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 Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2005 14:08 CST
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Bout time fluffy came around. You had me worried for a bit there that he might not. It's nice to know that though it'll be a rough ride, it's all gonna work out now.
 Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2005 13:40 CST
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Yea Yea Yea More More More.. ok enough repitition. I can think of only two ways her can get her to liston. 1) pin her to a wall and force her. 2) talk to her family and tell them who.what he is.. Personally i'm hopping for the 2nd.. but your probably cume up with a 3rd. Needless to say i can't wait till the next chapter
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: February 18, 2005 12:55 CST
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Toga - you are gonna HAVE to book a trip back to America. Surprise her - she'll have to listen - especially if you have her pinned between you and a wall in her apartment.
 Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2005 20:21 CST
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Please write more! I got hooked with Purity, and now that I'm waiting for Purity 2 it's slowly gnawing at me! Help!
 Reviewed By: MissNikki  On: February 14, 2005 09:09 CST
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I'm taking a wild guess and saying that since your still updating this one Purity # isn't finishted either. Are you just updating or revising? I want to know before I start printing it out. Well anyway keep up the good work and Love MN
 Reviewed By: Miyumi [not signed in]  On: February 13, 2005 21:14 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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omg omg omg noooooooooooooooooooooooo toga~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope they find him!!!!! wah!!!!!!!!!!*tear* T.T ~ ur faithful reader~ Miyumi
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2005 18:45 CST
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Ohhh...hell. This was sad! And surprising. God, just when i thought I could figure you out, you surprise me again! I didn't make the connection of Toga going out to die! Fuck! Ooohh...I actualI don't have to wait until next weekend to find out what happens!
 Reviewed By: chichiwvu(nsi)  On: February 13, 2005 16:17 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ohh sue! you've really put these chapters together well. There is a lot going on at once, and it's so suspenseful, i can't stand it... yay! Sesshomaru is in action!
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in  On: February 13, 2005 15:04 CST
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I knew it. Living with pain and lonliness with no hope to temper it, is a heavy load to for anyone. Contemplating centuries of more endless emotional destitution must be unbearable. Toga is in a 'place' that is dangerous to himself because he doesn't see any reason to fight what is, to his reckoning, unsolveable. While he may not activly try to kill himself, he will also not try too hard at keeping someone else doing it for him. --- The angst that has built up in this story is phenominal. It's so thick, you'd have to cut it with a chainsaw! LOL (I hope your proud of yourself...you have everyone in tears! :P ) I will try to save some tissues for the next chapter. --- Splendid.
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: February 13, 2005 12:55 CST
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OK. Now you've got painful cliffies in both Purity 2 and Metamorphosis. You're trying to kill me, right? Heh. Thanks for the great stories!!
 Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in  On: February 13, 2005 10:49 CST
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*Gasps for air!!!* Oh my oh my. Such revolations!!! My mind is just running circles around its self. I think if it could it would be making that sound when a computer is "thinking". Ya know what I'm talking about? That kind of a clicking noise when it's running something, hahaha. I wanted Kagome and Kagura to call Sierra this instant!! and then get her on the next plane to Tokyo! hehe. Wow. Very excited!!! Need to see what happens next!!! --Aitu
 Reviewed By: Maril  On: February 12, 2005 23:17 CST
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Okay, love the story, it's wonderful, and I'm in awe as to how you can make so many great stories without some being better then others, and without them becoming to similar, you're truly gifted. But somethings just been bugging me since reading the end of chapter 33 when Kichiro mentions that mokomoko-sama is something your born with. I remember you mentioning that mokomoko-sama isn't attached when they're in human form, but becomes their tail when they transorm into their demon dog form. Wouldn't that mean that in order to be born with it they'd have to be born in that form? Sorry for the weird question, it's just bugging me...
 Title: Poor Toga...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in  On: February 12, 2005 17:35 CST
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I really feel for him. With nothing to look forward to, life has lost that 'zip' that makes living worth while. I'm also surprised at how...calm the father and son reunion was between Sess & Toga. Looked like Sess was just as reluctant to argue or fight as Toga. I hope that Toga doesn't take too many risks on this little 'mission' his father has given him. Sure it might pass the time and there's nothing like a good fight to get the blood pumping...but there is also very little right now that will inspire him be cautious. I'm worried. --- Great chapter!
 Reviewed By: fruitcake  On: February 12, 2005 16:57 CST
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ooh. wonder what this hunt thingy is. hope he doesnt get hurt. haha. ryo's such a trouble maker. hm. is the 3rd movie canon? because in the movie, inuyasha's dad gets killed by a human right after inuyasha's born. and in chronicles, didnt you say it was a demon that killed him? so, which is true? sorry for the questions..heh.
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2005 16:56 CST
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*relaxes* Glad to see Sessy's returning to the better senses that we all know and love him for. Still, I really think Toga needs to tell *someone* why! I mean, how else is he going to figure out how to fix it? (Cos dammit! It must be fixed!) Ergh, stubborn, stubborn. Oi! And that Ryo! *smacks own forehead* Who raised him??????? I swear, he only paid attention to Daddy when Daddy was being bad! Anyway, great chapter, looking forward to some Toga ass-kicking and hopefully that happy ending.
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