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Reviewed By: eternalshiva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 09:37 PDT
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o.O Poor Sesshy ... I sense a change in their relationship, me thinks. Beautiful chapter, very well done. The mental imagery is breath taking and I actually like 'This Sesshoumaru' I find it funny that there is still some disgruntlements over who killed Naraku. I'm sure I'm not the only one to say it, but I hope your muse doesn't quit on you! At least it wasn;t an evil angsty cliffie!
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Reviewed By: Zing On: April 03, 2004 21:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's sesshy up to i wonder...
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 07:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg that is a great story. please write more please soon this is great
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Reviewed By: Ummm.. lil ol' me! On: April 03, 2004 00:48 PST
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UPDATE!!!!! thats all Ive gotta say... for now anyways.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 15:06 PST
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oh no. i hope everything is ok. what's happened to Sesshoumaru? did his past come back to hount him like he feared? did those stupid humans get a priest to seal him away somewhere? and what about Jaken? surly Jaken would not turn on him. i hope everything is ok. hurry Inuyasha. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: inu.ob On: April 02, 2004 14:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Okay if Inuyasha dies I swear I will die... not litterally but sorta pantamimingly (you know, pretend sword, pretend action to stick it through my heart, pretend dying on the ground, pretend blood) Seriously though! Don't let him die... or Sesshomaru! That would really suck! I think Rin and Kohaku have something going there! Oooooo! Anyways, main topic: great chapter(as always) great story(like always) continue soon(or else) LOVE IT(well duh) see ya(bye) Kay seriously, you have to love that last sentence thinger-ma-bobber.
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Title: hot
Reviewed By: mocha2004 On: April 02, 2004 12:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a relly good story.The best i've read in a long time. Keep up the good work and writing style and don't let anyone tell you anything diffrent cause it's perfect.
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Title: What's going on with Sesshoumaru?
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 09:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku's such a lech! Awww...poor guy, he had to wait! But everyone knew Sango would have castrated him if he'd tried anything! I hope Fluffy's OK; he cares a lot more for Rin than he lets on, and glad to see Kohaku there to help Rin. I wonder why she has always, when talking about herself, says "Rin" in place of "I"? Is that because how she was treated before Sess found her? More wonderful chapters! Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: eternalshiva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 02:24 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, Miroku getting sex advice? That's hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing when Inu goes "I pulled a Sesshomarou" That was adorable. I almost cried at the end :( That's so angsty. I hope Sess is alright *What? Where did that come from?* You made me care for the evil bastard xD Way to go!
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Title: galene
Reviewed By: sugar*gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEE!!! 2 CHAPTERS!!! *feels like she won the lottery* YAY!!! *is sooo happy* ^_^ they were wonderful! *laughs* poor miroku... 2 months of nothing... haaha.. can't blame Sango tho ;) *sighs* off goes inuyasha.. how sad. i love the way you express his n kag's relationship it's beautiful...
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Reviewed By: BlueGreen On: April 01, 2004 18:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST INUYASHA FANFICTION IVE EVER READ!!!!!!! please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 16:52 PST
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Very nice work in this chapter...you did a great job with Sesshoumaru. What I really liked was that Yukio's father was identified; that's actually been something in the back of my mind the whole time I've been following this story. It really adds more depth, to not only have his name but also some history. I'm glad that he didn't turn out to be a realtive or something. You also managed to work a bit of the Kikyou subplot in and keep that going. I like the pace at which you are developing Yukio's character and his relationships with all of the others. And of course, the sweet scenes between Kagome and Inuyasha are wonderful as always. Waiting with anticipation for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 16:43 PST
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hehehehehehhe!!! I LOVE IT! /snickering/
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Reviewed By: austin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 15:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good good when are you updating?
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 14:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter- have you been taking inspiration more from the anime, or the manga, or both? I've noticed a few anecdotes in the story that came from anime only episodes. Well done exposition on Sesshoumaru's reflection on the past. Looking forward to seeing what part Inuyasha and Kagome might have to play. I wouldn't doubt that the human leader of the army may be in possesion of a shard, or even shards- Not unlikely that Kikyou may be involved, and it remains to be seen what side, if any, she may take. I'm also looking forward to Yukio's next visit with grandma, now that he's starting to talk. Uncle Souta will no doubt be getting more interested. Hmm, I wonder if he won't start blabbing about things to the wrong people eventually? He does really admire his sister, and Inuyasha most of all. I could see it being difficult not to tell all his friends about the things that have been going on. It would be nice to bring Souta's friend and his mother into the story again. I'm talking about the arc at the beginning involving the angry girl spirit, that Kagome ended up saving from being dragged to hell. Whatever else, I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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