| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 15, 2004 01:08 PST
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Awwwww! Damn, how many women just had to hit the biological snooze button again after that one?! Very vivid, and well, sweet. Thanks for sharing, and please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Salt On: March 14, 2004 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sighs...i lurve this story so much...its my all time fav. keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: MelonMoo On: March 14, 2004 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEE! aww. thats just to cute the way Inuyasha and Yukio talk. I LOVE this story! but i wont hold you here long because i want you to get writing!!!! :D!
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Reviewed By: Diane Long On: March 14, 2004 05:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so wonderful!!!! *SIGH* It is well written and so emotional. I am feel completely a part of the world you create when I read this. It is wonderful to see the deep love growing in this little family. I am dying to for Inuyasha to say those three little words.
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Reviewed By: DQBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 22:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely beautiful fic. You've pushed all of the characters to new levels and every time you think something OOC has happened, you have a way of explaining it IC that makes the action seem natural, especially with Kagome's mother. You are doing a wonderful job and I'm enjoying this very much.
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Reviewed By: catesy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 22:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are simply wonderful! There are few authors I will actually stop and review for, mostly because I am a lazy lazy person, sad but true. However I simply cant read this wonderful story without telling you how great it is and how much talent you have. I love the plot and this is so well written. Your lemon chapters were very well done. And only 67 reviews! I find that hard to believe. Shame on those who won't review such a wonderful story. You did well with Kagome's mom. You are handling Kikyo very well. And that inu language is so cute! I eagerly await your next chapter and thank you so much for sharing the gift of your writing with the world.
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Title: omg.
Reviewed By: zazooi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. O_O;;;;; dear god, this is too cute. i love the dog-language idea. i wanna know how Yukio grows up. ^^
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Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 12:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 16 was so accurate!! I wonder if that would really happen? And chapter 17 was great, but you know there's something bad around the corner....you said Naraku's dead, so it must be decision-time with Inuyasha and Kikyo. Even though she knows Kagome and Inuyasha have a bond, she still thinks of Inuyasha as "hers" and that his life is still hers. Rude awakening coming soon! Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: drgn_mstrss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 09:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! This quite possibly THE best fan fic I ever read, not to mention the cutest! This is probably going to sound pretty weird, but your lemons are the sweetest I've ever read(I know, I already said something like that, but, hey, it's true!), and I LOVED them! It brought me to the brick of tears, *sighs*, I guess I'm just a hopeless romantic. Your story is SO awsome, please, please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 04:15 PST
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does that last part mean he's finaly going to admit his choice? if he really has already made his choice in his heart he's going to have t tell Kikyo sometime. not to mention Kagome. man, that was so sad for a moment. i was about ready to hit Inuyasha myself. yet as much as i agree with Sango and Kaede, i can't help but see at least part of Yasha's point of view. what he need's to realize that he can't brake his promis not to leave Kikyo because one the Kikyo that walks the earth isn't actually Kikyo, and two because kagome has Kikyo's soul (at least most of it) and as long as he is with Kagome he is in a way with Kikyo. nehoo. i can't think strait so i'm going to sleep, but up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: inu.ob [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuyasha_obsession here again! I dont't know why it won't let me access my account when I write revews but it doesn't! I hate my STUPID computer! I love this story! I like how you usually update with two chapters at once but once I am done both I wish you had another one ready! I love your story so much and I hope IT DOESN'T END any time soon! Write more soon!
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Title: HMPrune
Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done an amazing job with this fic. It was recommended highly on the Iridescent Dreams website, and afer I checked it out I couldn't believe it. You have taken a situation with the baby, made it real and demonstrated your absolute love and understanding of the characters. Way to go Sango! And does Kagome REALLY have to put up with so much? I am very much looking forward to Inuyasha's confrontation with Kikyo - I hope it's coming up soon...
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 16:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great really good except u should tell how Inuyasha turns Kykio down please update soon i love story ^^
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: March 12, 2004 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just made my day! I loved the thing with Sango Ha! He deserved that. And Kagome going home and giving him a taste of what life would be like without them was a good touch, 'Don't know what you've got until it's gone' kinda thing. Unfortunatly he still is having Kikyo issue's but I guess I can't ask for too much from the loveable idiot. *sigh* I really wish that he would understand, He already knows what he wants, and everybody is practically beating it into his head(He He.... Sango) I can't wait to read more! I love this fic sooo much! please write more soon, I am drooling in anticipation.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 08:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you that was one of the most amazing chapters I have ever read. There was so much passion and emotion I was totally lost in it. The whole thing was so well written and the love scene was done with taste and style. Not many writers can pull that off, it was truely beautiful. I just wanted you to know I was really floored by the whole story so far. I hope you contiune to update as soon as possible because this has quickly become one of my favorites.
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