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Reviewed By: smg16 On: April 06, 2004 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this fanfic. One of my favorites. I can't wait to read what happens next. I check almost everyday to see if you have updated. Keep up the good work!! :-D
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg that was the most touching thing I had ever read please write more soon this is good
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 00:59 PDT
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eep. poor poor Sesshy. i don't know where to start. the chapter was.... wow. was not expecting that. for Sesshoumaru to loose it like that... so many emotions. i loved that. this story is so unbelievable. but it's now 4 am and i'm about to pass out. i love this story!! so cute. so good. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: April 05, 2004 22:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaahhh, brotherly bonding! How cute! I loved it, the two sons of the great demon lord working together.(For once) I can't wait to see what Kagome has been up to while Inuyasha has been playing around as 'Inugami-sama' He He, he's so huggably adorable somtimes. Of course he's also 'wring his neck' frustrating alot of the time too, ne? But I suppose thats part of the reason why we all love him. I've been wondering what would happen if Hojo was to see Yukio? both of their reactions would be just classic. I can see it now, Hojo all clueless (Like he's ever anything else) and Yukio all growly protective of his 'Mother-female'. Maybe you could throw a scene like that in there for me. Well, Not much else to say except that I LOVED IT!! Write more soon, your the best! Later ^_^
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Reviewed By: DustShadow On: April 05, 2004 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_______________________________^ this stoary rocks mah socks. keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:20 PDT
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YAYY!!! I'm SO glad yasha-baby was able to make fluffy-sama sane again! ^_^ the pain in the ass was just what the royal one needed!!! YAYYY!!! Now Rin will be happy again! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:15 PDT
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AAAAAwwwwww!!! and inu and sesshy moment how heart warming :). can't wait to see were this goes!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: MonsterKat On: April 05, 2004 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better! Wow! For all those people who complain about IY and all being OOC, i think they also need to read more manga translations and just imagine how people (and demons) can progress. Excellent writing! Please keep updating!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Jezz Jamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 24 was very impressive. I enjoyed it immensely. Sesshomaru and Inuyasha working together to restore the Western Lands is just as it SHOULD be. I loved it. I think it would be really interesting if Sesshomaru award Inuyasha with land of his own some how. Don't you? If you don't use that idea maybe I'll put in my own story.... Anyway, what would really be great is if you had a Miroku/Sango lemon scene or atleast, just a Miroku/Sango scene. Yeah? Just a thought. Well, can't wait to see what happens next chapter. This is easly the best Inuyasha fic I've ever read, so PLEASE keep it up. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Diane Long On: April 05, 2004 15:32 PDT
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I really enjoyed chapter 25. It was wonderful to see a deeper expression of how noble Inuyasha has become as he has grown. Even on his own, without Kagome's tempering presence, he show his kindness and dignity. Well done.
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Title: The Lucky One is Me
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this fic, and I've got to say that I am really impressed with your talent. You've got a gift for catching the emotions, and the mind of your readers. Given what I know about the series, the past you've given Inu Yasha is appallingly believable, and Kagome's reaction to his revealing it is very in character. You have touched on several different things that I have never seen before in any of the Inu stories I have read. Post Partum Depression, and induced lactation being the most glaringly obvious. I'm not sure what Muse kissed you, but I hope it comes back again and again. Very, VERY solid story.
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Reviewed By: Hey Look Its Me! On: April 05, 2004 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it and all I gotta say is well the obvious... YOU'RE GOOD.
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Reviewed By: Gina C. On: April 05, 2004 12:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never realized I could review. *allows moment of utter stupidity to pass* Anyway, this story is wicked awesome. You take on the characters is excellent, even if some people think it's a bit OOC (I think your development for them explains their behavior, but whatever). And I love Kristin's drawings going along with them. Thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 10:36 PDT
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Absolutely wonderful job on your latest chapter! Thanks so much for sharing, and please post more!
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Title: Did I ever tell you you're my hero?
Reviewed By: YamiNeko (not logged in) On: April 05, 2004 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fact that you have actually done research for your fic astounds me. I love this story! Although the Japanese words are a little hard for me; I am, after all, just an American, lol.
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