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Title: Intersting
Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely liked this chapter the most. I can't believe that she slipped away without him knowing. He must have been really busy with that phone call. So this is this the last continuation of Purity? I mean, there aren't any other characters that can be followed up on, unless you give them another challenge. But I would read it anyway! Excellent chapter as always!
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai(nsi) On: March 12, 2005 13:07 CST
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Ok, I think Ryo desperately needs some brownie points...Nezumi needs to believe him about being a hanyou. Then someone needs to hit ryo on the back of the head with a wrentch...and so on.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 12, 2005 11:49 CST
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Ryo is not winning any points for himself. But at least now see has seen his human side and that can add more proof to his story of being mated... but she'll just try to kill him outright for being such a bakakuso
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Title: dang...automatic un-logger...I was signed in...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 12, 2005 11:12 CST
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Favorite comment for today: "Legs or boobs...Kami, what a choice..." LMAO!!! --- Oh. My. Goodness. Ryo just called himself her "mate"...in front of a hall full of people...while dragging her off. *falls off chair* Oh, he is sooooooo going to catch it over that one!! Can't wait--ROFLMAO!! Love it!!
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 12, 2005 11:07 CST
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*giggles* Oh my ... this has got to be one of my favorite stories thus far! I LOVE Nezumi! She seems like the kind of girl that would smack Ryo on the back of his head when he was being stupid - *snicker* - I can relate so very much to her!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, Kichiro REALLY fuched up this time. Bad boy! Why I adda. . . . . . . . . . . . Well. . . I have to say. . . they DO make a good couple. .. . . Oh, there I go again. . . *dramatic sigh* I'm such a romance freak. I guess it runs in my blood. . . .or at least. . . . MY actual blood. Oh well, who cares about me? Love the chapter!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Not at all what I was expecting, but not in a bad way. I can't wait to see how it ends...
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Reviewed By: DaNi_CHaN [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just luuuuuuuuuuuuv your stories... can i say anything else? the way you make things unfold is incredible!!! can't wait to see where this one is going... ^-^
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 13:21 CST
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Okay ... the paper could wait for 4 chapters. I must say this has the beginnings of a *really* amusing story!!! I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Deirdre On: March 09, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to agree with tinkerbell-nsi here. Poor Nez. So out of place with the girly-girls. I can't wait to see how the rest of this is going to turn out. Ryo has a lot of kissing up to do!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 06:01 CST
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my goshers Sue, you've done it again! you've made me fall in love with another one of your stories, and now I shall have to read it until its finished, and has a sequel :P, then read that xD after being on MM for over a year, I shall have to say that you are by far my most favorite author **gives her a Inuyasha plushie donned in a sequin version of his clothes(SHINY XD)** I can't wait for more in this story, I see some good and bad times ahead. . . and a twist of some sort :P you never fail to please
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Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 05, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! How funny!!! The situtations are incredible, and I can't wait for more...Thanks again and again for what you give us to read....You ARE a talent to behold!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-nsi On: March 05, 2005 19:40 CST
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These two sound almost like "The Honeymooners" to me, or Fred and Wilma. I wish they would just be honest with each other. I think it was kind of mean of Sierra and Gin to make Nez go out to lunch someplace she was obviously not comfortable with. I'm sure they weren't trying to be mean but still, they should have thought it out more. So far, I feel pretty sorry for her.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:37 CST
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Okay, I may feel like castrating Inu-Yasha's boys right about now (good gods....) but I have to admit, the banter is pretty funny and it's hilarious when Toga is added as well! Poor Nezumi. I'd be pissed too!
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:23 CST
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Oh boy...these two definitely have a long road ahead of them. I was prepared to feel for Nezumi, given that she had NO clue what she let herself in for, but I'm finding myself feeling for Ryo, too. They both just seem so in over their heads. Poor kids! This strikes me as being very similar to teens who find themselves pregnant, you know? It's that same sort of situation where they don't fully understand the consequences of their actions until it's too late, and now they have to do a lot of growing up in a short period of time. Whoo... Can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!
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