| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
| Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] |
Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 17, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'
|
Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: May 16, 2004 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe Kogame's Crazy mom again hehehe.. she's a very upset person so... I'm taking a stab at this sometime in the next 2-3 chapters Rin's gonna find out.. well keep up the good work. Good luck ~Jessica
|
Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (4got i didnt sign in) On: May 15, 2004 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome chappie!! ok i was talkin to my friend after she read it and she said she loved it and you needed to update soon! she tried to review it but her computer is crap and wont let her review! but during the summer i dont think she'll be able to read cuz she is goin to China! so yea..im gonna miss her...*cries* anyways...i think that was kinda a cliffly....*sniffle sniffle* oh well gives me time to think about whats going to happen next and to work on my fanfic! when there was a knock at the door when they were on the couch i thought it was Rin who knocked on the door for some strange reason... UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
|
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 15, 2004 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
this one is better than the last one! i can't wait until you update!
|
Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not online) On: May 15, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, loved it! i as hoping she would retaliate against her mom, go kagome! how convenient that rin was gone, lol. dun dun dunnn, the wrath of a mother 'saving' her daughter is not something to mess with...unless ur sesshoumaru, hehe. update soon!
|
Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 17:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oops! I meant to say I probably wouldn't stand for it. Well maybe just in the beginning, but if she truly made my dad happy then I wouldn't want him to throw it away just because I couldn't handle it.
|
Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 17:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa! Kagome's mother sure had a lot of guts barging into Sesshomaru's house like that! How exactly did she know where Sesshomaru lived? Looks like you to my suggestion as having Sesshomaru wanting Kagome to move in with him. Yeah, besides she is 18 and her mom couldn't say anything about it. But, they would still have to consider Rin. Which I don't think she'll take very well. I know if I were in Rin's position I wouldn't take it graciously either, I wouldn't even stand for it. Hopefully I'll never have to go through that.
|
Reviewed By: hrc On: May 15, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love this atory please please please update soon!!!
|
Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 15, 2004 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
A hell of a convienents I'd say lol. So, the problem with Kagomes mom will get resolved huh? Hmm....lol, I can't wait!! But then again it'll be like one problem after another I guess, when Rin gets home I mean. ooooo I can't wait for the next update. I really like how Sess was talking back to Kagome's mom. So....hot....*drools*. For not having any modivation this was a really great chapter. The lemon was really great, and the emotions were totally awesome.
|
Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: May 10, 2004 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Exclent writei kinda expected it but not so soon great anyway.. Good luck ~Jessica
|
Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 08, 2004 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. The fact that she ran away, interesting. I can't wait for Rin to find out. Even if I was Rin, and my dad was a total hotty like Sess I'd be kind of upset at first, but then I'd probably get over it. Another kick ass chapter. I hope you feel better. Believe I know school is hell, studying and what not, believe me, I signed up for spring and summer classes as well, so I understand. well by for now, huggles and goldfish, BirkysSpy
|
Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (i thought i was signed in) On: May 08, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chappy! i told my friend about kagome's mom walking in on her and sesshy and she was like "you have to give me the link for that story!" and so i did! hope you feel better!! oh and if you IMed me on yahoo i didnt get it bcuz i closed the message window by accident. anyways until your next chappy...JA NE! P.S. i usually dont read fanfics off of mm.org, but i love your story so much your is one of the few that i read off of it!
|
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 08, 2004 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved the chapter and i can't wait until your next one.
|
Title: stuipid mm missing info
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
*drools* Sesshomaru in boxers....Well, now that that necessity is out of the way *eh heh heh* Yay chapter!! Boo sickness! Aww you like me reviews *gets huge anime eyes* You love me, you really love me! Ok Jim Carrey does it better but oh well. So, a few days with no Rin huh? What better time to run away lol. I'm still scared to think about what will happen when Rin finds out. I hope you feel better soon! take care
|
Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I missed a chapters of this story, the previous one to this. But now I won't now that I have it on favs.
|
| Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] |
