| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: gittelbug*when loged in* On: November 25, 2004 16:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay *claps* I had some idea that you might know. anyway GREAT plot twist! update soon!
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Title: Ahhhhhh!
Reviewed By: Obiecat On: November 25, 2004 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Darlin', you're killing me with the sexual tension. I Love It!!! You're an engrossing writer and I look forward to further ass kickings from you!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 01:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmm...where to begin. so many points, 1500 words. okay, here we go: WOW!!!!! Absol-fuckin-lutely amazing. i have to admit, i was concerned at first with the thought of InuYasha (the love of my life) wandering towards the other sex, but thinking about 600 years of life and knowing that there is NOTHING new under the sun, it makes perfect sense. (not a flame at all, or a remark towards people of that of that orentation, my best freinds are). but you have taken this story, given it wings, and let it fly. absolutly amazing work. the depth in description has left me marveling in shock at its content. i can see it all in my mind. and with bringing in street names, explicit directional infomation, and all else inbetween; perfect. naraku is an ASSHOLE!! (but what else is new). great evil villian! really good. i love how you brought around infomation of how to work a movie theater into the story and all. really really teriffic work. great character depictions too. i love how inuyasha went temporarily giggy when Kagome and him were discussing all of his collection peices and he was giving her random things. it was cute. absolutly wonderful writting. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 25, 2004 00:48 EST
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HAHAHAH! I knew he was gonna have a heart attack with that info. Strangely, I knew what she had found on the computer. It just hit me as a possibility. I can't wait to see what he plans on doing in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: peachykeen(not signed in) On: November 24, 2004 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally loving this story :o) cant wait to read your next chapter :o)
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 22:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...Sounds like Inuaysha moved to the right state, huh? LOL! Nice chappy, adn I soo loved the bit where he humped her leg like a dog! LOL! That was hailarious! He's soo funny! I love this fic, and I always look forward to reading the next chappy! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 21:49 EST
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I am so fucking happy with this story I can't even BEGIN to tell you! Yay! Yay! YAY!!!!! Great chapter! hope to read more soon!
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Title: Movie House Hanyou
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 21:12 EST
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Evil Author, EVIL Author, you made me snort diet pepsi through my nose when I read that age of consent statement. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. When I first started reading this story, it was on AFF, and I was a little leary. I have since come to love this story. Definately off the beaten path, but so goooooood. Yummy fun. The next couple of chapters ought to be EXTRA good. Just how many inturruptions can be presented, or will that be too evil for you? I can't wait. Just the kind of Cliffy I love.
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: November 24, 2004 21:00 EST
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HOLY SHIT! i never saw that coming! XD it was an absolutely WONDERFUL plot twist! ^^ i can sooooo~ picture Inu-Yasha's facial expression while reading that... XD ...anyway, update soon! ~*~Netiri~*~
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Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 20:56 EST
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wow great chapter and oh yeah 16 (go inu)um by the way do we get to see some bdsm on kaggie oh and a personal request i loved your miroku/inu bit on a past chapter, maybe you could do a three way or just a one shot for my own sick twisted little amusement plssssssssssssssssss? and thank you.
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Reviewed By: LorelaioftheSea On: November 24, 2004 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great chapter, but evil cliffy!!! ;_; I hope it doesn't take you too long to write the next chapter, because now I'm _dying_ to find out what happens!! XD
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Title: ch. 23
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 16:42 EST
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Perhaps I presume to think that ChibiS's comments had anything at all to do with this turn of events, but if they did, then having Jakotsu get fired at this point is a decent save. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This whole chapter was a decent save. Way to take a flaw and turn it into a plot twist.
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Title: Thank the Gods!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 15:54 EST
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Man... love the loophole! My God, I was wondering how in the world I could be patient for a year... I so love your story. I especially love InuYasha's explanation of pleasurable pain. So many misconceptions out there. I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter. Ja ne! :) Joy
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 13:44 EST
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Well in Texas it is 17. Just in case the other person is a year or two older, you know high school romance. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, i can't wait for the next chap! :D
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