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Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 01:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I've seen your postings on a few of my Inuyasha groups; and now I had some time to read the whole story! I love how you have written the characters, including Inuyasha's childhood and Kagome's mother's life and her worry for her daughter. I don't know if this is the end of the story, but it's just so WONDERFUL!! ^_^ And yes, I've seen Kristin's work on the group, and she's done such a wonderful job! Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: God is broke On: March 05, 2004 23:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read. The idea is unique and fresh. Your character development is great. You don't rush them into anything, and you give them time to grow. While keeping them in the same personality that they already have. You make me feel like I'm with them expericeing everything with them. The part where Inuyasha was sleeping on the bed with Yukio really warmed my heart. You have a great talent for writing. I can't for the rest of the story and what you write in the future.
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: March 05, 2004 23:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I can't say that enough or convey how much I mean that statment in mear writing. Your a genius, I love this story and your writing. I loved everything about this chapter. the lemon was done in a tasteful manner and the story of Inu's past almost made me cry. Poor puppy. Go Kagome! I can't wait to read more. Are they going to have a run in with Kikyo or Kouga? I'm not really fond of either of them so I hope that Inu puts them in their place like he did that bitchy doctor! I was so cheering him on when he told that woman off, and I loved how he 'Keyed' her car. Ha Ha! Well, hope to see an update again from ya soon, but don't feel rushed. After all, though patience isn't one of my virtue's I do believe that good things are worth waiting for. Later! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Del_kaidin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 20:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Take that Doctor Bitch... And ohhh the well scene... the reasons he watches and gives her his hiori.... and then her actions... WOW!!! Please tell me that's not all.
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: March 05, 2004 20:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the sweetest story I've read. You had me near tears and it was so good. I hope there is a next chapter because I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 19:07 PST
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I just want you to know that chapt 14 was so good that it nearly brought me to tears. It was so good that I read it 3 times. So moving, and yet so real. Not fantastic like most IY fics, your story depicted beautifully the reality of life and of sex. Your descripion of their first time was wonderlly comical, touching and beautiful all in the same breath. I'm truly at a loss for words!
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:30 PST
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Something I forgot to put in my last post: I don't know how things are in Japan, but here confidentiality is strict. A girl's mother would NEVER be allowed to be in the examination room, unless she asked specifically for her mother. 2, The doctor has no authority to tell the parent if the child is sexually active. Granted that Kag is a minor, she not considered to young to be sexually active (she's 17 in this story right?). After the age of 16 a GYN would consider it unethical to inform the parent. Just thought you'd like to know
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Reviewed By: kagome_chan16 On: March 05, 2004 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow sweet fic i like it can u send me an e-mail every time u update plz
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 12:22 PST
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^_^ Happy, now that i've had my fix! Wonderful as usual, and i'll be waiting for the next chappie!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 06:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story. It is very well written and keeps a persons interest. Keep up the good work. Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 02:13 PST
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oh. poor Yukio, poor Inuyasha. I'm glad that kagome and her mom are back on good terms again. it's seemed easier to like her mom again than i thought. you did a very good job with that. i know how Kagome feels about staying up all night to study. lucky for her it doesn't all go to waist when your profesor has a mental cramp and forgets when he said you could take the exam. -.- so much for staying up till 6 studing. but nehoo. loved the chapter. you are by far one of the best two up daters i know. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 01:02 PST
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Just letting you know that I'll be blaming you and this story tomorrow when I can't stay awake and my professor wants to "talk" to me. j/k ^_^ This story is wonderful! And even though IY is quite OOC, you manage to pull it off without seeming too far out of line. In all seriousness, your story is so good I couldn't stop reading it until I had read every chapter. I'm finally done and it's 4am @_@ (So much for my 8am class) HA HA HA. At any rate, keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Del_kaidin(NLI) On: March 04, 2004 22:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter, well thought out. Love the explanation of loosing the senses on the night of weakness.... and the conversation between Kagome and her mother was good as well. Also liked Yukio sticking up for himself. And the "Big Dog" T-shirt... too cute!
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Reviewed By: ali_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 17:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! They are so cute. *dies of love* *pets Yukio's ears* More! More please! XD
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Title: omg, i'm in love
Reviewed By: caliko - not signed in On: March 04, 2004 08:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely in love with this story! it's fantastic, cute, funny, and omg, Yasha-Outo is a blast! lol.. I owe you sooo many reviews, i'm sorry. I read what's posted in one sitting, unable to leave long enough to go potty, and they would all say the same thing. IT'S GREAT! Keep going, and i'm adding you to my favorites! ~Caliko
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