| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 24, 2004 18:55 PST
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Just go and have fun this weekend and eat all the turkey your stomach can stand! LOL I know I will! I have a question...did Sango gasp because she didn't know Kagome was officially declared "pregnant" and that they didn't know for sure if she was? Did that make sense? LOL If it didn't don't worry about answering it. I'll just die of curiousity. Just kidding!! LOL
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Title: JAFAR!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 18:45 PST
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Final Thought fromMiroku: I think he took that rather . . . well . . . . Jafar says that in Aladdin! lol So funny. Oh but your story. It just. Wow. I dunno how to say it.
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Title: Wait a second...
Reviewed By: RHCP RULES!!! On: November 24, 2004 17:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
With Sango's garden thing being in the future. The first conclusion I jumped to is that if Sango tried to have another baby, she would suceed. If the garden couldn't change ie. nothing Kagome or the others do in the past seem to change the future, than there is no way if Sango tried to have another baby, that it should fail, or else there would be an eight plot, and the future would have to change. I guess this has to do with your view on the whole time travel thing, but you get my point. I don't think that Kagome would just jump to that conclusion when the one I did is so much more evident. Also why not actually just pay someone to be the suragate mother. Then you would not have all this unpleasentness. It would seem to be kind of uncomfortable for Kagome to do it, so why not someone else. She did not even consider this option. Hope you can respond either in AN or e-mail me at a49erfan_80@hotmail.com Thanks. Also I love your writing.
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Reviewed By: Thumos-flint On: November 24, 2004 14:56 PST
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HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!Eat,drink,and drink some more..Love your chapter...poor rin got highjacked once again,i swear she is going to be dramatized if not already.FLUFFY is BACk BABY!I can't wait until he starts kicking ass. I'm pretty safe to say Inuyasha is getting worse...and it has something to do with that weird powder he just had to touch...BAKA! I think that Demons influence on men has to do with the powder...Inuyasha hasn't really seen the demon so he has naughty dreams about the only girl he cares for...Kagome. Anyway enough babbling happy holidays.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (fully convinced that she's right about the powder) On: November 24, 2004 13:25 PST
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First thing: I am now absolutely *sure* Hisadaicho's funky powder is the cause of Inu-Yasha's dreams. Second thing: Yaaaay! Sessy! Hisadaicho ain't gonna know what hit her. Heh! Third thing: I'm gonna miss you over the Holidays, I can't wait to see what's coming!
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Title: WTF happened? MY review got screwed up. Oh well, more for you.
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (nsi) On: November 24, 2004 10:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooo WOO!(
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Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (nsi) On: November 24, 2004 10:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooo WOO!(
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: November 24, 2004 09:19 PST
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great addition to the story. glad to see Yash is handeling it a little better then he had been before....well....besides for the rabbit remark. bakayasha! anywho's, sesshy is now pissed off, not a good thing. great for writting, sucks for who gets the blunt end of his rage. great things written here, as always. have a great holiday and i look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate On: November 24, 2004 07:44 PST
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YUMMMM, sesshy in a cold, burning rage... some lovely Kagome/InuYasha moments here: him needing reassuring that it's 'only one pup,' and well, the end is cute even if it didn't end the way most of us would secretly (or not so secretly ^_^) prefer. If he'd gotten on the bed with her they'd've been "rutting by morning." ^_~ o 0 (not that she'd complain... but then again, who would?)
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: November 24, 2004 07:20 PST
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At least they are talking, and he seems to have accepted the idea - at least until he sees Miroku. LOL maybe Miroku should have a seal ready?
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Title: Happy Thanxgiving
Reviewed By: kalobagh@mediaminer.org On: November 24, 2004 06:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your fic. Happy Holidayz!!!!!
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Title: Ch13
Reviewed By: Flames101 On: November 24, 2004 06:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Can't wait for Monday!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 06:06 PST
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loved it.. can't wait to see what happens after the weekend.. till then have a happy thanksgiving.
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Reviewed By: Nicky(ff.net is back to read only status.) On: November 24, 2004 05:21 PST
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Hmmm...where to begin?A rabbit?! well he was right about one thing, it would make less noise. Loved the little line where Inuyasha asked Kagome if it was just the one pup; as well as where he said he's still gotta beat up Miroku,cause it's the 'principle' of the matter. See Kagome he does care, he's just alittle stubborn sometimes. So he's still not gonna tell her where he went? Will he tell her about the dreams? Might be a good thing for her to know especially with him sleeping in her room. Might also be a good reason for her to hold onto those beads. Not that Inuyasha would intentionally hurt her but sometimes those urges can hard to fight.(not like I'd know.) So they took Rin. All I have to say is that they better be prepared for a serious butt-kicking. Anywhoo have a wonerful Thanksgiving week and enjoy the time with your family...we can survive till Monday (unless of course my sister annoys me to death before then.)
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 04:34 PST
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*Out of frustration for a spoiled oppurtunity, goes on HALO and blows countless things (83 elites, 69 jackals, 47 Grunts, I counted, just so you could KNOW how annoyed I am) to smithereens* *Glares at author, murderous rage apparent* You are so CRUEL!!! *breaks down into tears*
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