| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o) On: June 15, 2004 20:09 CDT
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how would I not review? You take the time to write fantastic chapter, its the least we as readers can do. Poor InuYasha, he just cant catch a break. I have a feeling he might tryand screw things up for Sessho and KAgome, but I hope he doesnt. I love Fluffy so much lol, I can just picture a little dandy bristle scurrying around everywhere. I cant wait for the next update, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its 1 of the BEST story i read!!!!!!GREAT JOB on it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: June 14, 2004 21:29 CDT
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i think inuyasha and sesshomaru should put everything behond them and act like brothers and not enemies. loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 19:55 CDT
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I think the way Sesshomaru acted towards InuYasha is quite reasonable, if I had the ability to smell arousal from other girls I would definitely keep my man (if I had one) at my side. Of course girls act differently around guys or at least some do. I think it would be funny if Sesshomaru was having a conversation with Fluffy and that's how Kagome found out he was a demon. Telling Fluffy that he can't always be around Kagome since he (Sesshomaru) needs time alone with her too. LOL I'm crazy, I know! LOL
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: June 09, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooooooo sorry, my computer crashed! but these two chapters were. Great. Sess is very overprotective. I like that. The part of him being demon! great! I like that. I hope you write more. You rock.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 10:46 CDT
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ok either i got the email saying you updated and deleted by accident or...i have no idea...but i cant believe i toally missed this chapter...but now i've read it and it was awesome! and im not cold anymore! yay!! i'm back in florida!! *does a dance* i updated my story not that long ago. and i should have the third up really soon this week! and i got over my writers block i have a HUGE idea for my story!! uhh thats all i really have to say..oh and it turns out my friend IS going to China! but just not right away like next week or something.
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Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: June 06, 2004 17:40 CDT
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I'm soo sorry for 1) my lack of Reviews 2) being a crappy reviewer...You spin a wonderful tale and it was a great Idea to throw in the demon part.. I must say I was surprized i didn't think you were going to use that . great write and keep up the good work! Jes
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: June 05, 2004 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats some hot stuff, lol, poor kagome. woo hoo! sesshies a youkai! that caught me by surprise to say the least, lol. ::does little dance::: i love the A/Us where theyre still youkai/hanyou/miko/houshi watever. i dont think its getting boring, im sorry about ur # of reviews, its never encouraging when u start losing people. i doubt thats wats happening, maybe theyre still reading AND enjoying, but dont feel the need to review over and over. a lot of people are like that ive noticed, unlike me. i review on every chapter to stories i like, just cause i know it makes the authors feel all the more better. well, just remember that the fics still awesome! so dont slow down ;) alrighty, with that in mind, update soon!!!!!! ~*~*~*~suteki~*~*~*~*~
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Title: title?
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 22:36 CDT
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Oh course I'll continue to love the story. I love that Sessho is a demon, I can't wait to see where you take it. I really can't wait for the next update. I know it will rawk. **p.s. the change room scene sounds like something my b/f nd I would do lol**
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Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering if you were going to show his demonic form, I have to tell you ever since I read the begining of the story I didn't care much about Sesshy just using people for pleasure. I got over it and continued to read each update. I'm not sure if I have reviewed before, it really doesn't matter as long as you get the hits. That tells you more than anything that the story is great. As for Rin she is adopted, I was wondering what would happen if Inu Yasha makes an unanounced visit to Sesshy's house only to find Rin and procedes to tell her about Kagome and Sesshy. Or her mother wanting to bring something Kagome forgot what would Rin do or say to that, its a theory and a suggestion in one. As for the bathing suit chapter, I liked it. To bad it didn't have more effect. Now Miroku knows Inu boy and Sango in this right? What a reaction he would get from them... Please hurry with the next chapter I just can't wait....
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 13:21 CDT
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I had a feeling Sesshomaru was a demon. Especially when he and InuYasha were fighting and Kagome heard gowling. I was like, hmm... could he be a demon? I'm actually glad he's one, maybe you could have Rin be a demon as well. And since you want Kikyo in the story, she could be Rin's mother. So she's half demon or full. Just a suggestion. No your story is not getting boring or predictable, I just think some people don't like to review all the time.
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Reviewed By: Ookami_Kanshisha On: June 02, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I love this story, I may not review every chapter but I do enjoy each one. I just wish they were longer.... I know others feel the same when I say reviewing sucks, but one must make the decision and post one up... Keep up the good work. Oh and make Sesshou-maru show Kagome his true form, I bet she'd love the boa or is it his tail, oh well goes to show you everyone has a different opinion.... Until the next chapter....
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: June 02, 2004 21:54 CDT
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i loved the chapter and i'm glad that you put the demon thing in! it clears everything up as you said. i can't wait until your next one.
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Title: thanks so much!
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my gosh! you used it! thanks so much :) i just can't wait till the next chapter... but see, i can't update my fic yet cause i'm studying for finals... ugh. the pain! anyway, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Orb (offline) On: May 25, 2004 15:37 CDT
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oh man that Miroku bit was so grewat!! and so character like. Poor Kagome freaking out about Sessho. She seems like such a cry-baby, but thats just what her characters like. I cant wait for the next chapter, I know it will be too hilarious, with the bathing suits and everything.
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