| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: IXIWineIXI [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I mean wow. I've never been drawn into a story like this one. The style of writing, creativity, the plotting, just everything was perfect in everyway. I took me about 6 months to read purity because it bored me until halfway through the story. This one, I mean they way you created Toga was brilliant. I love the way he seems to be Inuyasha and Sesshomaru into one and I love this kid. In my opinion (after reading purity 1,2 and 3) Toga was by far my favorite. I literally read this story in one sitting. This was perfection at its finest.
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Title: i love sexxhoumaru, but...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he REALLY pissed me off for a LOOOOOOOOONG time, in this fic...i guess no good story goes without SOME drama, but LAWDY! i can't believe he scared sierra and tried to buy her off! i'm, so glad demon blood erases disease! sierra was so cool!
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Reviewed By: EJA Roberts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 22:35 CDT
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Hey sue! It me, that kid who adores your fics on fanfic. I finnaly am reading the purity speuels, and man are they good!!!! it almost me sad that you don't update on fanfic anymore, but you do have good reasons and least your still updating here. Anyway I love Toga!! He's soooooo adorable. his personallity is like Sesshomaru when it comes to his quiet deminor and like Inuyasha when it comes to attiudie, its the best of both worlds!!! And I adore Sierra, she;s soo cute and well, cute. I just love how she curse's. 'Tell your father to take his money and shove it up his. . . Nose!' i think that's my favorite line. Anyway you're probably thinking why am I reviewing now? Well, that's because I couldn't figure out to review on this site. It was an oh duh moment when I found it. Anyway love the story, Please keep writing!
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Title: Try 2
Reviewed By: Nanoda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well crap - I log in and MM sends me to a different fic review. How embarassing. I give you 10/10 also though. ;) Purity is one of my favourite series - once I had read the first, I had to keep reading the rest, especially since you manage to work in angst and character development, while also leaving in the fluff and happy endings that I crave in a 'yasha fic. ;)
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stayed up... all night to read this... Now I'm tired... but... fully satisfied! ^_^ I love this one! Well... Maybe that's because I plainly love Toga... I wonder if Sierra will share? Now, off to Purity 3... I will not be staying up all night to read this one, I have to admit...
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Important Realization
Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, I'm retarded, but I just realized that Aiko calls Inuyasha 'Uncle Dog' lol... Oh, I haven't rated this yet... 10/10, of course.
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Title: Purity 2
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Toga and Sierra's love story is so romantic. Their meeting isn't under the best of circumstances and that only adds to the reality of the fic. This fic is so real! Toga fleeing from an over bearing Sesshoumaru, and Sesshoumaru thinking he knew his son only to found out that there were a few things he didn't. Meeting Sierra's parents and then her birth parents made me feel like I was there, I felt as if I was going through what she went through. I was very happy to find that Sesshy came around in the end with a beautiful display of a true father/son bonding. There is a quote I'd like to tell you but sadly I can't remember it word for word but here goes, it was from and English exam I had years ago, "A truly compelling story takes you through all the emotions one can feel, anger, love, fear ... and in the end the reason why the reader remembers it is because it forced them to feel." I believe your stories are so compelling because they make the readers feel.
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Reviewed By: jessica G. On: July 17, 2005 16:18 CDT
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this was a very great story but hey which one of your stories is'nt. your like the greatest writer ever
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Title: @.@
Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me a wile but i just finished this one and am about to start reading p3.... i rilly love this seriese well i better get started
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who still hasn't bothered to sign in On: July 07, 2005 14:08 CDT
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Hahaha, I just realized this...Nez is like Winry! From FMA! Hahaha. That's not a bad thing, I love Winry. Wish I had a wrench I could beat people up with.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if there were a higher rating than ten, i would give it to you. this fic was great, and sooo original...mostly 'cuz the main characters were your own oc's. i loved it, tho, it took me days to finish. this is the second fic of yours that i have read, purity (1) being the first. i guess i'm a little late getting to your stories seeing as they've been posted for a while, and i've been a member of m.m. since december. but, better late than never. i'm glad i decided to "try" them out. well, i'm off to get lost in purity 3. i can't wait. i just love bad boys!! ^__^
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Title: Stick to Your Guns
Reviewed By: planeshaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This makes two very good stories of yours that I have now read...and I'm certain that I'll manage to get to other parts of this series, too :) I was thoroughly impressed by the blood transfusion idea; while I apparently have different views about the marking concept than you, I love how you stuck to your ideals and made it work!!! The person that I really felt sorry for during the whole story though, was Toga. First it was his father and then his love that were trying to decide what he needed in his life...From my experiences, I would far rather lose my love by an uncontrollable force, than by her choice. But, it all worked out in the end. Again, another very good story.
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Title: FFARG Prologue
Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:28 CDT
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Well you have me intrigued. Toga is a very interesting character, and I like how much he seems to fit in with the rest of the IY cast. He has a very strong voice that is distinctive and I can see the flaws in him that make him a well rounded character. I enjoy your unique descriptive style which is less clinical and more chatty. You have a storyteller's way of setting the scene without having to resort to a list. Also I will admit that I loved some of your dialogue. Some lines had me in stitches especially Toga's denial of InuYasha's influence. This is a great start to the series, you've done a good job of setting the scene, explaining one of the conflicts, and introducing one (if not more) of the major players. Well Done!
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Title: Ii desu.
Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story as well. Quite spiffy. Toga is so adorable. It was rather depressing though, in the middle there. Oh well. It was all ok in the end. XD. Well I had better dash, once i finish the laundry I'm going to start Purity 3. Fun.
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