| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: Papa to the rescue!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 23:24 CST
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Sesshoumaru is going to confront Sierra. Well, with the kind of scare he put in her before, he might have better luck just kidnapping her. She'd have to listen to him if she can't get away. I hope he won't have to fall back on those autocratic ways of his. Poor Toga...hoplessness is really taking its toll. -- Oh the continuing angst!! -- Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 19, 2005 22:23 CST
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Oooooo.....Sudden chill! Sesshomaru being on Toga's side for once.....wow.....Oo;
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:48 CST
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Hooo boy. Poor gal. Even if Sessy's there for good (wonderful! Fantastic!) intentions, sure won't be fun for Sierra to see him. I will laugh my ass off she gives Sessy a peiece of her mind for being such a stubborn prick about the whole deal for so long.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 19, 2005 16:03 CST
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Ouuuuuu! So much excitement in the past few chapters! I could barely read fast enough, lol. Poor Toga-- Hope Sierra gets there soon!! I can imagine that Kaugra was ready to kick some serious Sesshoumaru ass at various points of the story, lol. Gotta love the distinction between "My son" and "your son." That sounds about right though, him making those distinctions, hehehe. Great work!! I enjoyed it lots and lots. Must read more! Maybe I'll go make Toga a get well soon card. Bye bye. --Aitu
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Title: You've Done It *Again*
Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 19, 2005 14:44 CST
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:) Another engulfing chapter in this sweeping continuation of Purity...she'd changed her #, eh?? Heh, can my abused heart endure *2* cliffhangers in *2* days?? Oh, wait, if she'd not updated, then...then...nooOOoo! Interesting mining of Sesshomaru's feeling toward his sire--under Kagura's relentless personality; I so enjoy how you've characterized her--!!! As I had with Metamorphosis, another amazing gem that was so unique. Hunkers by the Chapter Eater's Well, nose on the wood ::is it Tuesday yet::? ;)
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 13:59 CST
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Way to kill Sierra with shock, Fluffy.... I don't understand how you can stand to put your characters through such angst and agony. I love reading it but it seems like it would be hard on you to write it. Does writing stories like this ever "get to you" or do you keep it strictly separated from the world in your mind?
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Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: February 19, 2005 12:03 CST
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Yey!!! I was so happy that you updated another chapter so soon! Made my day. Keep writing, I want to see Kari's reaction to what Seshomaru will tell her.
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Reviewed By: OrionLady(backwards) On: February 19, 2005 10:01 CST
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barraling headlong into another mental and emotional breakdown. Your writting is so powerful... Ok either i read really fast or that chapter was shorter than most....either is posiable LOL Orion
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: February 19, 2005 09:50 CST
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dah-da-dun! Sess in the house!!! I hope Sie can see it all now.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 19, 2005 09:13 CST
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Another great chapter. Toga serems pretty weak (compared to his father and uncle). Is that because he is still very young or are modern youki just weaker in general? Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 18, 2005 21:06 CST
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Oh sighness...such pain and emotion....I need tissue now. :D 'Orion
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 19:23 CST
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wow...as always you have left me astonished. I'm not sure i have yet to review this fic...so for the note, i love Toga. he is one of my favorite offspring of any characters ever devised. this fic is great because it is so origional in its roots. as alwasy, you have set the bar for wonderful fan fiction works and as always, i am in awe of your work. Great job and i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: February 18, 2005 18:28 CST
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Ohhhh! When will the next chapter be ready? I really need to know what is going to happen next. Keep up the good work. I love your story. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 17:47 CST
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:( Poor Toga. *screws up face with big wide sparkly eyes* Ah but love will find a way, will it not? I loved the final battle (except for...and I know I've never mentioned this before, your fixation with Sessy's energy whip. *grumbles* I hate that thing. I'm convinced they created for the anime to cut down on the bloodshed). Anyway, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what happens with Purity III.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:35 CST
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Damn neko-youkai...great fight! A (s)mothering Kagura...her poor baby boy...LOL! -- I sure hope Sierra will listen to somebody soon. She's still hurt over the 'kissing Kari' incident. They have both been hurt enough. You know, I can never tell anyone too many times that 'communication' is one of the most important things for a healthy relationship...and with Sess not 'communicating' certain crucial information that may have prevented most of this has damaged his relationship with Toga. The good old 'ripple effect' is definately to blame. One small ommission, however it was intended, has snowballed and is now threatening the existance and happiness of two innocents. Toga didn't even know enough to ask questions that might have given him the information. *sigh* Sesshoumaru is learning a hard lesson here. He should have learned a long time ago with his mate's example about how important it is to be able to make your own decisions. Kagura lived under Naraku's heavy thumb for too long to ever want to see one of her children being controlled...even by her own mate. Freedom, I imagine, would be a major factor in Kagura's decisions. When you suffer something, you never wish it on someone else. I actually think that Sess is getting off easy here. But then again, when you love someone, forgivness is easier to give. -- Great chapter!!
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