| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ary On: November 22, 2004 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amagad! I love this fic so far. I heard of it through KrisCynical's fic illustration page and I was skeptical at first, but then I started reading and was totally enthralled! I'm way excited for the next chappy. Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 11:03 EST
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i like this story and i can't wait for more. i love how inuyasha is in this one, it's great! this story had me from the first chapter and...and i'm sorry, i can't stop thinking about inuyasha...hehe...this story is awesome.
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Title: Freaky
Reviewed By: Rache On: November 08, 2004 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing isn't fantastic, but it's definately entertaining. I think what really gets me the most about this fic is the sheer number of similarities between this fic and my life, ranging from the Japanese (I'm not fluent, but I can get by) to working in a movie theater with shady managers. Can you see the twitch my eye has taken on because of this fic? The only thing that doesn't seem to connect me to the fic is that I don't smoke anything at all. I just wanted to share this massive, freakish coincidence. - Rache
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 03, 2004 15:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! another great update and a little bit of IY/Kag fluffy stuff... and of course the ever selfless kags thanks jak! lol and it seems she may be getting closer to naraku's secrets.... can't wait for the next update!!!!
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Title: Chapters 21 and 22
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 00:23 EST
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(petting a large fish) Sniff! I have a bass named Velvet too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The sweetness and intimacy between Inuyasha and Kagome is very ...sweet and intimate. Crud. I've been up to late watching election results... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The identity of the person with the thick accent is not at all clear. If it is supposed to be Cher, I have to wonder what it has to do with Clint pocketing money. The whole off-screen activity sounds like it's supposed to be one event, but it doesn't match up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's not clear why the paychecks are smaller than anticipated. I can't tell if it's silly teenage employees shocked to find the taxes taken out or if Naraku is embezzling.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: November 01, 2004 17:34 EST
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Great chapter, as always. That one shot was hilarious. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: SapphireDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 23:50 EST
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i love your story so much. every time i check my email, i hope for a new chapter for MHH. and when i get one, it makes my day. thank you SO much for being an awesome writer! i love the way you write IY. keep up the awesome work! ::huggles for the hero::
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Title: Oops, you did it again!
Reviewed By: Maggz (NSI) On: October 31, 2004 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Num! As always, you did a wonderful job with this new chapter. Congrats for the award! I just finished reading and I loved it. Can't wait to read more. Til the next update, Maggz
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 19:53 EDT
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Coolsa.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...he took Kagome to talk to Jakotsu and Bankotsu? Dude...I don't know if I could have even looked at either of themn straight, least of all Jakotsu knowing what he does...That alone would freak me out, if I was in Kagome's shoes that is. Although, I would feel the same if I found out the guy I loved was getting himself whipped over me. Man, that has to be something he'd have to give up completely if I were to be with him indefinitely...Nice job on this chapter. And yeah, that was disturbing to think of Naraku dressed up as Freddy Kreuger...*shudders* I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm patinetly awaiting the next chappy! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 14:43 EDT
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I was just thinking about this story this morning! And here you updated today! Wheee!! I was thinking about re-reading the last few chapters, just for kicks. Might still do that. I really like your writing style and characterizations and re-reading what you've writen is certianly no chore. BTW, the scene with Inu and Kagome at his house was cute, very sweet and nice. I hope you get to update again soon and that your Halloween is fun!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: October 30, 2004 10:17 EDT
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hey great chapter! Please keep up the great work and update asap. Can't wait to find out what happens next. -Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Black Kitty (Not Logged On) On: October 30, 2004 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Connecticiut! YAAAAAAAAAAY! That's where my mom lived before she moved to Wyoming where I am typing now. Though In just a few hours I will have the horor of being stuck in the backseat of a car for an hour and a half with my annoying Aunt Pauline! (I'm driving to Salt Lake City, Utah! I don't mind that...just her.) GRRRRRRRRRRRR! Anyway keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu2 On: October 27, 2004 17:20 EDT
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I just wanted to say congratulations for your nominations and awards. Your talents definitely deserve the recognition. I don't mind waiting for the next chapter, because the wait is absolutely worth it! Thanks for such a good story!
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:15 EDT
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Ahhh, who cares about haters? As long as you have more lovers than haters, you're good to go, right? LOL. Just trying to make you feel more loved. I'm shocked that InuYasha opened up more to Kagome. I thought he was going to change his rules about jailbait! Can't wait till the next chapter!
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