| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: February 09, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay this is turning out to be a freakin sad story. Is it going to be like this through out the rest of the story. Or is it going to get better. One other thing what days do you update this?
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 07, 2005 06:36 CST
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Aargh. Super angsty! Poor everybody! Can't wait for more. Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 07, 2005 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
long shuddering sigh...................................................................sigh ................sigh...............Goodness its just too sad for words...........he left mokomokosama behind.........he truely has given up......SIGH I'm going to go and cry for an hour now. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 07, 2005 01:40 CST
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Wow....Kichiro is rather perceptive, isn't he? lol, Looks like he hit straight to the point of that round. I forsee...wait a minute..*pulls out magic eight ball, and shakes it up* Ahh/....answer hazy...try again later....Stupid magic eight ball. I forsee more torment....BUt the magic either ball doesn't....hmm....
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Title: this is so amazing...
Reviewed By: angelfish007 On: February 07, 2005 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its beautifully designed to show the love growing, and the bond strengthing between Toga and Sierra.... then to show the utter pain of the two of them being ripped apart and each slowly dying inside bc of the emptiness they feel from the lack of the other one being there ... this ache that just builds until you don't think it can hurt anymore ... and your readers feel the love and the pain just like characters ... i love this story and it's one of my favorites even without a big bad flashy enemy like in meta ... the enemy here is so much more devastating bc you can't just kill it to make it better ... this is truly a great story =)
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Reviewed By: BloodyKitsune (Too tired to sign in) On: February 06, 2005 21:31 CST
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....I on't even want to know what was going through Kichiro's head.... and if he was born with it, is it NATURAL that it comes off?
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 17:36 CST
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*peers into the distence* Heeeyyy...if I squint hard enough I can see the happy ending! But it's so far away...:((((((( Sorry, silly mood. Anyway, excellent chapter. It keeps on getting better and better...sadder too.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 06, 2005 16:45 CST
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Wow. That was heart breaking. You can just feel the misery seeping out of everyones skin. Was Brett actually going to take Toga's side? Or was I horribly mistaken. Well, it seems as if Toga is going downhill fast. Come on Kagome, we all know that you want to interfer so get on with it! Start getting in other people's business. Hmm. I wonder what Sexxhoumaru will say when he learns that Toga is back. I'll give you $5 if he calls himself "Sexxhoumaru" infront of everyone. hahahaha. Anywho-- loved it to death!! Cannot wait for more!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 16:00 CST
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**sniffle***
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Title: Poor Toga & Sie!
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart aches for both Toga and Sie. Now that they're on different continents it's going to have to take something big to bring them together. *eyes Yasha's sons suspicously and then thinks about Toga and Sie's separation and begins crying; sniffles* At this rate, I'm going to empty my tissue box. Anyways great chapter as usual Sue.
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the story-thus-far in one big gulp last night, and really enjoyed it. You've created an number of very sympathetic original characters within the framework of the Inuyasha universe, and a terrific obstacle in the way of Toga and Sierra's happy ending. I'll be interested to see how you resolve it. Just a minor niggle, regarding the language issue--there a few places in the story where Sierra overhears some bit of conversation between Toga and his family members, and understands it--the "your bitch is on the phone" comment made by his cousin, for instance. Wouldn't they be speaking Japanese with each other, rather than English with Japanese thrown in? In which case Sierra would probably not understand what's going on. (I know you clarified this point at the wedding, when you mentioned that everyone was speaking English out of courtesy...) Anyhow, great job and it's just the editor in me that nit-picks minor details in an otherwise wonderful story...
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Title: Ch. 33 warning *snif*
Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 13:57 CST
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Do not, I repeat, do not read this chapter with a sad song playing in the background: You will cry your eyes out **still sniffing, where's the tissue box...** Will there be light at the end of the tunnel within the next few chapters (not talking about the preview in P3:F 'cause it does not explain how they end up together)? But in the meantime we need divine intervention here people! Somebody must to do something somewhere to bring them back together before Toga lets himself die of a broken heart. Great chapter Sue! You know how to stir our emotions! MouF
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Title: *sob*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 13:05 CST
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Toga's pain is a tangible thing. How much more can he bear? He even forgot his 'fluff' -- Something has got to give. This goes beyond stubborness. It's like a vicious pain loop that the body doesn't know how to stop anymore, (I've seen that kind of pain, it took 3 days of straight morphine to stop it, and I wouldn't wish it on anyone) only this is emotional. I think that Sierra and Toga's problem needs outside assistance now to fix it. --- Waiting anxiously for solution!! Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hunter.88 On: February 05, 2005 22:41 CST
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Oh shit....Kari kissed Toga...and I'm guessing Brent was the one in the car..?--Great fic, keep it up! ^^
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:03 CST
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Yep, saw that kiss coming from a mile away. Silly girl. I love the idea of Kagome trying to play match maker or at least re-match maker between Sierra and Toga. Hmmm...with Inu-Yasha and Kagome around if the truth slips, Toga might actually learn a solution to his problem. Of course then there's the question of how pissed Sessy's gonna be when he finds out.
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