| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: make more chapters plez
Reviewed By: desha On: April 23, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make more chapters pleaze
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 20, 2004 14:22 CDT
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i loved this chapter as well and gladno one hates the idea i had! ^_^ i can't wait until the next chapter so i can see what the 'thing' is!!!
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: April 19, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading the new chapter. Love it. I like the idea of the gifts and notes. But I can feel how Kagome feels. Having a guy hurt you, break your heart than try to get you back, you want to take them back but then you don't cause what if you get hurt all over again. Well continue to write this story, love it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 19, 2004 20:10 CDT
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I dont think you should have to explain yourself for not updating school, sports and stuff like that are apart of life well good luck and I liked todays story i cant wait to find out what kagome's mom has in her hands.... I hope it's a puppy.. I donno why but i do hope it's a puppy ~jessica
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:48 CDT
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true true he did break her heart. O.O CLIFFY!!! stoopid cliffy...oh well!!! i'll just wait for the next chapter! and its ok that it took you a while to update doesnt really bother me! ^.^
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Title: please
Reviewed By: last vampire On: April 18, 2004 01:25 CDT
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there is something i must tell u. this is me and my friends fav story like ever, she got in to a car accident 4 days ago. and every day she asks me if u updated.shes a die hard sess/kag fan to. i jus wanted to tell u that this story is a consatant in her life and i thank u for writting it:) if u get this plz emila me at fluffysgal@hotmail.com thank u again...last vampire :)
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Title: super wile and fantastic review for a super wild and fantastic chapter!
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 22:22 CDT
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as horrible as life is, I always feel better after reading yoru story lol. What ever could Kagome's mom have with her? Who knows?...well I guess you do....Don't beat yourself up over not being able to update every day or so chicki-poo. We should all be so lucky to have an author on our lists that updates half as regularly as you! Don't over stress yourself *cries anime style*
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Title: sugoi!
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tear* sesshoumaru is heartbroken... oh why do they have to keep on hurting eachother? T_T hey maybe you should make sesshoumaru do really cute romantic things until kagome forgives into her feelings? that'd be awesome! anyway, i was getting watery-eyed reading this, for proof i got a tissue box right here. ^_^ please update soon!
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: April 13, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I just finished reading all of it. Amazing, I love the fact that Kagome doesn't just automatically forgive him, but I do feel bad for him. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 13, 2004 17:47 CDT
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I'm with Nagasaki I think t needs some time ya know, she should take her time to heal and not give into him so soon. ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 17:06 CDT
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lol. dont worry i was awake enough to know wat was going on in the last chapter! and i was totally awake in this chapter cuz it is... 6:04 pm. This chapter was good! i feel so bad for sesshy though...kind of, but i probably would of said almost the same thing kagome said...if that ever happened. i've read fanfics where sesshy cries and then im always sitting at the computer saying "awww" lol. ok anyways until the next chapter....Ja Ne!!!
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 13, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears* that was a beautiful chapter!!!! i loved it!!!! thanks for the dedication...hope i didn't make anyone mad because you used it. i really can't wait until your next chapter! i espeacially loved this one because sesshy went to inuyasha for advise...that was a suprise...a good one but a suprise nonetheless!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 15:20 CDT
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auwww, that was sad! i almost cried, but im at work so, the customers would have looked at me wierd, lol. great chapter, poor sesshie-sama :*(. alright, till next time~ =) ~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~~*~
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Title: i should be online more...
Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 13, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always this was an uber gr8 chappie ^__^. Poro sess-chan, its reallyl shitty when you like someone so much but they dont even see you. lkike you're dying, i have that right now. it suxxors so bit time.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 21:03 CDT
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aww thank you sooo much. ive never had a chapter dedicated to me before *blushes* This chapter so made my day (after 7 stop overs on a 7 hours train ride! lol)This chapter was really funny. Poor Kagome, and a thong to?!?! Aww man I'd just die if that were me lol. Can't wait till tuesday!
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