| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 25, 2004 06:28 CDT
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i can't figure out something...are they demons? and if they are...do they not know it? because sesshy was acting a little confused there. but all in all..i loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: May 25, 2004 02:04 CDT
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lol, poor Miroku! Ugh, i hate that store! it should be called "everything but money in your wallet when you leave" seriously, its like $40 a PIECE for a bikini, lol. its nice to look around though, as you said, we're all entitled to our dreams ;) oh, i like MsDiva's thought on Rins mom, that would be wierd. what if she was like...hmmm...Kikyou or something oua hte blue like that. hehe, that would be pretty stinkin interesting. but, if you think that would just complicate things for you, i wouldnt be disappointed if u didnt add it. nonetheless, i cant wait to see how this is all gonna go down with rin. alrighty, update soon!! ~*~*~suteki~*~*~
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (didnt sign in) On: May 24, 2004 18:01 CDT
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ok first i was wrong about my friend going to China! ^.^;; the last email i got she said she was in Washington D.C.! ummm...oh yea i 4got that Rin was at her grandmothers!! i would of totally forgotten and put her in probaly!! im so stupid sumtimes! i found out i can get to a comp and read fanfics but i cant type mine up since its on my comp in Florida, and im like...24 hours away from it. *sighs* MY HANDS ARE COLD! awesome chapter cant wait til the next and hopefully my hands wont be as cold as they are now when its up! so until then...Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 16:41 CDT
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I felt so sorry for Miroku, but on the other hand I also had to laugh too. Especially when he took of to run and hide from Sesshomaru. I can just picture it. LOL I truly wish I were Kagome in this story, since Sesshomaru is so crazy about her.
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Title: updated! update again!
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm such a sessxkag fan. i mean they're like the best together!! okay, well i thought kag's mom was really nice. i mean if i were to be in bed with some much older guy, not to mention BEAUTIFUL, my mom would go hysterical. but see, age does not matter!! *cries* how touching... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! *hums* it'd be super funny if miroku was one of the lingerie or swimsuit salesman and sessh gets pissed off *laughs* okay, sorry for the long review. haha. PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Kix (not Logged In) On: May 20, 2004 13:50 CDT
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Yeay!! Kagome is gona live with Seshypoo!! Wheeee!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:13 CDT
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Oh, that's all right that you didn't say anything about my suggestion in the previous chapter. I really didn't think anything about it. Wow, I thought Kagome's mother would've put up more of a fight, but I guess Kagome put her in her place about following her heart. Otherwise she would've been a hypocrite. Do you think Rin's mother would make an appearance in the story? Anyway, that was an excellent chapter.
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Reviewed By: hrc On: May 19, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i love this stury so u have to update very soon got that thats 4 writing laters!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 19, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting... her mom just gave in... hmmmm... if I was Kagome I'd be shocked. If my mother was mad about somthing then all of sudden said she understood, I'd go and hide in a bomb shelter! But I can't wait for Rin to find out! I hope they can salvage some sort of friendship, but not too quickly. Great chapter!! love it as usual ^_^
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (i keep forgetting to sign in!!) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:56 CDT
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OK i just got an idea for the next chapter! what if while they were at the mall they ran into Rin? hm that would be interesting!! ok i put up chapter one for my newer fanfic. i think its called Different Dimensions kinda forgot ^.^;; great chapter and yay for Kagome's mom!! ok yea update again soon!!! Ja Ne!
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Title: stupid title....
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:14 CDT
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aww yay, Kagome's mom it ok with it...maybe not totally, but she's not being a bitch about it lol. This is so bittersweet, I mean I'm sooo happy that their together, and heading to the beach *wink wink*, but that ominus cloud of Rin hanging over their heads....I'm so scared!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 19, 2004 16:56 CDT
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i loved this chapter and i'm glad that you had kagome's mom accept their relationship. i can't wait until your next one!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: May 19, 2004 16:47 CDT
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yay! :::does little victory dance::: lol. her moving into the beach house was an awesome idea. god, if my boyfriend offered to put me up in my very own beautiful beach house, i dont know what id do...probably personalize every single room with him, lol...to bad im single again. darn! lol. alrighty, wow, sesshie picking out a swim suit, thats got disaster written all over it, lol. update soon! ;l ~*~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~*~
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Title: crap
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 02:43 CDT
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erg. you are totally unfair!! what a nasty cliffy! please update soon! and i'm super happy that you made sesshy do sweet things for kag. arigatou~! and impressive job, please please continue! oh, by the way. your description of sesshy is... is... just... *screams* eyegasm or mindgasm. same thing. *drool*
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 17, 2004 17:48 CDT
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I'm happy that you feel better. This chapter was great,nice lemon!!!! I can't wait for the drama w/kagome's mom!!!! you rock!!!!
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