| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Rin left the house. Naraku is just too creepy, even in an A/U. Plus, he's planning something. I think Sesshomaru has a lot of explaining to do with Kagome. I'm actually very pleased that you decided to keep the demons as such.
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Title: chii
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really love your story i hope they all make up again(rin kags mom etc) well your story is going better than the one im trying to type well goodluck!!!!!! and i hope you have a good time typing this as we have fun reading it have fun ne?!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats gotta be the worst way to find out the person your in love with is a demon... glad you updated! my friend kept asking when you were gonna update and if you had. but now that i think of it...she hasnt asked in a while... any ways great chappy even if it DID take a while to get out! ^^ im glad you did! cant wait til the next chapter!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Crystalmaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA omg this chapter was great hehe ooh kagome thinks she's seeing things haha wait until she finds out lol. I know what your going through its not easy balancing things out with school and other things hehe.
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Reviewed By: Cranberry Sauce On: September 14, 2004 21:58 CDT
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I love the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. So review! Quickly!@_@
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Reviewed By: stargirl3 On: August 15, 2004 13:23 CDT
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hi i REALLY like you story and i hope you do the chapter very fast because i be waiting and i do NOT like to wait much...........please!
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Reviewed By: Starfire27 On: August 12, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW Rin really tok that very seriously. Well i9 know i would if my dad were with my bf. Kags moms a bitch, she aproved but then had to go ruining everything. Oh well bound to happen. I like how you described the Lemons. Keep up the good work. I hate when you up small clffhagers. But UPDATE soon!!!PLZ!!!!
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Title: inulover
Reviewed By: kanome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 18:17 CDT
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plz update i love ur style of writing and the story is great i cant wait to see how it ends!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im baaaack! sorry i havent reviewed in so long, i lost my internet at home so now i can only access it at work! grrr. wow, a lots happened. yay! you brought in rins mom! and kikyou none the less, hehehe, way to go. i really loved the last...what was it...3 or 4 chapters? and the drama continues to thicken, lol. i hope everything works out ok, and damn kagomes mother! grrr. oh well, wat you gonna do eh? alright well, update again soon! and i promise ill be there to review! ;) ~*~*~*Suteki~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: July 19, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Kikyo's her mom! I wasn't expecting that. I love how you put twist and turns in your story. That just makes me like the story even more!!! I can't wait til you write again. Keep going! You rock! ^__________^
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Oh no, the story spark is winding down for you? That's awful. You wouldn't know it from the wasy you write tho ;). I'll be sad to see this story end, but until then, yeehaw! lol Kikyo and Naraku? That's scary. I thought for sure Naraku was going to do something to RIn in her sleep the way you descibed him. I feel so bad for Sessho and Kagome. I can't wait till you have a chance to update again.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: July 18, 2004 14:01 CDT
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Was there a reason why Kikyo put Rin up for adoption? Reasons such as, drug, alcohol or gambling addiction? 'Cause that's what it seems like, since she did want to have Rin back with her. I thought Kikyo was going to be a single mother, I never expected her to be married to Naraku. But since Sesshomaru and InuYasha are demons or rather demon and half demon, does that include Naraku as well? Yeah, it was me who suggested that Kikyo be Rin's mother.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK still on writers block for Different Dimensions, but i took it down...i think...well i kno i did on ff.net anyways. and while im having that writers block i get another idea for a story, but its for fictionpress.com! so i'm also working on that...ummm...yea...great chapter! and a couple days ago i was thinking about jaken and wondering if he was going to show up or not, but there he is being sesshy-sama assistant! ok yea, update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: July 17, 2004 21:03 CDT
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i loved this chapter...great twist too. kikyou being rin's mom....i have a feeling she won't be staying there for long because i think naraku will do something to her and she'll run away from them....but that's just a feeling because naraku is pure evil. i relly hope that rin comes to terms with sesshomaru and kagome's relationship soon. but wouldn't it be weird for kagome to be rin's stepmom? i just got that...i'm kind of slow sometimes. i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: July 09, 2004 15:40 CDT
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hmmmm....i wonder who rin's mother is....maybe....Kagura? that would be funny. i loved this chapter and the last one.....kagome's mom is evil!
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