| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Principessa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 09:26 PDT
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This fic is amazing! I can't wait to read how you end it! I don't know who accused you of having an OOC Inu-Yasha but I think that all of the characters in this fic are the most in-character I've seen in a long time. Anyway, this is an amazing, wonderful, compelling story that captured my attention so that when I had to go somewhere I couldn't wait to get back to finish it.
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Title: Oi!
Reviewed By: GunnerYunaGirl On: April 25, 2004 07:36 PDT
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Its been ten days now! STOP THE MADNESS THAT IS NOT UPDATING! ^_^ Excellent fic... I'm going to go back to my corner and wait for more awesomeness, kk? Or are you off helping Sesshomaru restore the West lands, and will not be back for another six days?
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Reviewed By: whydontihaveanaccounthereyet? On: April 24, 2004 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sniff...this fic is the best i've ever read...and i think you captured inuyasha's character perfectly...update soon!
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Reviewed By: catesy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 10:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter. cant wait to see what happens with kikyo. keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: red dragon 679 On: April 21, 2004 13:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!! WRITE MORE, WRITE MORE PLEASE IT WAS THE BEST STORY!!!!
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 15:43 PDT
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Gah! Update! Please! Don't be like me and wait three months! Please! I love this fic! If you don't update, I'm going to cry! Then my demon lover Kioshi will have to come and force you to write. You don't want to see him when I cry. Think Inu-Yasha, in demon form...
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 22:29 PDT
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Wow. I wonder how many chapters you'll have when you finish? Mine should've ended a while ago, but already has fifty chapters (though not up yet). One thing: sometimes you do thoughts without telling us who thought it, and say "he" or "she" when you have a group of characters. That makes it easy to get lost. Just leave it at the back of your mind while you're writing that using everyone's names during talk sequences is the best idea. No pressure, though; all of us readers have gained intelligence by reading this fic.
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Reviewed By: Leslie Potter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 06:23 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything in this story is so wonderful, I get exited every time I see a new chapter! I was saddened to see that the story may be at it's end, which is sad because honestly... I don't want it to end. This is my absolute favorite Inuyasha fan fiction!!
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Reviewed By: Ravenna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 04:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I can't wait to read more this is really good. I'm well and truly hooked.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 03:46 PDT
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ok. i got to read two out of the three i haven't read yet. love them! can't wait to read more, but right now i have to sleep so i can get up and meet my guy for lunch. (damn early lunch time) nehoo. will read and review as soon as i can! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 03:46 PDT
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ok. i got to read two out of the three i haven't read yet. love them! can't wait to read more, but right now i have to sleep so i can get up and meet my guy for lunch. (damn early lunch time) nehoo. will read and review as soon as i can! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 23:21 PDT
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wow this story just keeps geting beter keep it up and im whaiting for thim to realis they can use the jewel to ex pand her life.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 22:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this it's just a great great great great story please review soon
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 15, 2004 21:17 PDT
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Poor Inuyasha. I had been wondering about the age difference. Thank you for continuing to update this fiction! It's always a happy day when new chapters show up.
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Reviewed By: galene On: April 15, 2004 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this story just keeps getting better and better. I love it to bits! *sniffles* inuyasha is just the sweetest thing sometimes. him living without kag... that's just so sad, and i feel so horribly for him when he had to punish Yukio... continue soon Galene
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