| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter so i rin gonna be with sess as a slightly normal girl now?Is she gonn get over naraku and be with sess completly?
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Reviewed By: leila-chan (nsi) On: September 09, 2005 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've said it before and i'll say it again. poor rin! the way you write about her suffering just tugs at my heart. i can't imagine ever going through anything she has. definitely hell on earth! and wow, having sex in a hotel room with other people around. only inu! ^_^ kag lets him, tho. glad work wont be as busy for you now. can't wait for the next chap. thanks.
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Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK THAT YOUR STORY IS A GREAT AND I HOPE NO PRAY THAT U KEEP GOING
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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: MagmaGccko On: September 05, 2005 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome chapter with perfect Drama.!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 15:51 EDT
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*sobs* Your devoted reviewer and biggest fan can no longer be a constant reviewer. :( I have been permanently banned from the computer, but by the mercy of God I was able to get on for a few seconds while parents are not home. *anime sweat drop* I can still read my e-mail on my phone, so whenever I get the chance, I have to copy and paste your new chapters onto an e-mail to myself. I've been caught twice, and thus why I am permanently banned, but YOU ARE WORTH IT!!! That last chapter, the one with Rin and Kagome dancing, was so hot! You simply must update!! Poor LaLa is going through fanfic withdrawals, and I'm about ready to drown myself in our ugly green pool.
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Title: The Curse Of The Dragon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 18:16 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 09:40 EDT
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I really wanted to tell neshee to STFU, but I want an update too. I updated my fic. I know how life gets in the way. When I win the lottery, I'm kidnapping you and making you write fics for me. XP Can't wait to see what you put up next, I'm going crazy here. XP You're so awesome :)
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Reviewed By: neshee On: August 29, 2005 22:52 EDT
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love ur story but u update to damn slow so it would be much apreciated if you updated quickly thanks
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Reviewed By: hotarumai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 00:00 EDT
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wow! great chapter!!!... thank you for e-mailing me about the new chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for some reason i have a really bad feeling about this party. i loved this chapter and was sad when it was finished. man, hiten and bankotsu drive me crazy in this fic. definitely bad news! i can't wait for "hotel party part 2". keep it up.
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Title: Lucient, who is about to be sucked away into a spinning vortex
Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 11:16 EDT
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Holy holy. Very, very hot chapter. Extremely well written. Kagome is so very patient with Rin. I can't believe she's drinking, but at least she didn't jump right in. It took some heavy convincing. And I am sure I can speak for most of us... if Inuyasha was breathing down my neck, I'd beg for him too. It'd be nice to have my girlfriend AND Inuyasha... but he can't touch her. lol. You get me sooo engrossed and then it's over so suddenly, I almost feel alienated. You're so incredibly talented, and I'm glad more readers are taking the time to review, that's awesome. Keep up the good work, and email me sometime. XP James
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. I am with you since the beginning. Keep writing. It's great.
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Title: Curse of the Dragon
Reviewed By: Indolenstia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fallenangel, you're such a fantastic writer with this fanfic. I read the whole thing and I just plainly luv it so much! You are a very good fanfiction writer and no matter what that person said in their complaint about it, screw them. I actually like how you developed the story a lot and keep wanting to read more and more. I know I don't review often but I really do appreciate you taking the time and writing these chapters out with such depth and definition. No matter what, there are people like me who even though we suck at writing reviews to respective authors regularly, we really do luv ya'll guys' works. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next chappie--personally, I'm always hopping on the computer just to see if you've updated from time to time. That jerk who had a problem with your writing--forget him--obviously he just can't see the basics of the term fanfiction. I am a writer myself and I too would be very pissed if someone bitched about something that they literally don't have to read, so I do feel you on that one. But forget that and just keep doing what you do--obviously, it's working ;) Sincerely, a true, appreciate fan.
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me again! love the story as usual and i am so happy sesshy found out about the whole tsubaki thingy, anyhow big ups to you for trashin that wierdo critic, don't stress yourself your story is off the chain. i cannot wait for the next chap, i need some sess kicking someone's ass stuff, or something healing for him and rin. good luk and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right! They're totally Couyon! And I was SOOOO excited there was a new chapter up. Curses, foiled again! Next time you get some BS like that, just ask for it to be removed. There's a huge difference between constructive criticism, and failed sarcasm. We shouldn't cater to the melodramatic, so just keep doing your thing XP LYK ONG! THAT RANT WAS A 10!
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