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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 › » ] | Title: Best Fic
Reviewed By: Jezz Jamer On: March 25, 2004 13:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the BEST Inuyasha fics I've read yet. There are only three other Inuyasga fics that I believe are truly great. Yours is now number four. And I have read a LOT of Inuyasha fics. I'm even writing one myself, but I don't think it's nearly as good as yours. Well, anyway, update soon please! I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 11:01 PST
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I love this story. The way you are writing the hole Inuyasha/Kikyou thing. I agree with you. He had give his word, he is stuck with her...but he love Kagome and i hoping that you will find a way to make him stay with Kagome. Tehm bout could rise Yukio and the others that will come. Good work. Keep writing. Update soon, please.
| Reviewed By: angelkitty77 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 11:00 PST
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this is so good please update more soon
| Title: **sated, i've had my fix**
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 10:45 PST
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YAYYY!!! another chappie, and one that is one of my favorites! LOL.. am I the hundredth review??? I Think i am... the review counter said 99 reviews before.. hmmm.. anywho.. doesnt' matter. Did I tell you how much i LOOOOVVVEEEE this story??? ~Caliko
| Reviewed By: eternalshiva On: March 25, 2004 03:38 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a beautiful story, I'm really impressed. The character development is spectacular. You write very well and know what buttons to push to get to people's heart. I'm in love with thi fic, one of the best ones around I believe. Keep it up, I'm really looking forward to see how Inu is going to deal with the Kikyo issue when it comes up. I felt like cheering when Kagome shot Kouga's arm off but it's still weird that Kagome still had sympathy for the wolf after the threatened to kill their future children and Yukio. I wouldn't. My friendship would definately be over with him. But Kagome is a sympathetic soul so, who knows how she would react. I loved how it made me mad at her for a few minutes. I felt like Inuyasha for a second, completely infuriated with her and then I was like *wow, good writing, I'm super mad!* xD Great job!
| Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 01:07 PST
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oh man. i was about to rip kouga a new one despite the fact that he doesn't really exist. you did a very good job at making his say just the right thing to get under my skin. no doubt Inuyasha's too. man. i don't know how Kagome could be so nice to him. i probably would have shot at him the moment he started talking about killing hanyous. at least shoot at his feet. just to get his attention so i could curse him out or something. Kagome is a lot more understanding and pacient then me. poor thing. and that inn lady. such a nice woman. how did she ever end up marring such a jerk? up date soon and keep up the good work!!
| Title: good job
Reviewed By: Valdrianth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew. I'm so glad nobdoy died. Very emotional chapter. It was a very lovely chapter that it was. ^-^.
| Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 08:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely give that many 10s, but this fic is just awesome! Not too much fluff, and you've put real effort into the developement of the characters. It's a shame you didn't try to write out the final battle between the inu-tachi and Naraku, your version would have been quite interesting. I admit, it's difficult to try to do that when the Manga hasn't gotten that far yet, so one doesn't have a reference to work from. I hope Kagome's friends will get to meet Yukio as well- I wonder if their reaction will be positive or negative. In a chapter published not that long ago in Japan, Yuka, Ayumi, and Eri did meet up with Inuyasha at the shrine, and though we never got any details it appears he made a good impression on them. He did where a cloth on his head, so they didn't see his ears, but I think their reaction would basically to think it was all so cool and exotic for Kagome to be living with 2 Hanyous. I'd be surprised if the doctor, or someone connected to her and incident on the roof didn't show up again. If the doctor informs the school that Kagome is caring for a baby, that might cause problems, especially if the school takes its reputation and that of its students seriously. Poor Kagome, but the confrontation with Kouga just couldn't have any but a traumatic ending, if the character of Kouga was going to be taken into account in any serious fashion. Kouga is not going to let it go though, I just can't see him doing that. Especially now that Kagome raised her hands against him. That's really going to gnaw at him, as much if not more than Inuyasha moving in on what he regarded as his. Of course, this means that Kouga will strike when Kagome has been seperated from Inuyasha for one reason or another. Perhaps Kikyou will play a part? hmmm. What about Seshomaru? I wonder what his reaction will be to the hanyou baby. I figure that outwardly at least, he'll be indifferent, and simply see it as another sign of Hanyou and human weakness. Last but not least, I liked the inu language thing you wrote into the story. That's really sweet. ^_^ Looking forward to much more. Hopefully soon. ^_^ thiemo
| Reviewed By: galene On: March 20, 2004 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, such a moving chapter, i have tears streaming down my face... wonderful job ~galene
| Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed your fic and couldn't stop reading it. I especially enjoyed your indepth and pensive descriptions of each character's thoughts and opinions, not to mention the much needed and long overdue discussions between characters. One can only pray that said discussions will occur in the anime or manga. I was kind of surprised though with your lack of bonding interacting between Shippou and Kagome considering that she is also often viewed as an adoptive mother to him as well even if he is not as needy as a baby. Anyways, keep the creative wheels turning and keyboard typing. Until the next chapter, kudos!
| Reviewed By: sesshyfan On: March 20, 2004 12:17 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow, this story is so touching. i have been completely captivated through the whole thing. please keep writing, i can't wait to see what happends next. ^_^
| Title: Great Story!!!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 11:36 PST
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I love your story! It's so sweet how you kind of incorporated Inuyasha's childhood into this story in backhanded ways. AWWWW! Yukio seems so Kawaii! I want one! Hehehehe :) -RayJay
| Title: VERY impressive story here...
Reviewed By: Quickening [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a really spectacular fanfiction, and it's also original, with a plot that I've never read before, which gives it double brownie points in my book. ^_^ Your writing is excellent, with a minimum amount of spelling/grammatical errors, also good because I'm picky about that. I read through the entire thing in one sitting. Took me about five hours but I did it. I should have been sleeping but I couldn't stop until I reached the last chapter, that's how good it was. lol Anyway! I really really hope you'll have more of this posted soon. I kind of figured that Kouga was gonna show his face sooner or later, and now that he has I really am dying to know how he'll react. I hope Kagome doesn't have to kill him, though, 'cause I like Kouga. ^^; Just one thing about that. If they'd already completed the jewel, wouldn't they have gotten the shards from Kouga's legs already? Unless it hadn't been fully completed yet when Naraku shattered it again, or Kouga managed to grab two more shards again after it was shattered...just thought you might wanna clarify that a bit. It's slightly confusing. Not very important, but confusing. lol Anyway! I look forward to reading more! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Blanked On: March 19, 2004 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so fucking confused. i cant figure out how to read the new chapter. im stuck on 17, even though the link says 92 pages updated on the 18th. someone please help!!
| Reviewed By: catesy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 07:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. I cant wait to see what happens with Koga.
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