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Reviewed By: Krazy_Kagoe On: April 01, 2004 09:14 PST
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I have to admit I was first skeptical when reading about inu taking care of a baby. But I decided to stick with it and give you a chance. I did and I am very glad I did. At first I may have thought that inu was acting a little strange, not really ooc just a different, but as the story progresses I think you do a wonderful job of explaining his past and how he has come to me the man/hanyou? that he is. I think your comment on why you believe he is the way he is, is totally accurate and the facts you use to back it up only help your argument further. I thing you are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading the rest of this story and any other ones you write. Good luck, and thanks for writing a great fic. :)
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 08:39 PST
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I like very much the idea of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru find some neutral zone, some peace between them. Fluffy fell remose by his bad behavior with Inuyasha, but refuse to assume it. But I hope that time show the brothers better. I love the way Inuyasha is thinking about his problem with kikyou and he find a nice solution...it seams. But I´m still waiting to him to start to build the promised house to Kagome. Afterall, Sesshoumaru has a point when he says that is tooo low living in a hole...even a super one like they had. Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inky On: March 31, 2004 21:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! this story is so great!!!please update!
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Title: The best Fic in the UNIVERSE!!
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 21:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get your butt back on that soap box and tell those who doubt the excellence of "Lucky Ones"!!! I have read a loo-oo-ot of fanfics, but I have got to say, this one... It has me on edge, it caused a tear to fall (which is really hard with me), and I just can't get over the style of writing. It's wonderful!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Austin b On: March 30, 2004 18:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you a 10 mainly beacause this so far is the best one yet. Update soon please!!!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Austin b On: March 30, 2004 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you a 10 mainly beacause this so far is the best one yet. Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 17:26 PST
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this is a great story. i love the way you write.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 09:41 PST
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So, Fluffy-sama needs a babysitter? LOL... looks like Yasha-chan's fun is getting interupted again. Oh well, he's a man, therefore he NEEDS to suffer anyway! Bwahahahah good job!
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Reviewed By: ali_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 09:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh oh....where Rin is...Sess is close by. What does he want?
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Reviewed By: general53 On: March 30, 2004 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god dam this is awsome hurry and up date or i am going to lose it and how come you know alot about condoms ahahahahhahah
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 07:13 PST
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Hi. Very good chapter. I´m glad that they are working very well as a team and able to colect shards. I would like to see Inuyasha start the house to Kagome very soon. They have already get to terms so...what is stopping him? Sesshoumaru are coming to try to kill Yukio? I really hope not. And what about Kouga? Did him start to eat people again or he still had some hopes about Kagome? Whats the name of Sango an Miroku baby? And when will Inuyasha and Kagome have their own pups? Sooo please, udpate soon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 01:16 PST
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how old does that make Rin now? 10? i forget, are Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru on ok terms now? can't wait for more. i would review more but it's too late and i'm too tierd. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Rin's Back!
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 00:34 PST
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Rin! It's Rin! About time. I wonder if anybody even remembers Jinenji? Or if that's how you spell his name? Ha ha! (Insert laughing smiley here) But anyway, look at you go! I have to admit, back there when Kouga showed up, I thought that Kagome's reaction was actually mild. I'd have been screaming at them to not hurt each other, but hey, that's me - the one person on the planet who has neither been in a fight nor seen one in real life. Why in the world should I have a clean sheet, anyway? All those damn movie fight scenes, and I can't even point out much of the mistakes! Well, as long as you don't count the Matrix Trilogy. Found all the mistakes Keanu Reeves made!
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Title: Rebuttal Chapter
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 23:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those rating are for your rebuttal in and of itself. *Grin* Oh, wow! I read that over and my jaw dropped! This story is amazing, pretty much my rival - which I really shouldn't be reviewing, by the way - but I can't help it! I gotta review this every time I hit the end! I've got 47 chapters presently, but I think you have more words. Have you noticed how long your chapters are? That's like reading two and a half of mine, maybe even three! Yikes! And I LOVE how you wrote all that stuff. Honestly, you shouldn't ever take down this "rebuttal" chapter - if you were planning on getting rid of it at all. It's like a break from the long chapters, time to get your mind on Inuyasha's character feeling and such, and let it slow down and pick up all sorts of details you might've missed otherwise. Betcha weren't expecting that, were you? Oh, well. For better or worse, you created a double-effect that'll help a lot of confused people out there. Until next time! (Probably the next chapter. Ha ha.)
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Reviewed By: moonshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:56 PST
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That was cruel. And evil. Hope you post up the next chapter soon, your fic's my fav out of all of the ones I'm reading!
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