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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 01:47 EST
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Heh, the protection code I got this time was 'SHEZ.' Which I will pronounce as 'GEEZ'. Hm... I sense a bit of irony there. Perhaps the system is telling me too shut up already? ^-^ Anyways, as I was saying, if Youko appears, but doesn't meet Kagome... I know! Perhaps he is after something that the Bastard has, and he, with his group of bandits, goes after it, and during the confusion, Hiei and Kagome escape. Though really, that's up to you, as it's your story. As I was saying before that thought, if Youko came but didn't meet Kagome, perhaps he'd be doing business with that Bastard, or something... hm... the possibilities of what is going to happen is vast. So vast in fact, it makes me want to continue exclaiming how vast it is. *nods* Yep, pretty vast. 'Vast'... what an odd word. Okay, now, off of my random 'vast' streak, and onto your story. This chapter... seemed more like it was there to appease your fans than anything, but I think I saw something begin to build between Ryuji and Hiei. Perhaps, Hiei will use Ryuji to help him in his goal of killing Masakazu, though I doubt that. Maybe a temporary alliance of sorts? Or perhaps, what I saw was tension. Though really, as I doubt Ryuji reported the fact Hiei had escaped, perhaps... the possibilities are so va-*is muffled by an annoyed muse, who had hung around after helping with the last chapter*... Muse: Don't worry, she'll shut up now. *thud is heard* She'll leave a review next chapter!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 01:38 EST
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Next chapter's up! Not 5 minutes ago. Thank you, thank you. Torture methods are fun to ponder whilst in class, or just while generally doing nothing... mentally. Hiei would use a few? I'm glad! Though I think boiling oil would do as well. ^-^ Er... heh, so that Bastard comes mostly from your co-author's twisted mind? Hm, tell him, "Rabid shall one day hunt down MasaKazu kill him, then feed the remainder of his twisted body to Ryuji." Or, if he's reading these reviews, or not, I can't really tell, you have no need to tell him. This chapter, made me hit my head. For some odd reason, I was thinking Kagome and Hiei were in the same room, thus they would be able to talk... and it just became evident to me that they aren't. Blame it on the upcoming tests, projects, and other fun stuff life enjoys throwing at me. Yes, Hiei has always struck me as curious. Truthfully, I think he's still a kid even though he's gone through so much... 'cause whenever he's with Yusuke, Kurama, and Kuwabara he seems nearly anything but 'cold' at times. Though that could just be me... I'm good at labeling things like that, ne? After all, I am Rabid, the now unsleep-deprived writer... *falls asleep* Heh, okay, so I am sleep-deprived. But not as much. Youko... dunno, I don't think he should see Kagome. Knowing him, in all his horny, spirit fox glory, he might just reciprocate on what the others have done, or try, and freak out Kagome. Though it would be interesting, as he would meet up with either Hiei or
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:59 EST
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Hm... today it shall be... fire. Yes, fire. He's going to be burned to death, and have his limbs all cut off at the same time. Also, prior to his being burned, he'll have been soaked in gasoline, and splashed with holy water. I like this one... heh, I'm not freaking anybody out, ne?
| Reviewed By: Rabid is not logged in at the moment, leave a message after the beep On: April 01, 2005 18:48 EST
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And today's suggestion! Hm... Shabopo's idea is awesome... but here is the next death of him: He is tied up in an all you can eat buffet or... poptarts. Hiei gets to stand over him and whip him so he doesn't stop eating the cardboard(in my opinion) and soon explodes or... dies of dehydration. I think my death suggestions have been more comical and degrading than actually scary lately... ah well! ^-^ Shabopo is right, human's are social creatures, and even if they try not too, will attempt to talk to someone, even themselves if no one else will listen. Even though Hiei might not respond, she'll probably talk to him, and sooner or later he'll give in. Or something. I dunno... ah well, Shabopo's managed to hit it deeper than I did today... but that's only for now. And the fact I've been staying up late finishing reports and such lately... *latches with her teeth onto word limit just because she can*
| Title: O_o!!!!!!?????
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 22:04 EST
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I'm hocked! I can't stop reading it any more. And I guess it's not THAT bad. I mean... hiei's cute. He doesn't even like her yet and he's still trying to save her! How cute! Why can't Hiei like me and be my boyfriend? Anyway... update soon!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 20:50 EST
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Ugh. I have to verify the review four times before mm.org accepts the spam code! If it stops working for me, I'll be upset. [stupid rate limit!] Ryuji considers Hiei a ticking bomb, soon-to-be exploding... And yet he'd still like to be given him? The guy has some consistency issues to work out. Oh, I'm now totally freaking out and thinking she's going to be impregnated by those creeps. Especially as any potential purifying of her body her powers might attempt would be stifled by those bracelets! One thing to consider... Kagome has a pretty high pain tolerance; she didn't scream or cry when Mistress Centipede ripped the shikon no tama- as well as a huge hunk of flesh- out of her side, and that was the first time we know of that she was ever really hurt. So I'm thinking her ability to withhold screams is going to be coming back to her; obviously rape and sexual abuse is a very different think from general violence, but once the initial shock passes, she'll be too stubborn to scream much. She grumbles, but... she keeps her composure well, except in regards to her temper, which I assume will be flaring at some point. At the same time, healings or no, if she goes through the same amount of physical abuse constantly, her body will give out. I'm thinking Masakazu knows that... and it might be worse to just sit in a cage, never knowing when you'll be taken again- tomorrow or a week. Anticipation makes things even worse.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, rabidfangirl101's death-suggestions are interesting. I personally recommend castration followed soon after by a meticulous flaying off of his skin, whin then would be treated to a hydrochloric acid massage... Afterwards, I'd kick him in the shins. repeatedly. [nod] I have to say- Rabidfangirl's reviews always spur my thoughts... keh, it's a cycle. [grin] her review(s) are longer here, but I think I've got her beat on ff.net...! not that it's a competition, it just is something that amuses me. Something add to the idea of the two just waiting silently, dreading for the next appearance of their abusers... enough isolation can literally drive someone insane; humans are rather social animals, frankly, and Kagome is especially so. There's got to be a point where she'd say something... anything... to break the silence. When there is silence, she is trapped with her own thoughts, spiraling downwards, her bitterness and depression steadily growing. She might even fear losing her own sanity, and talking just to help keep her mind, to remind herself she's human, an intelligent being, and not just some body to be used. An attempt, perhaps, to salvage her humanity? [blink] A thought just occurred to me- he's 15, right? How old is Kagome in the fic? I don't recall you mentioning it, but that be due to my innate blondeness showing through. It's a little odd to consider her the older person, perhaps an adult...I'm rather eager to see how he gets around the bindings...
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 19:15 EST
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Today's murder of him! ^-^ I'm beginning to wonder at my own sanity... this one is far more sadistic than the last. Force him to do all the homework I gained today. Yes, much scarier. The other idea I had involved burning ropes, vegetable oil, and target practice. I hope I'm not freaking you out with this... *laughs nervously*
| Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 31, 2005 01:06 EST
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Wow, poor Kagome. Please update real soon. Woner how they will get out of there?
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:32 EST
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Sorry about earlier, had some emotional problems. I really have to agree with Shadopo on all of her thoughts. I'm very curious, does Hiei hate the human race because of Kagome's misfortune in his mind? I mean, it could happen if he had the Jagan eye implanted and made him a little insane and thought he had a chance to rule and dominate the Human World. I know I would with such power. That also brings the other thing I've been wondering about, what happens when Kagome and Hiei are alone behind thoughs bars of the cage? Do they talk to each other or even comfort each other? Do they plan of their escape? And what of that dragon demon? Is he going to help out? So many questions yet little answers. I'm getting tired, so I'll see ya later... Ja! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:07 EST
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O.O *just read her own review* I now believe I have an alter-ego who surfaced without me knowing... O.O *is scared* I think you had better lock that Bastard up tight until the fic is over... my alter-ego might just find a way to carry out those threats... O.O
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:05 EST
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THe word limit has now been added to my hit list, along with the Bastard, Ryuji, and other various people. Yes... *cackled evily* Anyways, very intense chapter, you can probably gadge how intense it was by my inability to focus on anything other than killing that Bastard. Once again, I am in awe of your writing skills... and ready to murder, maim, or otherwise lethally injure that Bastard. eh... I used up all my time thinking of a way too kill him... heh, 'till next time! ^-^ *think murderous thoughts about that Bastard*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:01 EST
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Now I'm all for Youko coming in and tearing them apart for being such bastards. The lemon sequence... you should have labeled it 'Here begins Kagome's torture, the rape upon an altar' or something... that wasn't a lemon. I'm riled up now and want to hunt down that bastard and RIP OUT HIS THROAT. No... that would be to quick... Hm, let's see, I'd borrow Kurama's powers, or just use my authoress abilities, and string him up in vines, tight, butt-naked. Then, I'd have the vines slowly tighten, and not stop, slowly pulling him apart, and then I'd let Hiei in the same room, with a rusty dagger as his only weapon, unwarded though. Then I'd catch it all on tape. *nods* Now, I just need to convince Kurama to help me, get a rusty dagger, find Hiei, no need to convince him, and rent a room. I'd also give Hiei a whip... but that's more for Ryuji than that Bastard. Kagome's revenge... Same scenario, same rusty dagger, only imagine him being slowly purified. *evil grin* A family member walked in as I was writing that... they left quickly when I threatened to tear out their throat... I only just realized I did threaten them. Heh, I think, you have an amazing knack for creating villains who piss me off to no end. Maybe... I'll think up a new way to kill him each day. Yes, that's what I'll do. *nods firmly, than settles down in wait for your story to end so she can murder the sick bastard anyway she wants* It doesn't matter if he dies... I'll revive him. then kill him, then revive him, then | Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 23:51 EST
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*Eyes glowing red* Bastard... *growl* Holly: *sweatdrop* Sorry about her, she isn't ready to talk yet. Kinda pissed off but she'll get over it... eventually. Anyway, I'm taking charge for awhile since she is depressed/ticked off at the moment. She thinks Hiei better kill all the evil bastards before she does it herself. Poor human girl *bonk* OW! Okay, jeez... Poor Kagome, how much are you going to skip since it's going to be six months while she's in Makai? It would be make sense to skip some of it. Please update soon! *Whispers* For all of our sakes... *BONK, BOOM, CRASH* cpg: WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT YOUR ATTITUDE?!?!? *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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