| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 14, 2005 15:59 CST
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I am curious - is Nez unsure of herself or Ryo? If it is herself then is it because of her childhood with her father? Is it something that is going to be gone over later in the story? I must say I am curious. When Ryo talks about never having to explain anything to her - I can understand that because she seems to know and understand him ... but I get the feeling he is not as aware of her and the internal conflict she is going through.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 14, 2005 15:57 CST
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Okay, these two drive me crazy. They take one step forward and two steps back. When are they ever gonna talk out their issues. I think they have the potential to be the cutest couple yet.
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Reviewed By: foamyfanpa15010 On: March 14, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm, things are heating up... :o) I wonder if Ryo knows what he's gotten himself into...? lol I just love your stories, they're so well written. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: Suze (too lazy to sign in) On: March 14, 2005 14:08 CST
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O.O You scared me for a second there...I thought they might end up having sex on Ryo's human night and we all know what that leads to! Actually...um...I'm assuming that his parents went over the hanyou birds and birds with him - they did, didn't they? And yes, crawling men are VERY sexy. :)
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Title: Purity 3: Forever
Reviewed By: LadyMoonHawke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following along avidly since Chronicles (sorry to take so long to say something) and to be franks, I'm enjoying your Inuyasha fic very much. I'm very sorry to hear you got so much flak over Metamorphosis. What made it different also made it special, and I found myself realy liking it by the end. I'm getting quite a kick out of the Purity spin-offs as well. Poor Ryo's in quite a bind, isn't he? And the mutual lack of communication skills between himself and Nezumi seems to be leading up to a marvelous comedy of errors, much different in tone than the heartache and angst of Purity 2. Anyway, I just want to say don't give up, even if it seems like all the reviewers are against you. It's YOUR plot. Do it YOUR way.
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: March 13, 2005 14:15 CST
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okay. i know this has NOTHING to do with purity or your fanfics..but, i just finished watching ep. 132, and in it, Miroku tells Sango that he never thought of loving her, but just thought of them as partners and friends. but then he says that he wants to live with her and for her to bear his child. so is he saying that he only wants Sango so he could continue his family line, and that was the only reason? for heirs? and then sango goes on to ask if he'll ever cheat on her. and he doesnt answer. so, miroku doesnt have any feelings whatsoever towards Sango than just being friends, and a physical attraction? i thought Miroku would have fallen in love with her by now..so, my question is, does miroku ever fall in love with sango? Other than having an attractiveness towards her body? ~~Email: Holyhipporider@hotmail.com
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Title: da baby beta
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 12:10 CST
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O.O d-e-a-d pup. LOL. I love Nez, she has so much spunk and Ryo... how can one not love his badness? Wonder how Ryo will smooth over this act of idiocy? I don't think Nez is going to be very happy with him at all, that I don't ^_~
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 01:47 CST
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One of your previous reviewers mentioned something similar, but I was thinking about how Ryo could possibly not remember the "mating" (drunkeness aside). The only idea I could come up with is that his youkai took over - similar to what happened to IY when Tessaiga was broken. His idiotic human side might not know what he wanted, but his youkai did! LOL Am I close? Would you tell me if I was?? Anyhew...another awesome chappie. Poor, poor Nez...chauvanistic Japanese males on one side, overbearing hanyous on the other. And stuck in a skimpy dress and killer high heels to boot! Lordy... Lastly, I wish you wouldn't hate Meta so much. ::cries:: I love that story! I'm sorry that so many jerks ruined it for you.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 12, 2005 22:34 CST
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I really, really, like this story. The characters seem so real. Looks like there is going to be some kind of heated discussion or nondiscussion. Wonder what Ryos' going to think about the 'outfit', not to mention how good it looks on Nezumi. Can not even guess what Nezumi is going to think about the new 'look'. I think these two are perfect for each other. Never a boring moment. (Probably said that before, but it's how I feel.) I hope your enthusiasm stays high throughout this story. You have done such an outstanding job so far. If you have any negative jerk reviewers, let me know, and I will use my anime frying pan on them. Thank you for all of your sharing. Cynbad146
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Title: ouch!
Reviewed By: FUDGE On: March 12, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was intense how about you update really soon. Pleaaase! I can't wait to see what happens next at the party. Keep up the great job.KAREN
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to drop a simple, but true "You're stories are great" review. ^_^ Cheesy I'm sure, but from my POV, it's the honest truth. I've read just about all your IY fics and love them all. I finally remembered (a.k.a. smacked myself) to give proper due respects to the creator of such a wonderful 'series' of sorts. The alternative for Sierra's marking was well thought of. Just when I think I see where you're going with a story, it heads off somewhere else which turns out to be far more enjoyable than the version I'd thought it might be. Did that even make sense? LOL Ok, well once again, you write beautifully and I can only hope to gain such a following as you have. I'm sure I don't need to tell you to keep up the good work :)
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Title: ?????
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, I like all of your stories and as always, each one is so original. This one is so funny and it is nice to see how this relationship is going to develop. I read that you wished " Metamorphosis" 'is just something you wished would die' is how you put it and I was a bit curious is why you felt that way? I felt that the story was one of the best I have read on the forum and I hope that doesn't upset you. I know you were upset with the flack you got about people wanting a "lemon". However, just about ANYONE can write a lemon and you dont need to have a lemon for it to be a good story. I felt that Metamorphosis showed me a very compasionate side of Kagome and a funny side of Inuyasha. In fact it was Metamorphosis that enchoraged me to read your other stories besides Chronicles. So although you want it to die, I am glad that you gave Metamorphosis life!! Keep writing and be encouraged. Just one of your avid readers. Joyce
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:36 CST
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If i was Nezumi i would have faked sick. Jeez that desciption of the dress! *shivers* i hate dresses. And yyou made it sound like it stopped right at her butt! I but Ryo's going to pass out when he sees her in it. Haha! That'd be great! I can't wait for other people to actually see what she looks like under all the baggy clothes. She kinda reminds me of myself. I wear baggy clothes all the time and usually overalls on the weekend. (my work doesn't "recomend" it's emploies to wear overalls. Doesn't make them look professional, or something.) Like you really needed to know that. hmm... maybe i should become a mechanic so i could wear what i want... Anywho great chapter! Can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:05 CST
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*smacks head* Damn...Ryo has absolutely no tact, does he? *laughs* I think I'm just shell-shocked from the switch from Toga-main to Ryo-main. Oof, what a difference. I reinterate...poor Nez.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 12, 2005 15:06 CST
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How embarassing to be so uncomfortable at a party and have the jealous (and loud) show up to make things worse. Makes me groan just thinking about it. These two have a long way to go. Sorry to hear Metamorphosis is still troubling you. I enjoyed it (though Chronicles is my favorite too). All your stories have been beautiful and I've enjoyed every chapter!
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