| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I just bawled my eyes out!!!
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Title: Purity 3: Forever
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sueric, Go and check your email at gmail I sent you something to cheer you up after reading your reason for removing your stories off of AFF.NET. I'm sorry about what happened to you and I don't get to read or review the stories too often and I really hope I didn't hurt your feelings or make you sad in any way. I really liked this chapter and I felt so bad for Nez. I hope Ryo can bring her some happiness in the next chapter and pooh on her dad for not taking the time to really explain to her what was going on or for being there for each other! Every one deserves the chance to say goodbye or it leaves them wanting for more or feeling unfinished in some way. Until next time keep up the marvelous work. GgBg
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad! You made me cry again, Sue! Now my eyes are all red and puffy and I have to go to work! lol Ryo is so sweet, he knew exactly what to do and say. Hope you have a wonderful Easter. God Bless!
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Title: Purity 3
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, unexpected depths, just like his dad. Just Maybe Ogres aren't the only ones like onions and parfaits. Damn, I'm falling as hard for these kids as I did for Ryo's parants. It makes me want to put my arms around them and hold them tight, although if I did, I'm sure my arms would be in bloody ribbons cause they don't know me, but damn, I wish I could. Chapters like this make me feel so good, is it suprising that I want more? Happy Easter to you and your family, Sue, and Happy Easter to all those in your wonderful Purity Universe.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: March 25, 2005 15:12 CST
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hey great chapter! man i feel so sorry for Nez shes been through alot. thanks for the great chapter. i hope you and your family has a happy Easter. Laura
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Reviewed By: lil_penguin On: March 25, 2005 15:04 CST
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*sobbing* That was so SAD!! I hate sad stories, but I always read them. I must be a glutton for punishment. Lol, anyway, I love Purity, the whole series. I can't wait for more of Ryo and Nez's story. They are probably my favorite couple so far. Great job with this, darlin'. -Amanda
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Title: Good Chapter
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. It was a great view into Nez's past. It really explains a lot about her character. This is one of the ways you make your OCs more than most. You given them a past and motivation instead of just having them exist. Great job. I can't wait to read the next one. I can't wait until Monday's posting.
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Title: Tear
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Sueric...you finally did it, you finally made me cry lol. Sihnzen, there is nothing wrong with a male liking a little romance, it actually gives you a better quality...Sueric, quick question: how does Mrs. Higurashi support Kagome and Souta? Cause I never heard anything of if she works or anything like that. Just curious.
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Title: Chap 16
Reviewed By: Deep Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 thanks, I was waiting all day, I've been so bored today, had to work! 2. excellent chapter, no wonder she doesn't like being girly! 3.Ryo, so confused, not used to really being tender with women, doesn't know how to treat and react to this special one good job
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Title: Ch.16 *grabbing the tissues again*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 14:10 CST
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Poor, poor Diedre. How utterly awful. Not only watching her mother die, but to believe deep down that she was at fault is so sad. I be Ryo feels like an ass now for taking advantage of her aversion to blood and for contemplating using it again to get another kiss. He'll never use that again...I can also see him getting quite gung-ho about stopping anyone else from upsetting her that way. At least she finally let it out. Maybe she will be able to discuss her feelings about her mother's death and get a better perspective on it. One can but hope. -- Oh, and Happy Easter to you too! :)
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: March 25, 2005 13:52 CST
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What a lovely tender moment. It was so sad-- the flashback into Nez's childhood. That whole scene-- It played out like an episode of Rescue 911 (If You Remember that show) Wow. very emotional. Very good. Loves it. Well I suppose it's time for me to head to my dad's and see if my brother has destoryed the house yet. (The dad took off on a golfing trip the day after we got back from Mexico and he left the brother the house to himself.. pretty sure he's been having non-stop parties.) More than likely we will be going shopping so he can replace the things that he has broken, haha. Ah, but yes, have a happy easter! --Aitu
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Title: Ch. 15
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 13:48 CST
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Hehe...I love the proverbial bottomless-pit of the Hanyou's stomach. -- Nez is still struggling to reconcile Ryo being underfoot all the time. And she's deluding herself about how much she liked 'sleeping' on him. She makes too much of her habit of putting things out of her mind. Funny thing about trying to forget things...they don't stay forgotten. Eventually she's going to have to deal with her feelings for Ryo because they aren't going to go away. Especially since they were there all along. "Love is the leap that won't be denied." She's spent so long loving him from afar, so to speak, and now that he's skipped the bridge where she might have seen him coming and landed right next to her, she doesn't know what to do. It happened all too fast. His nature makes it easy to accept the thought of 'mate' but she's still unbelieving. "...after being with all those other women, how can he tell me this is any different?" Poor confused darling.
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Title: NEHA!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: March 25, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I kill the flamers? Can I?! Five minutes and a screwdriver, that's all I ask... Why would someone complain about a Inu/Kag, that's what it's supposed to be... the people with Nar/Kag are the ones who need to roasted... Or the Rin/Nar AHHH! My eyes! That was wrong... Keep writing, and if you see a flamer, I'll roast them up nice and toasty for you.
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Title: ...Sob...
Reviewed By: Inca On: March 25, 2005 13:15 CST
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Wow...I know just how she feels... Loseing your mother at a young age is devestating...thinking your the cause of it is enough to kill you. I'm glad she made it. Maybe Ryo will help. He'd better. And get those voices in his head checked out, they're smarter than he is. Currently...
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: March 25, 2005 13:05 CST
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::sigh:: Poor Nez...that's so freakin' sad. And this chapter is simply amazing. It explains so much about Nez and why she is the way she is. Poor Nez...I just want to hug her. I can't imagine the horror of seeing a parent die, carrying around misplaced guilt, never even getting to say a proper goodbye. I'm so happy that Ryo managed to avoid any bakaness (well...aside from the doll reaction!) and be there for her. Hmm. I wonder if he'll take her Texas to find her mom's grave...or something similar to help her have closure. Hmmm. ::shakes head:: Poor, poor Nez...
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