| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 18:54 PDT
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I will do to you what i did to luna sea about I Still Need You. UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDAT E!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPD ATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!P lease? ITS ALMOST TWO WEEKS AGAIN! UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona On: May 09, 2004 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have written a very good fic here. It kept my attention, and not just the naughty bits. The story was not only interesting, but it was also compelling and seemingly very IC. Great Job. I hope to read other pieces from you about your little family.
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Title: really nice
Reviewed By: Austinn On: May 07, 2004 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story it is really good and i jst cant get enough hope u update soon!!
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Title: The Latest Chapters
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen, I've been working and haven't had time to catch up on all my ff's! I see you're on a vacation of your own and I know the story is coming to an end *sniff*. I loved in Ch. 27 the way Kouga egged on Inuyasha - that was so cute! I wonder if they'll let do that in the anime? And Inuyasha calling Kagome his koshii is so sweet! I wish when the anime comes to a close, that they could end it like that - as far as Inuyasha, Kikyo, and Kagome anyway! ^_^ Sara-sama
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: lovin' it On: May 07, 2004 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I really love this fic. It has got to be an absolute fav. I can't wait for the ending. Don't make all your readers wait long, k?!? Thanks for all the hard work and writing so far.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: maggie On: May 04, 2004 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oops sorry i made a mistake in the ratings!:S but anyways please right more! i luv it!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: maggie On: May 04, 2004 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luvvv this story! Is there more chapters??!?!?!? please reply to.. crest_of_love@hotmail.com
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: May 04, 2004 16:05 PDT
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I have enjoyed reading your fic so muchh! This has been one of the best chapters I think. You wrote the encounter with Kikyou well, it was wonderful..and the tenderness of inuyasha and kagome after as well. I look foward to seeing more of your writing
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Reviewed By: Shaid On: May 04, 2004 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the most amazing fan fictions, or fictions period I've ever read. I love your interpretations of the characters and the emotions they feel. The way you've had them express those emotions feels very right and I am totally in awe of your skills. And I love the way you've written the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha. I nearly cried when they finally got to make love, it was so beautifully written. You made it sexy without being too incredibly explict or outragous. It was simple and real. I already love the Anime and the Manga but your portrayal of them makes them feel so much more real and so much more alive. You've written a beautiful story here, which I cannot wait to see more of. Maybe it's the lack of sleep talking (I stayed up all night to read this) but I thought it was one of the most amazing things I've ever read. Thank you for writing it.
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: May 03, 2004 20:19 PDT
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EEEE!!, please update sooonnnn!!!
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Title: The Best
Reviewed By: Jade Catseye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 17:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic i've ever read, no lie. Your writing techniques are by far the most advanced and well written ive ever come across. I thoroughly enjoyed, even though it took over 3 days for me to read the entire thing, which is a good thing because i have a thing for long fics. ^-^ The way you portrayed each character was completely and wholely in character ,without the subtlest hints of OOCness. I adored the way you portrayed the love between Inuyasha and Kagome, from beginning to end because I think that's how it would be if those events were to occur. Your imagination and ideas and creativity went above and beyond and sorry for taking up all your time with this response but i feel as if i need to voice it since this fic was soooo goood! I especially loved little Yukio and the inu youkai language that he shared with his adopted parents. It was so kawaii. Since i'm probably dragging this out a bit too long, ill end my review by saying that you are without a doubt the best author out here and i cant wait until your next update. Have fun on your vacation and i wish you well. I'll be waiting here patiently...more or less (^-^) until the next chapter. Ciao!
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 13:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeze update!? i want to know what inu yasha wishes for and wnt to hear about the wedding luv it so far, though pleeze [leeze pleeze update soon!!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: May 01, 2004 06:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! With these three chapters I was on an emottional roller coaster - totally sad, filled with anxiety and then happiness for the family. It was so touching when Kagome finally said that Inuyasha could build her a house.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: May 01, 2004 06:06 PDT
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: April 30, 2004 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I continue to read this phenominal story ... I have to comment on the rebuttal. I have seen up to episode 140 of Inuyasha (in Japanese) and your Inuyasha fits with - there might be some OOCness but 1) that's part of the freedom of FICTION and 2) we don't know everything about Inuyasha; who's to say he wouldn't do or say some of those things ... If you can't handle some out of characterness then you shouldn't be reading fanfiction to begin with. Now that I'm done with my little rant. :-) This story and a few others are just amazing. After waiting for some time for some good stories (as in good plot, character development, the whole nine yards...) I am glad to say I've found another very well done story. You know a story is good when you keep coming back for more ... you can't wait to finish it but once you finish it you get mad cuz you want more. That is the mark of a good story and a good author.
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