, I was drawn to it by KrisCynical's art, and I was blown away, this is absolutely awesome! I was so thrilled to read something that followed them taking care of the child, and the dissappearance of the Shikon no Tama. You've done everything wonderfully, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Continue, onegai!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 12:17 PDT
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I can't believe this is that CLOSE to being over! WHAHHHHHH!!!! I'm gonna miss it! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating! I love the story and this latest chapter was just what I needed to take me away from the stress of work and make me smile.
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Title: Happy, happy, happy
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I loved seeing things from Yukio's point-of-view, and his affectionate yet mildly antagonistic relationship with his cat-daemon sister. As always, half the charm of your storytelling is the use of those perfect little details (I used to work for Oracle, so I had to laugh when I saw the comment about Inuyasha losing his motorcyle racing privileges after crashing in a Oracle-sponsored race...that was soooo fitting to the corporate culture there...) Loved Yukio's reactions upon seeing Mama Higurashi again, but it did bring a consistency question to mind: why didn't Yukio recognize Kagome's scent all those years ago when when she wandered over to the family estate and he brought her home? Or did he, and he was in on Kagome's time-traveling? I seem to recall you mentioning in the previous chapter that Inuyasha and Kagome chose not to tell their children about the time-traveling, so that the kids wouldn't be tempted to visit the shrine and interfere with events... Ah, well. Another fabulous chapter. As always, you've nailed the emotional truth of a scene while remaining "true to life." This is truly one of the best Inuyasha stories out there!
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Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: May 27, 2004 11:25 PDT
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I'm so sad this story is finally wrapping. It absolutly is one of my alltime favorite stories (and I've read many). Every chapter is a jem and can be appreciated almost as a microcosom. I can't say enough good things about this sensational story, even as it winds to a close.
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: May 27, 2004 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story! Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 09:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just thought I'd leave another note letting you know how much I am enjoying your well-thought out, well-planned, beautiful story. I love every minute of it and reread it constantly! Thank you so much!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: May 27, 2004 08:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-giggles- that was a wonderful chapter! Poor Mama, shes in for a BIG suprise! lol i love eri and yukio, there's so funny with thier love/hate relationship!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 08:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a wonderful chapter! Yukio is all grown up and quite a young man. His reunion with his grandmother was so sweet. And of course, his interactions with his sister hit all the right sibling rivalry notes. Wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 27, 2004 06:29 PDT
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Great chapter! You really have a gift for writing dialog. I love the interaction between Yukio and his family. The internal dialog is great too. Heck, I love everything about this story! Thanks for writing!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 27, 2004 05:44 PDT
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Nice.
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Title: One of the best
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 05:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Madam, I wish to inform you that this is one of the best pieces of fiction that I have read. Okay, now that I've got that out of my system, I would like to say that this is a fantastic story. It is literate and well thought out. I have enjoyed it from start to this near finish. I hope that your next endevour is as good as this one. Good fortune to you, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Megome-Sama On: May 25, 2004 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Inuyasha fics I've ever read. I love the Kagome/Inu pairing (it's getting harder to find a good story with that pairing), and the whole plot behind the story. Yukio is just adorabible and I love his Inu-hanyou speak. ^-^ Update soon!
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