| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 07:59 PST
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This is a well-written and absorbing story--I really like your interpretation of how Kagome & Inuyasha's relationship has developed over the course of two years. I love waff, and you're giving us some, but you're not drowning us in it :). I'm curious to find out exactly what issues Inuyasha has about breastfeeding/mothering--seems there's something there. If I have a nitpick, it's that the dialogue seems a little off sometimes; it almost seems like the feudal age characters (Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango & Shippou) use vocabulary sometimes that one would expect someone from the 20th century to be using. Just my opinion. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 01:58 PST
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you know I'm not so sure I like Kag's mom that much any more. I would think that since she was so ok with the whole demon, going through the well thing she would be a little more relaxed about a baby. Yash is right, there is just no way he could be Kag's. *shakes head sadly* I'm beinging to relaize how open my mom is. I hope everything turns out ok. Up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 26, 2004 16:38 PST
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Man, I feel so sorry for Inu and Kag--Kag's mom went a little off the deep end, huh? understand she's worried about her daughter and I know she'll probably feel bad when everything gets sorted out but....... Inu is so sweet!! he makes a great father--can't wait for the next update--Kag's doctor visit and her mom's reaction. this is so good ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jezz Jamer On: February 26, 2004 15:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and can't wait for the next chapter. The over all story line is not really original, I've see this before, but the plot is great. I was so in the story I didn't really pay attention to the writing style and spelling/grammer. This is one of the most enjoyable and best Inuyasha fic I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 01:12 PST
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I Love this fic! I rearly go looking for new fics once I have a list of favrites, but I got bored and came across yours. I hope you continue it. It's very nice and well done. I can't wait to read more. Up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 24, 2004 17:15 PST
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Another great chapter!! having studied biology, I love all your 'instinctual reactions' Inu keeps informing Kagome of--alas, no more Kouga^_^ this is SO good!! can't wait for your next update--see yah on the ecchi list!!
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Reviewed By: mandapanda On: February 24, 2004 14:18 PST
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This is such a cute story. I cant wait till you bring in Kikiyo and kouga that should be very interesting. I could just see the baby how cute.please update soon.
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Title: Interesting :) In a good way
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty interesting! Update and let me read more please :)
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 11:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I cant wait until I am able to read further into the story you have created.
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 24, 2004 00:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! LOVE IT so far--very well written--the characters are all believable in this situation, I mean you can just picture Inu reacting the way he does--so sweet^_^!! a baby is just what Inu and Kag needed to bring them closer together--now, no matter what Inu wants, he does have a family and a life with Kagome--so I expect some 'good stuff' later on ^_~!!! I can't wait to see how this story unfolds--update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: February 23, 2004 21:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooh. i love this story. plz update soon alright? i hope u get more reviews so u dont leave us in the dark 4 2 long! update soon!!! ja ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 18:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is great...I can completely see them like this after two years together. And the part about Inu Yasha being happy because the baby helped in the kil was perfect. He would so be that kind of daddy. Great job, and I look forward to what you have next.
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Reviewed By: monsterkittie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmygosh...how cute! This is turning out to be a great story! Please keep it up! So...any hints on the baby's name? Will Kagome and Inuyasha take him on for reals as their own? Don't keep us waiting too long, please!
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