| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was adorable, hehe. im surprised sesshie didnt slit the dogs throat right then and there, lol. thats gotta be annoying, kinda like the phone ringing or a knock at the front door ya know? lol. yes, i dont see anything wrong with them hooking up so soon, its classic make up sex. i think it would be cute if the got like engaged or something...but then theres always rin...maybe you could like kill her off or something, lol.JK!! dont hurt me *ducks behind chair* or maybe rin wont have a problem with it, shes always so happy and carefree anyways, maybe shell just view it as the perfect plan...i dont know. im at work so im not really able to think straight, lol. okay, good luck with that though, hope others have better suggestions, heh. ~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~*
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 14:54 CDT
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What exactly did you revise on this chapter? And after carefully reading your A/N, I think it's a little too soon for Kagome and Sesshomaru to be "hooking" up. After all, Sesshomaru did think that life was good, but whenever someone thinks that in a story something tends to go wrong. At least that's what I always seem to find. As for an idea, Kagome could become pregnant, since she and Sesshomaru didn't use protection and she doesn't know how to deal with that. And Sesshomaru would start pressuring Kagome to move in with him or something. But she doesn't want to, because of Rin. Or you could have Kagome and Sesshomaru tell Rin the truth together and have her not accept it. So Sesshomaru and Kagome have to make the ultimate sacrifice. Which Rin notices that her dad and her best friend are miserable without each other, so she plays "Cupid". What do you think?
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 13:53 CDT
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I'm so happy Sesshomaru and Kagome are back together. I loved how Kagome said that Sesshomaru was her puppy and Sesshomaru said he needed more than a belly rub. That was very sweet and erotic. I wonder how they will break the news to Rin, and how she'll react.
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Title: Sugestion!
Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 30, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have an Idea!!! yay for me... Sorry I'm a lil hyper!! Well anyway you should have Kagome's mom find out... or maybe have Rin find out or something of that nature.... I still say you could build more on the plot but I'm not sure how...Sorry my mind's a blank and I have to get to work b/c i'm in a class... well anyway good luck ~Jessica
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Title: Luv it
Reviewed By: Spica [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 20:39 CDT
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I love your story, though this is the first time I have reviewed. It's stupid I know, I never review that much and I need to read more of something for actually decide if it was good. I like your idea and all but I wish you wouldn't make Sesshoumaru such a player. He's actually sweet. REALLY Sweet. Okay, I'm taliking a bout nothing so, later and please up date soon. I give you a Rin plushie for your hard work.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 16:21 CDT
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OK when i was reading this and they kissed i got this awesom idea! Sometime in the later chapters Rin should walk in on Kag and Sesshy kissing! So yea...ok ummm awesome chapter! i was so happy when i saw the email saying this was updated!!! ^.^ update again soon. Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: April 29, 2004 15:57 CDT
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yup... i loved this one and i can't wait until your next chapter. when is rin going to find out? and will some one interrupt them while they are trying to 'get busy'? will it be kagome's mom?
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: April 26, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW a puppy! how cute. I love that idea, can't wait till the next chapter. sooooo cute. Plus I love cliff hangers.
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 25, 2004 19:33 CDT
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yay...I'm glad you continued to update, i was worried when you said the story was comming to a dead end well as always good luck ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Black-Katty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH please please please update soon and write more!! It's getting so good too! I love this whole love/hate relationship thing goin on, this fan fic is so awesome!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 13:42 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I loved how fast Kagome and her puppy bonded with each other, that was so sweet. I hope everything goes well in the next chapter. I really hope that Sesshomaru tells her that he has fallen in love with her and that she believes him.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 00:36 CDT
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KINDA cliffy??? you might as well have cut her off in the middle of her sentece, '"are you the one who gave..." to be continued.' lol. it was cute, i luv puppies!! cant wait for the next chapter!! i agree with orb though, dont worry about updating so quickly, take the time you need and give it your all, ;)
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok umm this chapter deserves an "Awwwwww" for Fluffy!!!! YAY!!! ^-^ ok lets see...great chapter! and you dont have to cut bak on the cliffies if thats wat you said kinda cant remember (stupid short term memory! >.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 23, 2004 16:07 CDT
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i can't believe you! that was an awesome chapter and cliffy! i can't wait until your next chapter! loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!! lol...i really did!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 23, 2004 15:47 CDT
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Aww fluffy!!! lol I can just picture a little fluffy puppy yipping and skipping around. heehee. This was a really cute chapter. DAMN YOU AND YOU'RE CLIFFIES!!!! I just about had a heart attack when Kagome saw Sess-chan. Whatever will they do.
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