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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 › » ] | Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 05, 2005 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Boy, have I been waiting for this story to continue! Ryo reminds me of his ole man; Nezumi reminds me of Sango, sort of, mixed with a little bit of Kagome's tenderness. I can not wait to see which direction this story takes. Hot head versus hot head. Ugly duckling turn beautiful swan. Testiness and sexual angst. Lots of possibilities. Makes for an interesting concoction. (Hey, did I spell any of that right?) Thank you, Sueric, for all your wonderful work. I'll be checking in. Roger, Dodger, and Out, Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: da baby beta On: March 05, 2005 16:04 CST
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hmmm... guess neither of them really have realized what they've been sucked into yet... I wonder how long it will take for Ryomaru to start actually communicating and understanding how ovrwhelmed Deirdre feels and I wonder how long it will take her to start really listening to him. Will the girls of the family try to help the romance develop smoothly (aka meddle ^_~)? How long will it take Nez to find out about the rogue demon hunting? Will Ryo learn to cook?? ^_^
| Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:54 CST
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so are you going to start updating this fic regularly cuz i really like this one....actually i really like all of them..lol...well great job keep it up
| Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:53 CST
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*rubs hands together gleefully* Oooh goody...more Ryo torture...although it looks like Nez is taking a few hits too. I wonder if Ryo ever gets the guts to ask her what she wants, will she be honest about it? God I love this story...don't know why. Maybe it's because I'm hooked on Inu & Kag's "little angels"...their depravity has so much potential for entertainment it's addictive. -- Great Chapter and I will eagerly await more!!
| Title: RYO!!!!
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I told you HOW much I adore Ryo and this story?? I cannot stop laughing! Poor clueless Nez has a LONG road ahead of her, doesn't she? She so can't believe that it was his first time...not to say that I blame her. But to find out all this stuff about your best friend, someone you thought you KNEW...that's an adjustment in itself. Let alone all the changes ahead of them in their relationship, all because...he couldn't keep it in his pants and she just wanted ONE night... Ah...the webs we weave...and you weave them BEAUTIFULLY!!! The scene where he brought back dinner was SO cute! I loved seeing their interaction...the proof that they really do have a close and strong friendship to base their relationship off of.
| Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: March 05, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey!!! You have up-dated Purity 3 I am so happy!!! Please keep writing this story it is SOOO good.
| Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 05, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLROTF, gomen, forgot to mention how hysterical them inu-table manners are!!!! Your depictions propel these Yasha-line boys to stratospheric levels o' yumminess!! Doesn't Ryo realize Nezumi's earthiness is such a good fit for him? :)
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:18 CST
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aww poor Ryo, he's so sad. They'll be good together - You'll get them there - after some serious wonderfully emotion filled chapters.. I'm looking forward to the ride!!
| Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 05, 2005 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG,the son assuredly surpasses the father in stubborness!!!!! Then again, both of them do, LOL. What a MESS--does she yet feel the mates' 'pull' yet? Despite the current sitrep, they *do* make an endearing couple. :) Is Ryo going to unbend at least a bit, exhibit some softness to coax his understandably furious mate back?? :)Ohhhhh Sue, you have SO done it again, breathing such life into these marvelous people-er,*characters*, and their setting. I sooooo enjoyed Kagome's interaction--you've written her so incredibly wise; I've always appreciated how your female characters are strong, how they evolve; you're most certainly an asset to your gender!!!! Nezumi/Deidre is another fascinating character who's enjoyable to become acquainted with. :) And as always, arigatou gosemaisu for yet another compelling masterpiece. :)
| Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 03, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhhh...Ryo,Ryo--don't you realize *why* you'd *mated* her?!? Can't you even hug your incensed, traumatized mate?? Poor Nezumi...she has an incredible amount to assimilate in *zero* time. Being careful what one wishes for is ever the wise adage...in hindsight. Yet, he may turn out to be the biggest marshmallow in the family!!! As wild as he is, he's nevertheless compelling. Ohhhh, when had Inuyasha become so wise?? I absolutely melted in my chair upon reading his reactions, words. Kagome, to paraphrase Shippou, "she's SCARY when she's mad!!" Please update this FANTASTIC Saga...yep; once again you've heaved me up and over the cliffie precipice awaiting the next, *Sob* ;)
| Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh geez....Ryo, Ryo, Ryo...you poor stupid baka... I don't know if this is exactly how it works, but it seems to me that Ryo's youkai wouldn't have claimed/chosen Nezumi if they weren't meant to be together. I mean, he didn't have too much trouble keeping things under control with the other ladies. And he seems to honestly care for her (even if young and ignorant enough not to really understand what his heart was telling him). Hmmm. Anyway, it's a really interesting set up! I'm looking forward to seeing where things go from here (I'd say that they couldn't get worse, but that's just NEVER true... LOL!).
| Reviewed By: Pyth On: February 24, 2005 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this fanfic.... seriously, it's such a cool idea dn just amzing and wonderful and fantastic and.... yes. But you have to write more. Now. STOP TORTURING ME. D: Or hurry up and finish Purity 2 so you can write this. I mean, I'm seriously in love with this story. It's such a cool idea, and I love poor Nezumi. :3
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 23, 2005 17:26 CST
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Oi, did that boy get himself into a mess this time. i got to say, i love the family constructed out of purity, much like how i commented in Purity 2, its wondeful. each of the characters being so much like their parents and yet their own person, its great. Ryomaru is definatly InuYasha's child though, no question in my mind about that. i loved InuYasha's reaction though, that was great! hoenstly, woman, i am sincerely awestruck at your talent in writing and creativity. got a question for ya though, just cause i can't seem to figure this one out, how are you phonetically sounding out Ryomaru's name...just cause i can't seem to get a right sound to a Y and O being next to each other. its werid to get out. i dont' know....anywho's, great story and i'm excited to see where you take this after defiance is done! Ja.
| Reviewed By: Deirdre On: February 21, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! She has my name! Yay! I've been reading your stories for awhile now and I hope you know I'm completely addicted. And this one has just sealed it! I love you! I can't wait until you finish Defiance, both for the fact that it rocks and so you can continue this one! Once again, excellent, excellent, excellent work!
| Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 14:13 CST
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you know,m its evil to do this to us. i can't wait til you finish up defiance so you can update this one, love to see what happens to that baka
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