| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 13:34 CDT
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I knew Kagome was going to try and back out of their relationship again, but I'm glad Sesshomaru stopped her. I think I would've done the exact same thing as Kagome too, I wouldn't want to get in between a father and daughter relationship. Even if they weren't close. I wonder what Rin is going to say to her mother and what her mother will do. I bet her mother (Kikyo, right?) will cause trouble for Sesshomaru and Kagome. Try to break them apart, that way she can try and get Sesshomaru. Please don't tell me you're going to make Kagome and Kikyo look alike, cause that would cause more trouble. Beside I don't think they even look alike. Oh, how does Rin know who her biological mother is?
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: July 09, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh lala, I do wonder who Rin's birth mother is!! Great chapter! Kagome's mom is scandelous!!! To do that to her own daughter!! I bet she wasn't thinking about how this would affect Kagome!! That was insane! And writer's block sucks! But I know you'll keep putting out kick ass chapters! It doesn't matter how long it takes, just as long as you continue! ^____^
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 11:25 CDT
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it only takes you more than a couple of hours to write a chapter! lucky...it takes me about 3 to 4 days..maybe less if i know exactly wat is going to happen and that only happened to me once! *sighs* oh well...great chapter! and my uncle is gone so i can work on my fanfics! but im having a major writers block on Different Dimensions, plus i am working on my new one and me and my friend are working on a fic together but i put that on hold because she is now in China..shes so lucky...so yea! great chapter! cant wait til the next one! ok now mm.org is really bothering me...ive signed in twice, i submit the review and it says im not signed in...grrr...
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 09, 2004 11:22 CDT
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Oh no not writer block! That's terrible, I hope you don't get put to down badly with it. THis was a great chater regardless, when Rin called her mom it reminded me of Cruel Intentions, when Sabastians therapists daughter called about her picture being on the internet. Poor Sessho and Kagome, what are they going to do?
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 06, 2004 11:42 CDT
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yay rin found out!!! Well not that its a good thing, but that its a milestone for the story you know? that was quite the way to find out. i could see the holw thing play out in my mind, the look on kag's mom's face? ooooo it made me mad lol. i like the idea of more updates tho lol. i'm scared to know what happens next.
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Title: I'm in awe
Reviewed By: Soul Bled dry On: July 06, 2004 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just Beatiful chapters and I'm glad Rin finally found out but putting Cliffies in is a exclent way to get your readers to come back. I can't express enough how wonderful of a writer you are you bring such a life to the charcters. You story flows wonderfully and I'm glad you continue to write it... Oh and I just had to add my small conquest I finally got my boyfriend to watch InuYasha... Go me!! any way keep on writing ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 14:12 CDT
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aww yay more chapter. i'm really behind on the updates, but hopefully i'll be able to catch up soon. that was a prety scary dream. i mean the fight thing was cool, and i was kind of expecting more of a freak out form rin, but i bet if kagome had've slept longer that would have happened. i cant wit to read the other chapter you posted but i have no time now :
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: July 03, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry my computer crashed. But I just read the last three chaps!! wow!!!! ooh lala!! Inuyasha! that's sweet. I love the whole romantic beach idea. Brilliant. Kagome's mom is so sadistic! that was sooooooo wrong! I feel bad for Rin! but I love the cliffy on the last chapter!!! Oh and the cat fight was great!!! I can't wait till you write more. Great chaps!!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: July 03, 2004 20:27 CDT
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I cannot believe Kagome's mother! It's one thing to want to hurt the man who took your daughter away (not literally), but to hurt innocent people, that's crossing the line. She probably doesn't even know this, but she'll be the cause of her daughters pain. If she and Sesshomaru have to call it quits because of Rin.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 19:59 CDT
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that was not the way i expected rin to find out! awesome! ok uhhh...update again soon! great chapters!
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Reviewed By: StartDust1219 (i kno i signed in i just kno it!) On: July 03, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel so much better! i finally can breath through my nose! it was stuffed up for the longest time! yea i have my sessh/kag fanfic up so check it out!!! i'm kinda stuck on the second chapter, but it should be out soon, my uncle is visiting and its hard to write fanfics when you have visiters. so the second chap should be out soon! and your so much welcome for my support!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: July 03, 2004 14:12 CDT
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I thought the dream was real. I was like, Sesshomaru what are you doing? There are other students in the room, stop holding her right now! Your friend is a great writer, just as yourself.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:41 CDT
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ok i was searching on ff.net looking for a sessh/kag fanfic to read and i saw "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" and i was like i didnt kno she had that on here... ok anyways great chapter and my fanfic is going a little slow especially since i got sick yesterday and i couldnt write or even keep my eyes open i was so tired. but i'm feeling MUCH better today. and yesterday (this was b4 i got really tired) i thought of a sessh/kag fanfic idea so i'm working on that too!! cant wait til the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: little miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:07 CDT
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Hey this is a GOOD story keep going I like it!! Sesshy rocks!! I really enjoy this so far, update soon cuz it's...awesome!! I mean it!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon its a great story. You can't just stop reading it. I feel sorry for InuYasha he never gets a break w/ anything i hope it turns out good for him. Update it soon i love it.
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